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He parks the car at the front of the vadhera mansions main entrance and parks the car and runs out of it throwing the keys in midair as he races inside, letting the driver catch the falling keys. He runs inside and rushes towards the stairs ignoring everyone sitting in the main lounge having their afternoon tea. "virat beta?" says v.a but she was too late he had already reached the top floor and didn't hear her. He rushes in his room and barged in finding his wife in a lovely red pregnancy gown. He looked at her and noticed a bag full of gowns scattered all over a bed. "Oh hey" manvi said in a low tone. He stared at her for a moment and then ran to her and kissed her lips hard leaving her in shock. He squished her lips with his and just opened his mouth fully. They heard a knock on the door and parted away immediately and looked towards the door. V.a popped her head in "beta virat Khanna..." she said but was interrupted by virat. "Mom give me a second please mein atta ho" he said in a very low tone and an intense look driving manvi to curiosity and she noticed virats face it seemed scared, sad, frightened. V.a nodded and closed the door and left. Manvi looked virat and cupped his face "kya huwa ?" she asks softly. Virat looks at her and ruffles her hair and tears drop from his eyes. He start crying like a baby and then just grips her in a tight hug. Manvi holds his shoulders and parts him away from herself. "kya huwa virat tell me god dammit!?" she asks him with a worried expression. He gulps and wipes his tears " im sorry manvi and thank you , thank you so much tum nhi hoti toh " he says and bends his head forward . manvi looks at him with a paralyzed expression. She grabs his hand and slowly drags him towards the bed and makes him sit down she sits on her knees on the floor and holds his hands. "kya huwa baby?". Virat finally looks up into her eyes, his eyes were red with tears. "manvi I got the part" he says slowly. She gasped loudly "omg haha virat? sachi?" she asks and hugged him, letting his head rest on her chest. Virat started to cry like a little baby again. Manvi stood up realizing that" tum roh kyew raha ho lekin? Yeh to good news ha" she said with a cute smile while wiping his tears. " patta nhi". Manvi looks at him and lets out a small giggle which turns into loud chuckling. "kyaaa?" he asks annoyed by her giggles. "Pregnant mein hoon or mood swings tumhe ? huh? Mera Hercules devdas kesa ban gaya? Itna weak kesa hoga tum virat?" she asks cupping his face. He stood up from the bed and faced the window " patta nhi manvi, yeh sub tumhara waja sa huwa ha , tum nhi hoti toh mjha itna bera offer kabhi nhi atta and im sorry about this morning, mjha esa nhi kehna Chaya tha and yeh vase bhi nhi tor na Chaya tha" he says and holds her hands tight. Manvi gives him a big smile "its okay and mena bhi thora over react kiya tha. Lekin the thing is virat the closest thing I have to a mom is maa. Humari shaddi sa pehla sa mera or maa mein woh click tha , woh thi toh didi ki saas but mera liya woh humesha sa maa jasi thi and phir dekho I fell in love with you and woh literally meri mom ban gae. Please mein jaan ti ho kabhi kabhar bht frustrating hota hoga tumhara liya un ka attention mjh pa but virat please don't take this from me please, im sorry" she says and bursts out in tears and virat wipes her tears. "shh chup kero! Don't be pagal! Mjha koi problem nhi ha , subah ko mein siraf mazzaq keraha tha I never meant it. Tum kyew itna seriously le raha ho? Don't you remember jo mera ha woh tera ha? Toh is tera sa ma ka batwara (division) kyew? Pagal ho? Are you high?" he asks with a loud laugh and playfully hits her on the head. "No just bursting with hormonal imbalances haha" she says with a smile and stops crying. He looks at her and rolls his eyes" please normal hojao werna yeh ashiq deewana pyaar ko dhoondh na ka liya kahi suffer (journey) pa na nikal jae" he says with a laugh and manvi looks at him angrily and hits his upper arm hard" oye kamina khaberdar nazra idhar udhar ki, nazar neechi kerlo!" she screams and virats tilts his head down right away staring at manvis b***** and she hits him hard again" oye I didn't mean that! bas***d kahi ka!" she screams and hits him again and virat yells in pain. " biwi ho meri itna toh haq ban ta ha" he says with a cute wink. Manvi hits him again " I weigh 190 pounds, pasina(sweat) sa bheri huwi ho, or peguin ki terha waddle kerti ho, her waqt bhook lag ti ha or cravings hote ha, DO YOU THINK I AM IN A ROMANTIC MOOD?" she yells in anger. Virat makes a sad face " so mera koi chance nhi?" manvi nods a no while laughing. Virat stands up " bhai na bola kero kero kero , ub kerliya toh phir kerna ka chance nhi" he says obnoxiously and manvi opens her mouth in a big o. " kyaa? " she screams. "kuch nhiii jaan e man , mjha bht bhook lagi ha chalo neecha chal ta ha "

Downstairs:

Everyone was eating together and chit chating. Virat and manvi were very happy today. Virat told everyone about getting the part and everyone was very proud of him and congratulating him." oh virat, mein tumhe batana bhool hi gaya,bg ka phone aya tha" he says while talking with his mouth full of food. " oh , kya kaha unho ne?" he asked looking at manvi and jeevika. " bg pooch rahi thi ki manvi delivery ka liya hrishikesh jae gi ?" he says and virat drops his fork on the ground immediately after hearing that. "NHI koi zerorat nhi ha . manvi kahi nhi jarahi." He says in an angered tone leaving everyone in shock. Manvi looks at him with a heartbroken face. " mjha bhook nhi" she says and pushes her plate to the side and goes to her room". Virat sighs and continues eating his food. " beta tumhe nhi lag ta manvi ko janna Chaya? Yeh humara Punjabi tradition ha ka pehla baby maika hota ha, viren bhi tumhara nani ka ghar ..." she says and gets interrupted by virat " mom I don't care. Manvi mjh sa door nhi jae gi even if it's a mile away specially in this state" he says and leaves the table and rushes outside of the vadhera mansion. " kaha gaya ha yeh nawab zada?" says dada ji seeing him leave from the table. "dada ji mein dekh ti ho" jeevika says getting up but viren stops her and gestures her to let It be.

Virman room:

Manvi was in her room crying her eyes out on the bed. She really wanted to go, she missed hrishikesh so much. Virat walked in their room and saw her crying on the bed, her face smushed to the pillow and he ignored and sat on the sofa with a mischievous smile. "manvi tum ager hrishikesh jao gi toh acha he hoga. Mein yaha hot hot si lerkio ka sath ayashi kero ga. Koi pooch na walla nhi. Koi annoying biwi dimakh khana ka liya nhi. Models, bikini models sub mera aga peecha hongi akhir virat vadhera jo ho. Ek tweet or sub ghar ponch jae ga. Tum upni packing kero or hrishikesh jao or mein koi acha sa hotel dhoondh ta ho, let's see do bikini models like vanilla scented candles or rose scented? What do you think manvi?" he blabs but manvi showed no reaction. "go to www. i love cheating on my wife because I am a jerk.com waha bahot prostitutes mil jae ga " she says and gets up from the bed and waddles towards the bathroom slamming the door and locking it leaving virat laughing. Virat after a while hears loud bawling and walks towards the bathroom door. " era manvi you know na mein mazzaq keraha tha! Bahir ao please. You know na I love you" he says in a sweet tone. But there was no reply from manvi. " manvi khud bahir arhi ho ya mein ander ao? And tum jaan ti ho ager mein agaya toh kya hoga? Soch lo" he says and manvi opens the door and looks at him straight in the eye. " mein hrishikesh jarahi ho. Or ub kabhi bhi wapis nhi ao gi. It was good knowing you. Bye" she says with a straight face and starts packing her bags leaving virat in complete shock. " manvi mere bina kya jina? Im irresistibly sexy" he says with a funny smile but then realizes manvi was hell serious and got super tensed. He looked at her bag and threw it on the ground. "PAGAL HO TUM KYA?" he screams. " haan kyew ka tum sa shaddi ki thi na, toh pagal huwi na per tum sa kam ho" she says in anger and bends to pick up her bags but her stomach started hurting and she started screaming. Virat panicked and made her lie down on the bed and manvi started crying. " MOM, BHABHII KOI AOO PLEASE" he screams his lungs out and everybody came rushing in. " virat kya huwa?" v.a says looking at manvi tremble in pain. " I don't know " he says with tears in his eyes while trying to calm down manvi. " virat abhi hospital chalo, delivery kerni hogi" jeevika says. "per bhabhi its just been 7 months, 2 months baki ha". " virat ager esa hota ha toh premature baby deliver kerna perta ha, we don't have an option. Jeevika ambulance bulao" v.a says.

At the hospital:

The doctor sees manvi "omg take her to the operation theater nurse. Patient ki family app bahir wait kera" she says. " nhi mein bhi ao ga, mein upni manvi ko akele nhi choro ga , please doctor" virat begs the doctor. "Are you the husband?" she asks and virat nods a yes. "Fine come with me" she says and enters the operation thetre. He sees manvi tremble in pain and rushes to her holding her hand. " manvi everything will be alright you have me, kuch hi hoga don't worry." He says while rubbing her hand. " SHUT UPPP I HATEE YOU!" she screams. "kyaa ? kyew?" he asks dishearted. " yeh sub tumhari galti ha you dog. I hate you! Tum mein zara sab hi self-control nhi tha? Ullu! Ghada!" she say while crying and screaming. "Oh now blame it all on me. Mena akele toh in bacho ko ..." He says but before he can finish manvi grabs his shirt in anger "GET THIS OUT OF ME AHHH" she screams her lungs out. "ok calm down " he says all scared.

After half an hour:

Virat comes out of the operation theatre and walks towards the family. "False alarm" he says and everyone got a frown on their faces. "Oh god. Phir ub?" jeevika asks him. " pata nhi. Doctor na kaha ha ke bachae ek week baad bhi hosakta ha or ek mahina baad bhi. But today it was really close they were about to operate but I don't know manvi calmed down and the pain stopped so ub woh ghar jasakti ha" he said. " manvi bhi na " v.a says with a smile and hugs virat. " kyew der gaya na? ub samjh mein aya how hard it is, jub Anjali peda huwi thi mera kitna mazzaq uraya jaraha tha huh?" viren says and hits virat. " haan haan tum dono ka kandhoon pa toh pahar toot pera. Mein or meri behn toh chute (holiday) bana raha tha na" jeevika says in sarcasim and everyone laughs.

"era virat bg ko toh phone kero. Mena unhe phone kerka sub bataya. Wojj hrishikesh sa nikal gae hogi, un ko call kerka bolo ka false alarm tha" v.a said. " nhi mom . unhe ana do .vesa bhi goodh berhae kerni ha kuch dino mein "

At the vadhera mansion:

"manvi aj tum na hum sub ko heart attack dediyaa tha. Achanak kya hogaya tha?" v.a asks manvi and she looks at virat. " kuch nhi, dii mjha mera room mein lechalo " she says pushing her wheel chair towards the stairs. Virat comes infront of her and picks her up from the wheel chair and carries her to their room.

Virman room:

He places her gently on the bed and covers her up with blankets. "beri moti hogae ho tum" he says with a smile and gently plays with his hair. Manvi gives a small smile and holds his hand. "virat hume kya hogaya ha? Hum itni bitter kyew hoga ha? Baat baat pa lerta ha? Humara fights mein mazzaq masti nhi rahi ub. Siraf ansoo or dard ha" she says while letting a tear fall from her eyes. " manvi dekho ubhi tumhara jo state ha is mein tum different terika sa react kerta ho or tumhara sath sath mein bhi. I have so much work and responsibilities on my head and so do you. Hum dono jaan ta ha ka twins ko raise kerna bht mushkil hoga. Hum upna stress ko ler ler ka express keraha ha. It will take time but things wil be back to normal. Or jahan tak hrishikesh ki baat ha, mein tum sa ek pal door nhi reh sakta. Or is halat mein jaha ek bag uthana ka liya tumhe hospital lejana pera tub toh bilkul nhi. Manvi tum kese bhool sakti ho? Tumhe cancer tha? U had a miscarriage and now you have twins in you! Do you know the success rate of this pregnancy is very very low? Mena tum say eh baat chupae but ub is liya bata raha ho mein yeh sirf humara liya keraha ho. Manvi please, chaho toh bg ko yaha bula lo , ek saal ka liya un ka sath isi room mein reh lo. Mein guest room mein chala jao ga but please don't part me away from my family" he says and kisses her belly and cries his eyes out. " aj jo huwa us ka baad mein koi risk nhi lesakta na tumhara liya na in bacho ka liya " he says. Manvi holds cups his face in her hands. "shhh im sorry I just reacted before listening to your story. Promise ub sa no dramabazi" she says with a smile. "ek or promise kero?" he says. " aj sa no more fights" he says with a cute smile. "Promise!'

Precap: everyone from hrishikesh comes and goodhh berhae

I know im late and I am bad and so much but please read and comment please comment tell me how it was please

Edited by mebigirl - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
nice update
loved it
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u soo much fr update loved the opening scene it reminded me of virman hospital hugss 😳😳 loved their lovey dovey❤️ talks virman style wala,,, and virman without little fight its🤣 impossible,,😛 loved that particular part awesome onee hope u update next chapter soon im eagerly waiting fr it thank u fr pm take care 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome U[pdate..!!! Loved it..Virat Maanvi fought and also made up to each other...this VirMan is so gud to read...Waiting for next n thnks for the PM!!
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wow virman fight are just too cute to read and false alarm😆 omg i was literally smiling while reading this hats off👏 very well written ⭐️⭐️
do continue soon
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-ITS AWSM DEAR...LOVED IT.. 👏 👏
LOVE VIRMAN FIGHTING, ,,,, THEIR LOVE GOR EACH OTHER, ,,,, THEIR CARE, ,,, THEIR PATCH UP, ,,, THEIR LEG PULLING, ,, THEIR FUN ... 😃
LOVE VIRMAN HOSPITAL SCENE. ..MANVI' S OUTBURST ON VIRAT ..JUST SOOO FUNNY. . 😃 😃 😃
AND LAST PART WAS BEAUTIFUL. ..LOVE THEIR PROMISE. .. 😛 😛
REALLY DEAR FULLY ENJOYED UR UPDATE. .. 👏 👏
THANKS ALOT FOR PM DEAR...
TRY TO UPDATE SOON NEXT PART...WAITINGGGHHH! !!!!!!!!!!
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Sorry I'm very late. I know I know sorry! But now I'll be on time promise
Part 4: enjoy
Virat and manvi were sitting on the middle couch in the family lounge all snuggled up. A pink linen sofa throw wrapped manvi and her baby bump elegantley. The entire vadhera family were sitting around the couple. "Maa mjhe yeh color ka flowers chaya godh bherae mein" manvi
Says picking a stem of a flower from a bag of samples. " but manvi those are Baby pink! How about red and black roses! How romantic heh?" Virat asks with a smile. Manvi looks at him in disgrace. " virat we are not getting married again! Baby shower ha! No romantic stuff! " she says and throws the red roses on the floor. Everyone laughs at manvi and her stubbornness. "Koi baat nhi virat. Manvi is suffering the 9 months let her choose the flowers" says swamini bua. Virat makes an annoyed face. " do I have any role in this baby shower or not? In fact do I even have any rights on these babies? I made them for god sakes!" Virat says in anger and manvi looks at him in shock. " virat calm.down yeh tum kya kya bakwaas keraha ho? Ek kaam.kero drapes tum choose kerlo but just remember babies! Cute and cudley! " she says boosting his lost confidence. "Dekh virat Teri biwi tujhe moka derhi ha don't let her down" viren says with a laugh. "Daddy mein.kuch choose kero?" Anjali asks viren in her cute bubbly voice. Virat grabs anjapi and picks her up in his arms. "Idhar ao! Chote daddy and anjali will choose the drapes together and gandi choti mama will not interrupt" virat says and starts looking at samples. Manvi stares at him and giggles. "Virat" she whispers. He ignores her at first but then she nudgs him and he looks at her "kyaa?" He screams getting distracted. Manvi awkwardly looks around and goes closer to his ear "check your phone" she whispers near his ear. "Oye kya khasur pusr horahi ha ?" Kadamri Chachi screams instantly shaking manvi . "Chachi I was just telling him ka please don't let chachi choose anything !' She jokes. Virat takes out his phone and he had a message from manvi. He confusingly looks at her and she quickly winks at him. He opens the text message :' you have every right over me and these babies idiot! Just trust me with the choices! BTW I love you! So much! '. Virat instantly smiles and looks at manvi who was still next to him but she was busy talking to everyone else. " umm manvi I need to talk to you can you come with me for a second. " virat says and stands up from the sofa. Manvi nods and stands up with his help. "Era era manvi KO kyew le jaraha ho kal godh bherae ha itni tyariya ha" kadambri Chachi says. Virats huffs in frustration. " Chachi 5 minutes . please I beg of you" he says. "Jane do ! Uff kadambri! Jao tum log!" Vanshika maa says.
Virat and manvi walk towards their room. Virat closes the door behind. "Kya huwa?" Manvi asks. Virat smiles and makes manvi sit on the bed , he sits down beside her and holds her hand. "I love you too idiot!" He says and kisses her cheek lightly .manvi giggles. "Isi liya bulaya? Stupid!" She says. Virat rolls his eyes. "No iss liya" he says and leans closer to her and lightly kisses her lips.
There was a knock on the door which startled them during the kiss. Manvi parted away from him instantly and gestured virat to go open the door.he made a lound grunt and walked toward the door .
Jeevika barged in "bg's here manvi!" She yelled and manvi right away stood up in excitement and walked out of the room with jeevika. Virat grinded his teeth in frustration. Jeevika ran back in. "Manvis throw(thin blanket) " she said and grabbed it from the bed and rushed for the door. Virat just watched her running in amazement. She stopped and came to a halt noticing something about virat and stared at him for a moment. Virat made a confused fave and wiped his nose hoping a bugger wasn't sticking out. Jeevika lightly touched virats lips with her fingertip and stared at her finger. "Manvi's coco moko lip gloss!" She yelled and virat opened his eyes wide and wiped his lips. "BBhabhi !" He yells in embarusment. "Fine I'll leave !" She says and walks out but comes back in "next time at least try to.cover up!" She says and runs out knowing virat will throw tantrums now.
Virat just giggles "biwi bhi pagal or us ki behna bhi" he says.virat walks downstairs and finds manvi hugging bg and crying. He rushes downstairs and taps manvis shoulder. "Please don't cry . you have to stay happy" he says and manvi smiles and gives him a side hug. Virat smiles and meets everyone who just came from.rishikesh.
"Virat idhar aa" beri BG says and virat walks towards her" . "ji?" he asks. " meri manvi ka khayal rakh rahe ho na?' She asks. Virat and manvi both smile. Before virat could reply manvi says," yes beri b ! Itna khayal app logo na bhi nhi rakha jitna akele virat rakh ta ha " she says with a smile.
"Chalo chalo app log thak ga honge. Sub apne apne rooms mein jao" vanshika antie says to anyone and everyone heads for their rooms. Virat stops BG "BG app sa ek zerori baat kerni ha. Please mera sath ae" virat says.
Virman room:
BG and manvi were sitting in the bed and virat was standing near the window looking at the cities veiw. " kya baat kerni ha beta?" BG asks with a confused look. Virat turns around and looks at her. " BG manvi needs you abhi ! Lekin I can't send her . I know ka yeh panjabi tradition ha ka pehla baby maika hota ha lekin I won't be able to sleep in tension of her and the baby's health ". Virat says and looks at manvi who was queitly listening. " beta hum log us ka khayal rakhe ga" BG says. " I know! But still mera dil nhi manta please app yaha rehjao humara sath till the babies are few months old " he says. BG looks around the room for a while. She was thinking of what to do. "Okay beta jesa tum kaho" . manvi smiles and hugs BG in excitement. "Yay BG UB mein her roz app ka dimakh khao GI!" She says with a huge smile. " oye vesa hi mera khati ha bichari BG KO toh chor de!" Virat says and hits manvis head playfully. She makes an angry face and pushes him. "Manviii " BG says scolding Herr. Manvi makes an innocent puppy dog face and BG laughs.
"Acha beta mein chal thi ho . tum log sojao kal bht kaam ha" BG says and gets up. Manvi stands up and hugs her "goodnight" she says. BG walks out and closed the door on her way. Manvi.turns around and looks at virat whoes back was facing her. Virat was talking out his clothes from the cupboard. Manvi walks towards him and gives him a back hug. Virat shakes from the sudden touch . "thank you virat" she says and rests her head on his back. Virat holds manvis hand and turns around. " thanks kis baat ka?" He asks. " for everything " she says and hugs him again. Virat smiles and looks her in the eyes. "I should be saying thanks to you not the other way around " he says and closes the cupboard . manvi makes a fake thinking face n snatches virats clothes that were in his hand. "Thanks tum bolo ya mein ek hi baat ha. Lekin seriously you solved my problem. Bus UB kal baby shower ache sa hojae n tension khatam" she says with a big smile. Virat giggles and snatches his clothes back "kyew labor mein tera chacha jae ga?" He jokes. Manvis eyes go wide "ouch" she yells imagining the Virat laughs and holds her hand n pulls her closer. "Don't worry I'll be holding your hand every second! No need to fear when virat is here" he says and pulls her in a hug. Manvi parts away from.him.n lightly pushes him "jao ja ke change kero its late we need to get rest for tomorrow"she says. Virat turns around and pulls her closer again. " nah pehle continue what you left off" he says with a mischevious smile. Manvi makes a confused expression "left what off?" She asks. "What you left off when bhabhi came" virat says with a big smile. "Kyew phir sa coco moco lip gloss lagwana ha?" She jokes. Virat makes an annoyed face "bhabhiii!" He yells in frustration. Manvi laughs ans gives his lips a light peck. "Chalo UB jao go change " she says and pushes him towards the bathroom. "Fine meri maa". He says and walks towards the bathroom.
When virat comes out he finds manvi already asleep on her side of the bed. He smiles looking at her innocent face
He walks towards the bed and covers her with a blanket
He lies down and holds her hand and falls asleep.

Next morning:
Manvi wakes up from noises that were coming from downstairs. She looks around the room searching for virat but could not find him. She slowly.got up from the bed and wabbled towards the door" virat" she calls from.the door hoping someone would hear her. She gave up and grabbed her robe and wore it. Suddenly she felt nauseous and rushed towards the bathroom. She was having bad morning sickness. "Manvi?" Somebody calls from outside. Manvi knew it was jeevika "dii please ander ao"she says while gasping for breath. Jeevika slowly opens the door and walks in she finds manvi vomitting uncontrollably " kya huwa manvi? " she asks and rushes towards her and rubs her back. "Just morning sickness happens every few days. Can you hand me the towel?" Manvi asks and jeevika nods.
They both come out of the bathroom and jeevika makes manvi sit down on the bed. "Virat kaha ha?" Manvi asks. Jeevika sits down besides manvi "neeche. Decoration kerwa raha ha sham KO godh berhae ha na" jeevika says. Manvi snaps "kissi na mjha uthaya kyew nahi? Itne kaam ha oh my god!" Manvi yells and stands up from the bed. Jeevika signs and makes her sit down again. "Uff manvi you are 7 and a half months pregnant kya kaam kere GI?" She says in frustration. Manvi wasn't paying attention to her and quietly walked out of her room and towards the stairs.
Jeevika came running after her. They both went downstairs. Manvi looked around the entire lounge. Workers were decorating the entire place and it was looking lovely. "Oh bhai ise yaha lagana ha do mein lagayt ho " virat says and manvi turns around and looks at him. He was on a ladder hanging flowers at the entrance. "Virat!" She screams and he looks at her. "Oh uthh gae madubhalla ! Good morning madam!" He says with a smile. Manvi rolls her eyes in anger "shut up! Kaha chera huwa ho? Utro! Idiot gir jao ge!phool walo KO kerne do kaam" She yells. Virat giggles "chil Mani. Merdo ka kaam ha kerne do mjhe" he says in a macho way. Manvi face palms herself. "Theek ha phir rote rote mat Ana mere pass " she says and walks towards the kitchen. "Roe meri jutti" virat screams but manvi had already left.
Kitchen:
"Dekh Lena within an hour he will fall hard on his back" manvi says and takes out her leftover smoothie from the fridge and starts drinking it. "Haha have a little confidence on him yar" jeevika says . manvi smirks. "Ya ya whatever. Khair I'm hungry kya ha khane ka liya?" She says and looks at all the dishes of food set on the kitchen counter. "No no! Woh sham ka mehmano ka liya ha. Tum sabzi khao GI abhi!" Jeevika orders. Manvi makes a sad face. "Yukh sabzi" she says while making a face. Jeevika looks at her in anger " the baby needs nutrients okay so shut up" jeevika says.
"Kya horaha ha " vanshika antie asks while entering the kitchen. Manvi runs to her and hugs her "maa dii ganda khana..." Manvi says and before she could complete her sentence they hear a loud thump and they rushed towards the lounge. They found virat on the ground with the ladder on top of him .he was yelling in pain. Manvi rushed to him and tried moving the ladder but jeevika stopped her as it was heavy and she asked all the decor men to pick up the ladder. "Ghada ! Mena bola tha na! Sunte nhi ho kissi ka!" She yells . "manvi gussa baad mein kerna pehle use room mein lejata ha. All the decor men helped.virat get up and made him.lie down .
Virman room:
" you idiot! Thapper mar na ka dil cha raha ha tumhe!' Manvi screams. "Aah mjha already itna pain horaha ha and your being so.insensitive!", virat says while trying to adjust his pillow. " insensitive!!!???" Manvi yells with all her voice and throws the pillow on the floor ,snatching it from virat and he wobbles from the sudden thug. "Manvi ! Relax" vanshika antie says . and gives virat the pillow back and adjusts it for him. "Thori insensitive horhi ho tum vese" jeevika says and hopes manvi won't scream at her. "Fine I'll shut up" she says and sits next to virat and folds her arms in anger.
"Chote daddy" anjali screams from.the door. She was holding virens hand and let's go and runs toward virat. "Kya huwa yaha? Koi mer gaya?" Viren asks while entering the room. Virat smiles and just makes anjali sit on his lap and hugs her. "Nhi lekin next time mein mardo gi if he does something like this again" manvi says in anger. . "what?" Viren asks. "Uff manvi! Viren ji virat flowers lagata lagata gir gaya bus" she says. Virat was barley paying attention to what everyone was saying and was just busy with anjali. "Anjali tumhe aj ka function mein Jo gajre(jewellery made out of flowers) pehne ha mein woh le aya" he says . "yaay" anjali screams and jumps in excitement. "Kaha ha?" She asks. "Mere sath ao deta ho" he says and gets up from the bed and walks towards the cupboard . everyone looks at him in shock . "virat?" Manvi calls him. He looks at her. "Pain kaha gaya tumhara?" Manvi asks. Virats face goes red "aa magic?" He says and makes a cute face. Manvi wasn't buying it. 'Aj ka baad don't ever talk to me!" She says and leaves the room
And goes downstairs. "What's her problem?" Viren asks. "Chor use . mood swings" virat says . jeevika holds her head in frustration. "Virat manvi got worried! Us ki jaan atak gae thi tumhe is tera sa dekh ker and you were faking it?" She says in disgust. Virat nods a no "I wasn't faking it I guess I just got distracted from the pain and forgot about it after anjali came" he says and smiles looking at anjali. "Khair I'm going "jeevika says and leaves and vanshika antie leaves too.
In the evening:
Manvi comes back to her room to get ready. She avoided virat the entire day long. She entered hoping he wouldn't be here but to her surprise she found a huge box on the bed. There was a little paper on it. Manvi picked it up and read it. ' open for smiles ' it said. Manvi curiously opened it and found so many gajras for her hair and braclets and necklaces
There was a another note 'I know your already so beautiful you don't need anything but these flowers need you to inhance their beauty. Open another layer for more '. Manvi reads and notices the box has layers she removes the first layers of gajras and finds a beautiful dress . she takes it out and looks at it. It was a sharara.it was so elegant and beautiful . the color was baby pink. She notices another card and reads it 'baby pink because I know they are girls. Even if they aren't its okay no pressure! Haha. I know you already bought a dress but I want you to wear something I got you. Open the next layer for more' she reads and opens the next layer and finds jewellery and makeup. There was another card "what's a queen without jewellery and makeup? The jewellery is just like what you wore for our wedding. This day is just as important. Now get ready and show the world how beatiful the mother of my kids is. By the way if you are wondering where I am turn around'. Manvi smiles and right away turns around . she looks at virat and just blinks her eyes. " I'm sorry and thank you " she says and hugs him. "I thought we promised no more fights". He says looking into her eyes.manvi laughs " I take my promise back! I'm pregnant! What elses do you expect! Vesa bhi tum na dera diya tha!" She says and hits his chest with her fist. "Acha itni jaldi der gae? Manvi is hisab sa you have given me heart attacks" he says and laughs. But manvi has a flashfoward of all the times she has been taken to the emergency room. From her cancer too her miscarriage. Virat notices her face go dull. "Don't worry forget the past. When virat is here no need to fear" he says and hugs her again. Manvi laughs.
Downstairs:
Virat and manvi come down the stairs together and everyone's eyes were on them.
"Woaw manu you look amazing!" Jeevika says. "Choti mumma app phir sa dulhan ho?" Anjali asks . "haye re nazar na lage " pinky chachi says. Manvi smiles and thanks everyone. "Virat got me everything. His choice is amazing " manvi says and blushes. "Chalo chalo sub mard jao UB . sub guest ate hi honge v.a says while coming from the kitchen. She stops when she sees manvi " waow manvi " she says as she was speechless. "Mom mein kyew jao ga?" Virat asks. "Beta ladies only function!!" V.a sayssays. "But I'm the dad ! I have the right to be at my babies baby shower!" Virat says in a stern voice. Viren laughs"haha mere time pa mena sub try kiya.chal hum study room mein hi ache" he says and takes virat with him.
"Hello" someone says from the main door. All the ladies look at the door and see maya. Everyone was shocked. She was dressed in a skin tight red silk sari. "Maya tum? Yaha ?" Manvi says




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Posted: 11 years ago
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AWESOME DEAR. AGAIN UR THIS STORY IS MINDBLOWING. LOVED IT VERY MUCH. I READ ALL 4 PARTS OF IT TODAY AND LOVED IT. LIKES VIRMANS VERY MUCH IN THIS STORY. VIRMANS R SO CUTE AND THEIR NOK JHOK AND SWEET LITTLE FIGHTS AWESOME. VIRAT AND MANVI LOVE 4 EACH OTHER IS TOO GUD. VIRAT IS SO CARING AND IN LAST UPDATE HIS NOTE TO MANVI IS AWESOME. LOVED IT. UPDATE NEXT PART SOON DEAR .THANKS 4 PM. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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maya's entry was something i didnt expected.
liked the whole part.
was virat really faking the pain?
loved the part they fought with each other.
update soon
thnk you so much for pm
im loving this ff

Edited by VIRMANVIAN - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Awesome update!!! Liked VirMan here...n mayas sudden entry...thanks for the PM!!

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