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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Awesome update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Its outstanding update dear. ..
All parts n scene expressed vry beautifully. ...
Virman love care leg pulling. ..everything we enjoyed once again. .
Love virika n anjli part alsi..
Yhe way jeevika teas its awsm...
Maya again...
Try to update soon. ..
Thanks alot for pm dea. .
Keep rocking
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
"Maya tum yaha?" Manvi asks in shock. All the women of vadhera family stared at the entrance of the mansion. They were all shocked to see maya . the last time they had seen her was before virat and manvis wedding and even then she was arrested for faking a pregnancy , claiming the baby is virats and for sabatoging virat and manvis wedding. Manvi felt bursts of anger build inside her seeing the devil she had hated for almost stealing her love. What was she doing here now? Manvi thought. "Maya! Get out! Leave now!" She screams with all her lungs. Maya smirks. "Haha chill manvi I'm.over your husband and don't worry I haven't come to disturb this peice of shit either" Maya says pointing at manvis baby bump. Manvi wanted to strangle her . "kutti nikal yaha sa! Teri itni okat ? Tu vadhera mansion mein ghus ka vadhera khandan ki bahu or varis sa ESA baat kerni ki itni himmat? Ek call or tu phir sa 5 saal ka liya jail me " manvi yells at her staring right into her eyes. Maya had an unaffected expression. "Oh shut up gao sa hawali mein kya agae tu tere toh per Ur ga! Vesa bhi I'm not here to talk to you. Virat sa kaam ha " Maya says and walks towards the stairs. "Ruk jao Maya!" Swamini bua screams. Maya stops and turns around. "Aj humara ghar pa dawat ha. Mera number le lo and call me tomorrow then tell me what you want" swamini bua says. Maya was unconvinced. "No I need to meet virat now!" Maya says with a proud expression.
"Only 5 minutes! Chalo mere sath" manvi says and walks towards the stairs. "Lekin manu!" Jeevika said. "Dii please I know what I'm doing . mehman ate hi honge app sub KO bithao mein ati ho " she says and gestures Maya to follow her. Manvi walks toward her room and knocks on the door. She then opens it slightly popping her face inside making sure virat isn't shirtless or something. "Hey babes? Kya huwa? Knock kyew kiya?" Virat says as he was sitting on the sofa with his guitar. "Umm virat tum sa Maya mil na ae ha " she says and opens the door completely exposing maya too virat. Virat was speechless and just stared at both of the women. Nothing was odder than your pregnant wife brining in the woman who sabatoged your wedding and was your ex girlfriend to your and your wife's bedroom.
"Aa manvi mein.tum sa akela baat ker sakta hoon?" virat says calmly. Manvi nods and gestures Maya to wait outside the door. Manvi closes the door and locks it and walks towards virat hoping she won't get yelled at. "Is this some kind of joke? And you should be. Strangling her not bringing her to our room!" Virat says in anger but still whispered. "Tumhe kya lagata ha? Mjha yeh sub Passand ha? Mera bas chale mein iska 100 baar murder kerdo. Lekin she was after me ka tum sa baat kerni ha or else she won't go and ghar mein mehman aa chuke ha we can't create a scene" manvi says. Virat looks at her and sighs. "Fine whatever bulao use ander" virat says. Manvi smiles at virat and goes to open the door.
Maya walks in. Manvi noticed her outfit. She was wearing a short navy blue dress that was strapless and her cleavage was obvious. "Aa Maya?" Manvi asks. Maya looks at manvi "kya?" Maya replies. "Did you just come from a strip club? s**t!" Manvi says and Maya looks at her in shock. Virat starts laughing. "Haha Manvi idhar ao mere pass" he says and gestures manvi to sit next to him. Maya was on one sofa and virat was on one and manvi was sitting on virats sofa. "Bolo kya kaam ha?" Virat asks decently. Maya looks at manvi "aa virat could we talk alone?" Maya asks and manvi right away stands up and heads for the door. "Manvi roko. Maya Jo bolna ha manvi ka samne bolo" virat says. Manvi smiles "virat its OK I trust you. And vese bhi I need too go to my own baby shower" she says and leaves. Maya smiles seeing manvi leavga
Virat noticed her . "dant ander ker or batao kya ha?' He says rudley this time. Maya folds her legs in Cris cross. " virat I need you to drop all the charges against me. I got out of jail a year ago but I can't get a job! I can't get married ! Nothing! Please even my drivers license has expired and I can't renew it. Please sighn this and drop all the criminal charges on me" Maya says and takes out a contract from her bag n places it on the coffee table. Virat looks at the document and flips a few pages. "What you did is unforgivable! Lekin phir mein socho ga or kal tak tumhe jawab doonga. UB tum ja sakti ho" he says and throws the document on his writing table. Maya makes a sad face "virat what I did was because I loved you. I wanted you to marry me not manvi isi liya tumhari shaddi berbad kerne ki koshis ki". Virat laughs at her" if you really loved Me you would have been happy to see me happy with manvi" .he said . Maya made lazy pout "mera pyar itna kamzor nhi ka tumhe kissi or ka sath hone deti". She said. Virat stood up from his chair. " hogaya? Now leave! Tumhara pyar, tumhari bullshit batao ka liya mere PaSS time nhi ha. " he said. Maya stood up and walked out of the room. Virat roled his eyes and gazed at the document Maya asked to sighn. He looks at it in anger and throws it on the floor n steps on it in anger.
Downstairs:
Maya quietly swished through all the guests and left. Manvi noticed her leaving n she was releived. "OK OK everyone we will play a game" jeevika says. All the ladies look at jeevika. "Basically hum bera sa circle banae ga and pillow passing khelenge lekin if you have the pillow when the music stops you can ask manvi anything ! About the baby , about her pregnancy experience, about virat! Anything! If you Like her response you give her a green sticker and if you don't you give her a red sticker. Phir end mein we will count manvis stickers and if majority red toh saza or majority green toh Maza!" She says and makes everyone sit in a circle and makes manvi sit in the center. They start passing the pillow and it stops when faika , manvis college freind has the pillow. "Poocho faika" jeevika says. Manvi smiles. " umm how hard is it having twins? " she asks. Manvi smiles " double sickness! Double weight! Double diapers lekin double khushi bhi!" She says with a smile. "So faika green or red?" Jeevika asks as she takes a sip from her pink lemonade. "Green!" Faika says. Manvi screams in excitement and everyone looks at her as if she has lost it. " haha OK start the music " jeevika says and everyone starts passing the pillows again and the music stops At anjali. Manvi and jeevika smile looking at her innocence. "Pocho beta" jeevika says. Anjali gets up from her seat and walks towards manvi and sits on her lap. "Choti mama app babies ka baad mjha toh nhi bhoolo gi na?" She asks with a sad face. Manvi smiles and kisses anjali checks " koi upni pehli beri beti KO bhool ta ha?" Manvi says and hugs anjali. "Choti mama I love you" anjali says . manvi has tears in her eyes "I love you too" manvi says .
"And I love all of you" virat says from the staircase and all the girls scream and run after him. "Oh Baap re" he yells and runs for his life. "Bhagao is KO yahan sa " jeevika screams. "Haha virat!!!!" Manvi laughs.
Virat runs from the chasing mob and locks himself in his room. All the girls come back and gather around manvi . "oo continue" jeevika says. And plays the music. The music stops on aperna , virens friend's wife. "Manvi ji jub app KO or virat bhai KO twins ka pata chala app dono ka reactions?" She asks. Manvi smiles remembering that day. "At first we thought we had lost our baby again because the doctor screamed but then she said there were two! For a second we didn't get what she meant then she was like they are twins and we were speechless!! Virat was thanking Me again and again . he started to cry." Manvi says with a tear in her eyes. They keep playing till everyone is out and manvi has majority green stickers.
"OK manvi now time for your surprise then " jeevika says and blind folds manvi. Everyone takes manvi to another room.
Manvi hears babies laughing and cute music. Around the room. "Dii app mjha kaha le ae ha" she says and takes off her blind fold. Manvi sees a babies room with two cribs and so many toys. "Wow di? This is my surprise?" Manvi asks with eyes full of joy. "Haan many mene or virat na mil ka yeh room sajaya. Us din hum na tujh sa jhoot bola ka baby ka room delivery ka baad banae ga, babies ka gender pata chale ka baad. But virat sa raha nhi gaya or us na room bana diya babies ka liya or ESA colors use kiya Jo both girl and boy ka room ka liya sahi ha. Manvi has a huge smile and hugs jeevika but her baby bump comes in between and they start laughing.
In the lounge:
Manvi was sitting on the sofa And all the ladies were gathered around her.
Jeevika goes on the little stage.
" suniya dosto aj mein app logo KO flash forward lejati ho. Jub manvi ka 2 chote chote angels is duniya mein ajate ha". She says with a huge smile and leaves.
After a while she comes back dressed as manvi and two baby dolls in her hand. Their was sounds of babies crying on the background.
"AAA beta chup hojao please kyew upne Baap ki tera gala phar raha ho?" Jeevika says to the baby doll. Just then viren walks in dressed as virat with a guitar. "Kya huwa kyew dant raha ho mere bete KO tum ? Derfutiya?" He says and manvi laughs at virens acting. She remembers virat and gets sad he isn't seeing this. Just then virat comes and sits next to manvi. Manvi has a huge smile and holds his hand. They both look at the skit.
"Virat shut up yeh sub tumhari galti ha!" Jeevika screams. Viren looks at her in anger. "Kya kyew meri galti kyew?" He says .
"Is pa tere khaternak genes ka asar huwa ha . Teri Tara gala phar phar ka gane ki koshis keraha ha rotha hi rehta ha. " jeevika says.
"Yar manvi baby ha roe ga nhi toh kya kere ga mjha do?" He says and takes the baby and the baby stops crying but then the other baby starts crying now. "Uff ab yeh roh pera" jeevika says. Then the other starts crying too. Both of the babies were crying. Jeevika made an annoyed expression. "Uff dono roh raha ha ! Virat yeh bhi tumhari galti ha! I hate you chep!' Jeevika screams. Viren makes a shocked expression. " era Mani is mein meri galti kese?" He asks with a puppy dog face. "Twins! Twins ! Kis na kaha tha twins ka tumhe! Ek ek ker ka bache nhi ho sakte tha? Ek sath 2 2?" Jeevika yelled and viren closed his ears. "Chup kero! Tum hi mere peeche Peri thi ka kero kero. Kerliya UB mil ga tumhe bache UB kyew chila rahi ho?!" Viren yells. Jeevika takes the baby from his hand. "Haan bola tha mena! Lekin ek baby chaya tha mjhA ! " she says .
"Toh ek teer pa 2 nishana laga liya na. UB zindagi bher ki chutti" viren says and smiles with a mischevious look. And jeevika hits him hard in the stomach and viren falls.
Virat and manvi look at each other in shock.
Everyone starts clapping and viren leaves the stage.
Jeevika was standing alone.
"UB yeh dekhein manvi ki mumta'
Jeevika says and sits on a chair with both the baby dolls.
She starts singing.
" Aaja nindiya aaja nainan bich sama ja - Aaja aaja aaja... Amrit ras barsa ja pavan jhulaye palna - Mamata lori gaye ho Sheetal sheetal kirne halke halke saye ho Tu bhee khushbu bankar palkan saje saja ja Aaja aaja aaja amrit ras barsa ja Aaja nindiya aaja nainan bich sama ja Badali me soya hai chanda, nadiya me jhilmil panee ho - ) Inn akhiyon me soya hai Tu hee nindiya rani tujhpar vari jau Lalna ko mere sulaja Aaja aaja aaja amrit ras barsa ja Aaja nindiya aaja nainan bich sama ja Harr pal dekhu isako, phir bhee chain naa pau - Mai khud nindiya bankar, nainan me bas jau ho Mere nayyan kee jyoti, meraa nanha raja - Aaja aaja aaja amrit ras barsa ja"
Everyone claps after the song finishes. Manvi had tear in her eyes and she stands up with the help of virat . "app sub sa mein bhi kuch kehna chati ho. Firstly thanks to my husband his na mjha itni beri khushi di or her pal mera sath diya second meri dii KO jinho na itni achi arrangement ki baby shower ki or itna crazy skit ki" . everyone claps and gives manvi her gifts and she opens them one by one. So many cute things for the babies.
At night:
Manvi walked out of the bathroom all ready for bed and in her night suite. Virat crawled up behind her and yelled "boo". Manvi jumped in shock. She turned around and hit virat . " kya ha pagal ho? Abhi girti toh hojata aaa" she started screaming in the middle of her sentence. Virat looked at her confusingly. "Kyaa huwa?" He asked her. Manvi looked at him and held her bump. "My water broke virat!" She yelled. "What? You sure!?" He asked in shock. Manvi hits virat again "idiot mere ander horaha ha I know na!" She yells at him. Virat nods "toh UB?' He asks totally confused. Manvi gives him a discusting look " UB? UB chalo hospital"


Precap: babies!!
Please tell me if virman should have 2 boys or 2 girlsbor 1 boy 1 girl
And please comment big ! Please!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. SUPERB AND ROCKING. WOW LIKES MANVI TRUST ON VIRAT THAT SHE EVEN AGREES TO LEAVE BOTH MAYA AND VIRAT IN ONE ROOM. MAYA AS USUAL IS CHEAP CHARACTER. I THINK SHE IS PLAYING SOME GAME BY SIGNING THAT DOCUMENTS. GALLIES R SUPERB. PROGRAMME OF BABY SHOWER IS AWESOME. LOVES THE PILLOW GAME AND ANSWERS OF MANVI SPECIALLY ANSWER TO ANGALI. THE SCENE OF ROOM DECORATION WAS VERY TOUCHING. ACTING OF VIRMANS DONE BY VIRIKA SUPERB. PRECAP SOUNDS NYC WHERE VIRMANS HAVE KIDS. ACC. TO MY VIEW POINT VIRMANS SHOULD HAVE ONE BOY AND ONE GIRL. SO WAITING 4 THE NEXT. UPDATE NEXT PART SOON. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
amazing yaar
really loved it
i want one boy nd one girl
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
awesome update
maya is a headache
hope she dnt create new drama
was cute update

virman should hv 1 girl and 1 boy
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
liked it sooo much
wanna read more
thnx for pms
update soon
Edited by VIRMANVIAN - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Awesome update!!!!
Liked it!!!

VirMan here r matured n sweet at d same time...n its gud dat maya was kicked out soon...very nice n thanks for the PM!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
one boy and one girl will be gud :) and gud update hope chudail maya dnt interept again waitng fr next (y)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Its outstanding update dear. .
Love this happy sappy n full of surprises update. .
The way virat behaved wd maya...u made our day..
She deserve it. .
Love virika's drama ...and manvi's reactions on it..
Totally outstanding update dear. .
Thanks alot for pm dea. .
Keep rocking
Try to update soon. ...

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