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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
nice start
virman are too cute
thanx 4 pm
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Hello Dear

Sorry for being late
😳...Coming to story...i don't know anything about previous parts...But iam loving this!! 😛...Awesome story dear👏 ...Iam happy ki kuch hindi mein read karne ko milega...😃 Hindi mein VirMan story read karne mein jo maza hai...woh english mein nahi!!! 😉😆

OMG VirMan cute fight...i was missing this
😔...VirMan story toh fight ke bina adhoori hai...Fight mein bhi pyaar....😳😆 Loved it...Each n every line was Mind blowing...But i wonder ki here Manvi wants baby girls...But Mummys hamesha Baby boys chahtein hain n Daddys baby girls...even in serial tooo...😕 VirMan toh VirMan hai fight babys se start hua aur Maa pe end hua...😆 bechari Vanshika maa..Phas gayi bechari...

And that Vanshika maa's Bouncer ki VirMan seperate rooms mein shift honge
😉 ...Par VirMan alag 😳nahi rahe sakte naa...Patch up kar liya n vmaa out ho gayi 😆...And those last lines were super romantic n cute too☺️...Specially," tussi mat jao! Mera ankho ka tara mera burhapa ka sahara mera mjha upna baho mein sone do"..
Thank u so much for pm n excited to read next...update soon..

Take Care
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Edited by nia333 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
SORRY I KNOW I AM LATE. THIS IS SHORT AND MAY HAVE ALOT OF ERRORS! FORGIVE ME PLEASE! ANYWAYS U STILL HAVE TO COMMENT AND BIG COMMENTS PLEASE
PART 2 :

Manvi opens her eyes as the sun rays fall on her delicate face. She titled her body to the side and her hand searched for virat on the other side of the bed. She couldn't feel him and after strolling her hands a few times her mind came to a conclusion that unlike everyday he wasn't there. She sat up in a lurch and forcefully opened her eyes wide." Kaha gaya yeh chep?" she asks herself and her eyes wonder all over the room searching him.

Virat came out from the bathroom door and manvi smiled in relief. "Idiot itni subah subah kyew nahya?" she asks as he was soaking wet and a medium sized towel was wrapped around his waist. Virat who was ruffling his hair to get shake the remaining water out looked at her with a smile. "Idiot tum hogi kyew ka abhi subah subah nhi ha, its 12:30 and besides I have an interview". He says and starts combing his hair, focusing with so much intensity. "Omg I am late neecha dii ko help kerni hogi!" she says and gets out of bed and rushes toward the bathroom, walking like a penguin. But before entering she stops and looks at virat "wait wait wait interview?" she asks realizing. " haan haan tum toh ghar ka kaamo ka bara mein hi socho mera interview ki kya ehmiyat(importance) and vesa bhi churail esi halat mein kaam kero gi?" he says obnoxiously. Manvi gives him a look and walks towards him and gives him a back hug. Her soft hands touched his muscular body so elegantly. "I'm sorry! Ub batao konsa interview!" she asks in a cute tone. Virat loosens her hands and turns around and holds her shoulders " yash raj films wants songs written and sung by me for their next movie!" he says calmly with a mischievous smile. manvi opens her mouth wide in shock and just stands there idle. She then screams very loudly like a pre-teen girl who just got asked out on a date for the very first time. "KAMINA! UB BATA RAHA HO? YASH RAJ FILMS? JAHIL ITNI BERI OFFER? OR TUM MJHA UB BATA RAHA HO? "She said and smacked him hard on the shoulder. "oucchhh" he screams and rubs his smacked shoulder. Manvi laughs and gives him a big smile. " chep I am soo proud of you" she says and leans in for a kiss and virat plays along and kisses her back. She ruffles his hair driving him crazier. He let's go and slowly pushes her back away. "Thank you jani" he says and starts to comb his hair again and manvi just looks at him with amazement. " mjh sa zyada important tumhara baal ha kya?" she asks while holding her hips with both her hands. Virat turns around and looks at her in the eyes and chuckles he walks towards her and holds her hands. "Tum sa important kuch hosakta ha? Bandariya?" he says with his killer smile. manvi smirks "acha what about them?" she asks pointing towards her baby bump. Virat holds his chin while thinking " ooo that's a hard choice. But in the end you are first" he says with a cute giggle. Manvi looks at him in shock and slaps his arm. "How dare you! upna hi bachoon ko second rakho ga? U idiot" she says in anger and walks to the bathroom leaving virat giggling. " bahanna Chaya na phadda kerna ka banderiya ko" he says while smiling and finishes up getting ready.

Manvi walks out of the bathroom while ruffling her long black hair with the towel. Virat was buttoning his shirt and manvi walks towards him and stops him. He raises his eyebrows in confusion. She smiles "virat yaad ha kuch saal pehla tum kitna struggle keraha tha or hum dono kitna perishan tha or tumhara dadda ji ka sath itna bera phadda chal raha tha" she says and starts buttoning virats shirt. "Hmm how can I forget" he says sadly. "well us waqt you were so stressed ka tumha lagga ka tum kabhi successful hoge hi nhi" she says and pats her hands on virats chest and picks up his tie from the bed. " ya" virat replies. Manvi loops the tie around his neck. " and aj dekho, success tumhara bahoo mein ha ." she says and starts tying virats tie. " haan and your point is ?" he asks with a smile. " us waqt tum ma kharbi nhi thi, na hi tumhara talent ma. Who waqt hi galat tha . it wasn't you it was just bad luck" she says with a smile and pulls the tie to make it tight. " thanku" he says and holds her hands. " virat you are my rockstar okay! You are the best singer! The best beta, the best pota, the best bhai, the best devar, the best jiju, the best father and the best husband anyone could ever ask for and never ever forget this okay?" she says while cupping his face. Virat giggles "hey nobody is perfect manvi not even me" he says while holding her waist. Manvi looks at him in anger and hits his chest. " chup kero you are the best for me okay!". She yells and walks away and starts to brush her hair. "Ouch! Okay na! ub jao mein meri maa?" he asks.manvi turns around and looks at him "let's go" she says with a smile and drags virat downstairs.

"chotii mammaaa" Anjali screams as she sees virman walking down the stairs. She runs towards them and jumps. Virat catches her and throws her in the air and grabs her as she comes down. " anjuu" he yells and gives her a kiss on the cheek. "chotta daddy aj app ka interview ha na?" she asks. " haan baby" he replies and puts her down on the ground. " virat manvi chalo breakfast lag gaya" she says coming towards manvi and patting her check. "Mom aj interview mera or pyaar is ko mil raha ha?" virat says and everyone looks towards him. " haha beta itni jelousy achi baat nhi and vesa bhi bachpan mein bahot laad pyaar mil gaya tumhe ub tumhara ayashi ka din ga".she says with a smile. And manvi hugs v.a from the side. " haan samjha or vesa bhi 6 foot ka khamba (pole) ho ub toh maa ka palo( corner of dupatta) chor do". She says teasingly and sticks her lounge out. Virat looks at her with a mischievous smile." acha ji? Or khud kya kerhi ho? Meri mom ha woh ok! Itna chupakna ha toh khud ki mom ko chipko samjhi" he says jokingly and then realizes what he says. Manvi's mischievous fighting smile turned upside down in a second and she just looked at virat with shock. "Omg manvi!" he says with a low voice. Tears automatically start falling from manvis eyes. "I can't believe you said that" she says and runs upstairs. Jeevika was coming down the stairs and manvi just passes by her and runs to her room. " manvi please araam sa. Bhago mat please" virat says while running after her. " virat kyaa huwa?" jeevika asks while stopping virat in between the staircase." Mazzaq mazzaq mein mena bahot zyada keh diya" he says and runs towards his room.

The room was locked and virat started banging on the door. "manvi pleaseee khollo" he said with tension. He sighed and took out his credit card from his wallet and used it to open the lock by sliding his between the door. He barged in and found manvi breathing heavily and sweating. "omg kya huwa?" he asks and runs towards her and makes her sit down. " bhagna... ki ...wajjaa...saaa" she says while stammering. " you idiot bhagi kyew! Omg look at yourself!" he says starts rubbing her hand. " virat I am sorry aj ka baad maa sa baat bhi nhi kero gi." She says while breathing heavily. Virat looks at her in anger "shut up! Idiot I was joking! You know I tease you about maa everyday!You are such a drama queen!" he says in anger. Manvi looks at him at sits up as her breathing got normal now. " jo tum na kaha us ka baad kis ko laga ga who mazzaq ha? . aj nikal hi gae na sachi baat?" she says with a dull expression. Virat stands up from the bed and looks at the blank wall and all of a sudden picks up the vase on the side table and smashes it on the ground. "I WAS JOKING!" he screams with all his voice. Manvi twitches from the sudden shattering of the glass.

Virats phone rings and he picks it up still looking towards the blank wall. "hello... haan...haaan sir bus nikal hi raha ho... I'm on my way" he says and barges out of the room without even looking at manvi. Manvi closes her eyes and takes a deep breath and lies down.

Manvi holds her baby bump and whispers" babies jub sa app dono ka patta challa ha jub sa mera or app ka papa koi fights nhi huwi. App ka khaber ka baad yeh pehli fight ha. Im sorry app dono ko yeh dekh na pera. Kitna ajeeb hota ha na ka ek choti si baat kaha sa kaha challi jati ha." She says and starts crying.

Manvi hears a knock on her door and wipes away her tears. "Come in" she says in a low tone. Jeevika opens the door and walks in with a tray. "Tum na breakfast nahi kiya na? "She says and places it on the coffee table. "Dii mjha bhook nhi" she says. " bhook nhi? Mera bhatiji ko maar na ha kya?".She says cutley. Manvi looks at her in anger. "bhanji!" she corrects her. Jeevika looks at her and giggles. She sits down beside her. "dekho manvi tum virat ko jaan ti ho na woh esa hi ha nhi sochta bolne sa pehla. Or vesa bhi you are his best friend tum hi sa sub sa zyada free hota ha woh or mazzaq mazzaq mein galti sa us na kuch keh diya toh itna ego kyew? "She says. Manvi looks at her and rolls her eyes. "Ego mjh mein? Woh dekho!" she says and points to the floor where there was broken glass. Jeevika face palms herself. "us na sorry bhi nhi bola" manvi says In tears. "Forgive and forget manvi. Lerka esa hi hote ha . hum lerkio ko pehla jhukna hota ha.". She says . manvi nods a no. "Hurt us na mjha kiya sorry bhi nhi bola! Mein nhi jhuko gi . werna mera naam manvi vadhera nhi!". " haan toh champa naam rakh lo" jeevika says in anger and walks out.

Precap: virat comes home crying.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
loved it
continue soon
thanks for the pm
Edited by niki795 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
nice update while joking it take
serous fight btwn them precap
look nice update soon and u other
story also
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
loved this update..
its amazing...
continues soonnn pleasee
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
nice updated ...👍🏼⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
nice update mehvish!! will be waiting for ur next update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Nice update ! Liked virman fight ! Thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
oh! please maanvi ko kuch mat karo yaar.
update was superb.
update soon.

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