ArHi SS-A Trespassing Memory*Completed*TY NOTE.pg16

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jisa

@jisa

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

this was so amazing...
read it in one go...!!!!
just...WOW..!!!

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Tithi

@Tirtharupa

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Awesome story.
Very beautifully describe the situations.

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Tapdance

@Tapdance

Rocker

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

A sweet ending, like the way they met, a coincidence!

Sorry for the late comment, had my exams going on!

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

WHY DID NO ONE TELL ME ABOUT THIS? :O

*reading now*

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lOVENI

@lOVENI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

This the first time i am reading something written by you.

It is just fabulous. I wonder why they aren't many likes.

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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

loved this whole ss...
concept was different and beautiful..
u should write more ss..

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zarnan

@ZARNAN

Beginner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

awww...it was so beautiful and intense...loved it

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Deepa jha

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Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Bookmarking! Will read in next 2 days of time😊

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

This one I missed as well. One of my favourite story is Cherished Wounds and it is also centred around a soldier Arnav and a strong Kushi. However you went beyond that by bringing in the element of the cross border trespassers, the innocent and not so innocent bystanders that are caught up in these situations. I love the maturity of your characters and their weaknesses and strengths. I love the chapter about the brother finding closure after his torturous ordeal and of course Arhi's second chance. I am so glad that they grasped this second chance right away as 9 years is a long time to think about someone and know how you feel about them.