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Posted: 11 years ago
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what work will he get her do now to recover the money
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chapter 3b
location:Delhi's chandini chowk road
Khushi completely shocked hearing the amount 25 hazaar
Asr:kya huwa (smirking evilly) abhi toh tum bolrahi thi na me tum Paise chuka doge toh ab kya huwa bolti kyun band hogayi,ya phir apni aukat yaad aagayi.
Khushi stares at Asr in anger but replies him sweetly
Khushi:is mein aukat ki kya baat hain choteji 😉 aukat toh sabki hoti hain aapki,mere, sher(tiger) ki, chuhe(rat) ki,saare praniyon( living things) ki.agar hamare liye 25 hazaar bahut badi rakham hain toh aapke liye 25 laakh zyaada rakham hogi,agar sher aapke saamne aajaye toh aapke 1000 crore ke saamne bhi usiki aukat zyada hogi,ISI tarah devi maiyya ki har prani ki koi na koi aukat hoti hain,agar kisiki aukat nahi hogi toh sirf devimaiyya ki kyunki unke liye naa 24 hazaar kam hain naa 25 crore aur nahi woh kisi sher,cheeteh se darti hain. Samjhe choteji.
Khushi finishes her speech smiling satisfactorily,the public including anjali is impressed with khushi's answer and Asr is tongue tied. Anjali is amazed to see a girl making Asr tongue tied she smiles evily thinking of how it will be if sum1 like khushi or rather khushi oly enter her chote's life and teach him wat is the actual meaning of life. And UP Der devimaiyya says 'tathastu' 😉
The crowd starts supporting khushi
Person 1: haan haan CHOTEJI ladki ek dam sahi key rahi hain is tarah kisiki aukat ki baat karna bilkul theek nahi hai.
Person 2 haan CHOTE beta kisiki bezatti karna bina wajah ghalat hain.
Person 3 haan bada aaya ameerzaada, thode Paise kya zyaada hain itna ghamand dikha raha hmph sahi naam rakha hain maa-baap ne CHOTE.
Anjali was trying to control her laughter seeing every1 calling chote 'CHOTE',Asr was literary burning in anger seeing dis ppl call him chote and secondly bcoz dey wer scolding and cursing him CURSING Arnav Singh RAIZADA.
Asr:WHAT THE! its arnav singh RAIZADA get it not chote aur waise bhi yeh sab is ladki ki ghalti hain,yeh sab tumhaari wajah se...
Khushi had already vacated the crowd as she had to take asthama pump for her buaji,and arnav agai. Fumed seeing khushi missing,the crowd also started dispersing aftr hearing tat dey r dealing wid THE ASR .
Asr: dekha Di,aise hi hote hain yeh middle class log kaise hote hain apni baat mein uljha ke kaise chali gayi taaki nuksan naa chukana pade,bloody gold diggers.
Anjali:UFC ho chote,un hone kaha naa ki unki buaji ki tabiyat kharab hain ISI liye chali gayi hogi .tum toh much bhi sochte ho,chalo game bhi door ho rahi hain
An amused anjali and angry arnav move towards their car and start towards AR.
Edited by farru786 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i love the sassy kushi :) gave him back properly
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chapter 4a
LOCATION:KC
All interns r seated in the conference room and adi is briefing dem about wat all jobs dey have to perform in their 6 months internship period.
Adi:so guys all clear right u ppl will be divided into 2 teams of 3 members each,one team will work under MK ie Maan sir and other team will work under AK ie Asad sir.you guys will assist dem in upcoming projects,provide inputs,visit construction sites with ur respective boss,learn to make blue prints,attend meetings to have a better idea abt how to give presentations and all. KC ie khurana construction specializes in finalizing plots,make blue prints and all related work like what all materials will be used for construction etc and KC ie khan constructions deals with the interior work like painting,furnishing,renovation,decorations etc so therefore u will work under Maan sir for 3 months and under asad sir for 3 months,I hope everything is clear.
Everyone nods except one soul tat is our geet who is continuously blabbering to babaji.
Geet:wah babaji wah zindagi mein pehli baat aapse much maanga tha* babaji smirking really geet pehli baat but as far as I remember this is ur 1lakh 50 thousandth wish my child* ab toh mujhe us khadoos ke saath kaam karna hi padega ab na sahi par 3 mahine baad hi sahi,hmph*making angry baby face*aapne isko khurana khandaan mein kyun paida kiya,kisi aur khandaan mein paida karwa dete jaise laalu Prasad ke yaha ya osama bin laden ke yahaan ya phir raavan ka ancestor bana dete waise bhi usika ansh(part) lagta hain.
But before geet could curse more asad and Maan entered the cabin in full style and attitude,girls wer already drooling over them and boys wer aspiring to become lik dem,whereas saddi geet was praying for some miracle hoping Maan would hav forgot her.but alas babaji had other plans 😊
Maan:adi saare interns ko tumne sab samjha diya na clearly.
Adi:yes sir I have explained everything in detail.
Maan:hmm k den get me the names v hav to divide dem into groups.
Adi hands over names to Maan.
Asad:k guys as adi ne tum logo ko bataya hoga tat in wat topics Maan and me specialize so according to ur intrests u can join any1 of our teams so its ur decision k let's start dividing den.
Adi calls out the names one by one present in the list .
Adi:shivani.
Shivani:sir I would join asad sir's team first
Adi:k done. Amrita next
Amrita:I would like to join Maan sir's team sir.
Adi:k,vishaka
Vishaka:asad sir's team sir.
Adi:k, next mark louis
Mark:asad sir's team sir.
Before adi could say Der was a loud squeak from none other than saddi geet.
Geet:nahiii!!!! SATYANAAASH,SIYAPPA,HAAYE BABAJI AB MAIN DUSHT KI TEAM MEIN NAHIII!!.
Asad and Maan who wer busy in discussion got startled by d squeak and so wer the other interns and adi's jaw was touching the floor.geet who was literary in the pose of old filmy heroine who has just got the news tat of her husband's death ie her hands wer on her ears and her eyes closed and her face tilted towards the ceiling came out of her classic pose aftr hearing..
Maan:TUMMM,TUMM YAHAN KYA KAR RAHI HO *with anger ofcourse*
Geet: Haaye rabba yeh toh mujhe abhi bhi pehchanta hain,ab mera kya hoga babaji* cutely pouting looking towards ceiling*.
All follow geet's gaze and look towards the ceiling ,Maan getting frustrated
Maan:upar kya dekh rahi ho yaha dekho,Maine kuch pucha tumse ki tum yaha kya kar rahi hoon.
😉
Edited by farru786 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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big dhamaka ahead so she will join aSAD'S Team???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow geet will surely join maans team
waiting 4 more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Got the link dear but it is not clickable. Please make it a hyperlink, things will get much easier. The story is lovely, three adorable couples in one go. Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chapter 4b
Location:buaji's home,chandini chowk
Khushi stops happy ji's vehicle,thanks him and runs inside with the asthama pump.on entering the home she sees a beautiful girl in her early twenties helping buaji to settle on the sofa.she was wearing a white and cream patiala,hair neatly braided and a sweet smile.khushi was confused about her identity,shrugging away her thoughts she went inside.
Khushi:buaji,hum le aaya aapka pump.
Buaji:arre titaliya Hum theek hain nandkishore,zoya ne Hume pump laake de diya tha.
Khushi looks confused,hence buaji introduce zoya.
Buaji:parmeshwari yeh zoya bitiya hain,hamari padosi badi pyaari bacchi hain hamri zoya,sirf zoya nahi hamre toh saare padosi nandkishore ki kripa se bade ache hain.
Zoya:AAP khushi haina,buaji ki bhateji kal buaji bata rahi thi ki AAP as rahi hain,main zoya woh saamne neele(blue) rang ka that haina hamara hain.
Khushi(smiling widely):namaste AAP se milke badi khushi huwi zoya ji,aur aapka bahut shukriya buaji ki madat karne ke liye.
Zoy:arre khushi tum mujhe plzz zoya bulao,zoya ji nahi main aur tum lagbhag ek hi umar ke hain,aur rahi baat shukriya ki toh buaji jitni aapki hain utni hi hamaari bhi hain,inhe ke aangan mein khel kar toh hum bade huwe hain.tum unse jitna pyaar karti hain utna hi hum sab bhi karte hain.main toh buaji ku kheer dene aayi thi,dekha unhe asthama attack aaya hain to humne unhe pump laake de diya woh hamaare ammi ko bhi asthma hain toh ghar mein hamesha ek pump rehta hain.
Khushi:hum toh bahut pehle hi aajaate pump leke ,lekin raaste mein ek laad governor se mulakat ho gayi thi,us raakshas ki wajah se Der hogayi.*becomes angry thinking how Asr insulted her,she would hav Said more if Der was time but she couldn't as she was worried for buaji,but she was happy tat all supported her but she left as it was getting late when she heard him say IT'S ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA NOT CHOTE.
Khushi:naam bhi aise bolraha tha maano Delhi ka shenshah (king)ho,hmph naam bade aur darshan chote.behen ram jaisi aur bhai raavan jaisa.
Zoya and buaji confused seeing khushi blabbering something abt some laad governor.
Buaji:Ae titaliya,kono kaand karke aayi ho kya,hai re nandkishore aate hi gadbad kardi ho kya.
Khushi:arre nahi buaji,aisa kuch nahi huwa AAP aaraam kijiye.
Zoya:haan buaji,AAP aaraam kijiye main bhi chalti hoon khana bana na hain,khushi tum abhi abhi aayi ho araam Karo main khana bhij wa dungi,aur mujhe na nahi sunni main khana bhijwa dungi bas chalo chalti hoon,apna khayal rakhna buaji.
Khushi:aapke padosi toh bahut acche hain buaji.
Buaji:woh toh hain parmeshwari,chalo ab hum kuch Der araam kar lete hain tum bhi araam karlo subah se bhag doud kar rahi ho.
Khushi:ji buaji.

Location:KC
Maan:Maine pucha kya kar rahi ho tum yaha.
Geet gets annoyed with Maan's questions,so she replies sarcastically.
Geet:woh krish 3 realise huwi thi na Friday ko toh Maine bahut koshish ki lekin ticket hi nahi mile toh isiliye aaj dekhne aayi hoon.*smiling*
Maan:WHAT,pagal hogayi ho kya,kya bak rahi ho.
Geet:kyun jawab atpata laga,magar SIR aapka sawaal bhi toh atpata tha naa,is cutee se adi sir ne*adi becomes scarlet hearing sum1 addressing him cute,while Maan passes his famous glare getting annoyed to hear geet calling adi cutee*kaha na ki hum sab interns hain to phir pucha kyun aapne.
Maan*man mein laddo phuta but obviously cannot show right*:Tum aur intern,adi kaise kaise log chune hain tumne mujhe is disaster ko apne office mein rakhkar aapna office ko barbaad nahi karna,yeh dheere dheere mera pura office Tod degi.
Geet fumes hearing Maan calling her disaster,she will surely show him wat she is capable off.
Adi*murmuring in Maan's ear*:sir yeh ladki apne batch ki topper hain,isne aapke GPA points ka bhi record Tod diya ,aapse 3 points aage hain yeh.
Maan was very very very surprised he always was proud tat till now no one could break his record and here dis girl did it,hell she doesn't even seem soo padaku types.Asad was impressed hearing tat a girl broke Maan's record wich even he couldn't do and tat too in civil engineering wich is considered tough for girls.Maan masking his suprise
Maan:toh miss handa AAP yaha ki intern hain aur asad ki team toh finalize ho gayi matlab ul work under me soo let's see jitni tej tumhaari zubaan hain kya utna hi tej tumhaara dimaag bhi hain kya.
Geet:nahiii *all again gets startled*mera matlab mujhe asad sir ki team mein jaana hain bas mujhe pehle interiors seekhna hain.
Asad:magar miss handa sirf teen mahine ki toh baat hain uske baad teams will be exchanged.
Geet:.no sir 3 mahine bahut lambaaa time hain,agar in teen mahino mein main margayi toh,accident mein mere yaadasht chali gayi toh,main flood mein beh gayi toh,main andhi(blind)hogayi toh.na baba na I can't take risk sir.*finishes her blabbering nervously*.
All give her u hav lost it look ,Maan gets an idea
Maan:I think miss handa ko mere saath kaam,karne mein darr lagta hain asad soo u keep her in ur team not a problem,I can understand ur fears miss handa.*smirkingly*
Tat actually worked as noone absolutely noone challenges geet handa.
Geet:darr aur woh bhi aapse plzzz Mr khurana itna hawa mein mat udiye,geet handa sirf aur sirf.cockroach se darti hain aur kisiki himmat nahi hain mujhe darane ki samjhe *says geet proudly with head held high as if received Bharat ratna*adi sir mera naam likhiye Maan sir ki team mein.
Both look at each other challengingly and babaji smiles happily now dis is gonna be fun. 😊

Huh,guys I'm tired typing tat huge update anyway thanks for ur replies it really means a lot.thank you 😊
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chapter 5a
location:a bungalow in Delhi
ETF enters the houz of the victim suresh menon who was murdered early morning in his study.his wife Mrs menon is an ex actress a beautiful girl in her mid twenties.whole ETF enters the home and arjun is shocked to see such a beautiful wife of Mr menon who was 50yrs old.
Arjun:dekha rathode isse kehtey hain langoor ki naseeb mein hoor,saala itni khobsurat ladki ko widwa banagaya.
Whole team roles their eyes as this is common bcoz arjun sir is a certified flirt of Delhi no no whole of India I guess if it wasn't for his sharp brain,he would hav been thrown out looong ago.
Rathode*irritatingly*:rawte v r here to investigate the murder so better concentrate and stop eyeing Mrs menon unhone abhi apna pati obits hain so better behave.
Arjun:arre rathode is mote saand jaisa pati khoke mujhe nahi lagta Mrs menon ko dukh se zyaada khushi huwi hogi.
Rathode:shut up rawte let's start for wat v r here warna il surely fire u this time.
Arjun:dnt giv me tat crap rathode,mujhe fire kiya toh ETF band karna padega so kuch aur socho mujhe threaten karne ke liye.
Rathode*murmers in arjun's ear*:RIYA.
Tats enough for arjun to shut up,he looks accusingly towards a smirking rathode and the team is confused seeing arjun looking a bit scared.
Shree:yaar chotu aisa kya kaha hoga rathode sir ne Jo arjun sir itne dare dare lag rahe hain.
Chotu:arre shree chodna in dono ka yeh dono hi jaane,naa hi yeh hame batainge naa hum mein himmat hain ki hum inse sawaal kare.
Shree:bilkul thik keh raha hain tu ,chod jaane de
Meanwhile lisa enters the scene.
Lisa:sir Mr menon ko heart ke khareeb stab kiya hain,excess. Bleeding ke wajah se inki mout huwi hain.
Rathode:Lou clue liza,fingerprint ya kuch .
Lisa:no sir Der r no clues attack bahut safari se huwa hain.
Rathode:le it t's start with our investigation.chotu saare noukaron se puch tach karo,shree Mr menon ke phone records check karo.
Choree(shree+chotu):yes sir.
Rathode and rawte move towards Mrs menon who is crying calculatively as if not wanting to ruin her mascara. Bfore rathode could speak arjun started his investigation AKA flirting no no giving sympathy as u can call it 😉.
Arjun*offering his hand kerchief*:sambhaliye apne AAP ko Mrs menon,aapki khobsurat aankhon mein aanson ache nahi lagte.yeh lijiye ankhein ponch lijiye.
Mrs menon blushes with arjun's comment and takes the offered hand kercheif.sameer and aisha role their eyes.
Mrs menon:thank you officer,kya karoon aansu rukhte hi nahi,ek hi pati the na,mere isiliye Rona aagayaa.
Aisha*self thought*:ya right dusron ke 8 -10 hote hain naa.I think isine murder kiya hoga.
Arjun:main hoon na Mrs menon,AAP bilkul chinta mat kijiye yeh mera card rakhlijiye,agar aadhi raat ko bhi zaroorat padi toh mujhe ek miss call dijiyega main haazir ho jaonga.
Mrs menon nods shyly:thanks officer.
Rathode:so Mrs menon AAP kaha thi jab yeh sab huwa.
Mrs menon:ji main spa gayi thi as winters shuru hogaye hain toh isiliye apne aapki rejuvenate karne gayi thi as u see mere skin winters mein thoda rough...
Aisha*interrupting*Mrs menon hame aapke spa details nahi chahiye,AAP jab aayi toh aapne kya dekha.
Mrs menon:woh Main aayi aur manju hamari maid ne bataya ki Suresh study mein hain aur subah se kuch khaya bhi nahi hain,so I was worried for him as une tablets lene hotey hain as he is diabetic so jab main study mein gayi toh he was lying in blood and starts crying again.
Arjun:AAP apne aapki sambhaliye Mrs menon don't worry hum aapke husband ke murderer ko jaroor pakad lenge.abhi hum chalte hain zaroorat padegi toh aapko dubara pareshaan karenge u take care and dnt forget call me anytime,anywhere il be Der.
Mrs menon smilingly and blushiny:thanks officer.
Arjun:dnt mention Mrs menon,its alrigh...
Rathode*cutting him short*:chale rawte looks at arjun warningly.
Arjun*understanding his gaze*:k Mrs menon c u later.take care.
All exit menon houz
Rathode:really arjun call me even at midnight and ill be available like seriously.
Arjun:haan toh hum police walon ki duty hain ki hum hamesha sabki madad ke liye tayyar rahe right.
Rathode:ya right aur especially ladies ki liye to arjun suryakant rawte is available 24/7haina.asks rathode sarcastically.
Arjun:uffo rathode let's go tum toh kuch bhi sochte ho .
Arjun moves towards the car.while rathode stands Der thinking sumthing and smirking.
Rathode*self thought*:rawte bas aaj ka din hain maja karlo kyunki kal tumhaari is flirting par paabandi lagne waali hain .tume team se nikaal nahi sakta magar tumhaari band bajane ka poora intezaam kar chuka hoon main.just wait and watch arjun suryakant rawte.
All sit in the SUV and move towards ETF.

Awaiting ur replies guys.as all characters r introduced now the love story of all four Jodie will start soo follow ur favriote jodi and their chatpati love stories.
Edited by farru786 - 11 years ago
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It was super update
Loved it
Thanks for pm me

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