virman my way 2 (ff)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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As you all know I wrote an ff on tvc that was titled virman my way that had 73 parts. But because tvc got deleted and stuff I lost all my work. So now after 6 months I am back with the same story line but in a different version. And by different version I mean I will write differently. Hence virman my way 2.

Storyline is the same as the show and manvi is a cancer survivor. Virman have been married for about 5 years and manvi is pregnant with twins. Virat is a huge singer and is very very popular and famous. Virika have a daughter Anjali who virman are really close too because in the past virman had a miscarriage so Anjali was the one who brought happiness back into their life. So if you remember my old story or ever read it so please do stay subscribed (if that is the right word) and even if you haven't no worries this version is from scratch and you just need that^. oh and this story is going to be mostly hindi/urdu unlike my other story opposites attract( btw check that out) which is all English. Please buddy me so I can send pm when I update.

Chapter 1:

Manvi was sitting by the window still absorbing the wind blowing on her face. She took a sip of her hot coffee and just smiled looking at the sun setting and the beginning of a new moon. She felt a sudden tap on her shoulder and turned around with a loud gasp. She looked up and found her husband staring at her with a huge smile. virat looked at her and adored her beauty. He sat down beside her and placed his hands on her baby bump."virat tum na toh mjha derha hi diya" she says while placing her hand on top of his hand. "haha her subah mein tumhari shakal sa der ta ho or aj tum der gae ? waah yar!" he says with a cute kidish smile. manvi looks at him with an angry look and he gives her a cute puppy dog face to which she melts too and giggles right away. Virat bites her left ear softly and playfully pulls it with his teeth. "chutkus kesa ha?" he asks. Manvi gives him an angry look again and virat just looks at her confused of what he did now. "You idiot kesi ha, their girls!" she says correcting him. "Seriously? Tumhe kesa pata? Their boys end of story" he says stubbornly. Manvi stands up from his grace and putted both her hands on her hands on her hips. "chup kero okay! Im the mom! mjha zyada patta ha ka tumhe? ". Virat stand up too" mjha zyada patta ha okay! They are boys!" he yells. "virat they are girls!" she yells back! They both continue this fighting for an hour and when it got really loud vanshika antie heard and went running to virmans room. She knocked on the door and virman while still arguing opened it. "virat mena bola na they are girls" she says while opening the door and ignoring vanshika antie. "No manvi they are boys I know it besides it depends on me if they are boys and girls and I just know it!" He says. "uff yeh kya horaha ha? Tum dono itni stupid baat pa leraha ho?" Manvi looks at her and rushes to v.a. "maa dekho na kub sa dimakh kha raha ha yeh mera!" v.a instantly looks at virat with disgust to which he opens his mouth in a big o. "mom? App is ki side leraha ho? Mein app ka beta ho!" he yells. Manvi walks towards him. "oye yeh meri maa ha samjha!" she says. "Ok this you can't win with. yeh meri mom ha! I have a birth certificate to prove it!" He says while rushing to his cupboard and searching for his birth certificate. "oye sara rishta khoon ka nhi hota dil ka bhi hote ha." She says and virman start arguing again but now on whose mom is v.a.

v.a just holds her head in tension and wants to yank all her hair out. "BUSSS!" she screams loudly to which virman shut up and look at her. "BAHOT HOGAYA HA! KHUD KA BACHA HONE WALA HA PER BACHO KI TERA BEHAVE KERAHA HO! ITNA LERNA KA SHOQ HA THEN FINE STAY AWAY FROM EACH OTHER. MANVI AJ SA TUM MERA ROOM MEIN SHIFT HOJAO. IF YOU CANT ACT LIKE A RESPONSIBLE MARRIED COUPLE TOH KOI ZERORAT NHI EK DOSRA KO TOLERATE KERNA KI!" she yells with all her voice. Virman look at her in shock. They couldn't imagine a second away from each other. They look at each other and start laughing loudly which leaves v.a very confused. "kya?" she asks them. "Era maa app kyew tension lerhi ho? Yeh humara roz ka mamla ha. Her roz hum babies ka gender pa lerta ha but it's not a real real fight." He says and grips manvi in a side hug. V.a just holds her forehead "tum dono ko samajhna mushkil hi nhi na mumkin ha" she says and walks out of their room. Virman burst out laughing because of the way she left. "haha virat maa toh hume alag kerna ma lagi thi" manvi says while laughing. "haha hume or alag? Mom bhi na itna salo mein hum dono ko abhi bhi samjh na pae" he says. Manvi looks at virat and stares into his eyes " virat?" she asks. "Hmm" he replies. "I love you" she says with a huge smile. virat looks at her and passionately kisses her forehead " I know and I lub u too" he says and tries to pick up manvi but she was too heavy for him. " uff dekho kitni moti hogae ho! Itna muscular hubby tumhe utha bhi nhi para" he says jokingly. Manvi look at him with a sad face and starts crying like crazy. "Era esa kya hogaya? Mein toh mazzaq keraha tha" he says with a cute smile. manvi was crying on and on and walked to her bed and sat down and kept crying. Virat pace palmed himself and then rushed to her. "aalla mella babby lolaa ha? (mera baby roh raha ha?)". manvi looks at him and cries more loudly. Virat looks at her and sighs "mood swing?" he asks. Manvi nods a yes and cries more. virat cups her face in his hands and pulls her closer. He gives her lips a light peck with his lips and rubs his nose against hers. "I'm sorry" he says with a cute smile. manvi smiles back at him but tears were still flowing from her eyes. "Its okay" she says with a small smile and hugs him tight but ends up hurting herself. " oucchh viratt" she screams. Virat right away stands up and makes her lay down on the bed. "You idiot 5th month ha please be careful. Sojao ok" he says and turns off the lap and leaves but manvi grabs his hand before he could.virat turns his head and looks at manvi questioningly. " tussi mat jao! Mera ankho ka tara mera burhapa ka sahara mera mjha upna baho mein sone do" she says all romantically. Virat giggles at her and lies down next to her and wraps his arm around her baby bump. "Happy? Itni filmy ho tum" he says and nuzzles his nose in her hair. "Yes good night "she says with a smile and they both fall into a blissful sleep.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing! Love the concept and how cute are they? Continue soon :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
started new FF
loved it
virman are cute
continue soon
thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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update the other story also
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Nice start. Please pm me and continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
nice start boy are fighting for
baby gender update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Nice start! The way you described virman fight was nice! Waiting for next update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good start..
Loved virman fight..nd v.m 's reaction...
Update soon...
Thanxx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great way to start. anticipating the rest!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ofcourse hw will i 4get ur awesome story...manvis lose of her first child virats concert.. oh my god its such a wonderful story,,,, and im so happy that u continued,,,, thank u for that and virman again,, wooww its a short update but, a pleasant one,,,, i love mood swings and mannu,,, poor v ma try to update without delay ,,,,,,,,,,,, pm me,,, 😃

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