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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update.. loved it.. thanks for pm..
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Originally posted by: unishaz

superb update.. loved it.. thanks for pm..



thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Woah I liked Sushma's guts and the irritation she caused to both the Acps.
And Sam, and his puppy love now turned nto nightmares. Everytime now this very memories will haunt him and he will regrett .
Finally some clues, so next time in Goa???
Continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear.
just loved it.
rathore feels that his love is nightmere.
continue soon.
and thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
That Sushma...I love her !!
That girl is giving tough time to both ACPs. & her retorts were awesome.
She played her part well...
Now the ACPs have to rush...
felt bad for broken SAM...I hope till the end you'll keep him strong enough to face that girl.
waiting for the next dhamaka...do continue.

thanks for PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

Woah I liked Sushma's guts and the irritation she caused to both the Acps.
And Sam, and his puppy love now turned nto nightmares. Everytime now this very memories will haunt him and he will regrett .
Finally some clues, so next time in Goa???
Continue soon!



thanks vampire...yeah sushma has guts...bringing in the past during an interogation is not easy but she is the best her way you know...😃

goa???lets see,stay tuned and keep commenting...😉😊


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamsad1607

That Sushma...I love her !!

That girl is giving tough time to both ACPs. & her retorts were awesome.
She played her part well...
Now the ACPs have to rush...
felt bad for broken SAM...I hope till the end you'll keep him strong enough to face that girl.
waiting for the next dhamaka...do continue.

thanks for PM.



yeah i love sushma too..😉😉

stay tuned and keep commenting atisha...thank u so much...😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks you everyone for such lovely comments...Here i come again with a new part...Hope you enjoy this part too...😃

thanks RIMI






Chapter 11:

Days were passing like hours,ETF was working day and night.The team was searching data,analysing records,tracking people,informers were on high alert but nothing was fruitful.Search for Paul in goa was being carried out by goa police but there was still no news of his existence.Rawte and Rathore was occasionally losing their temper and the whole bomb always fell on the other poor souls.They were silently gulping down coffee and working all day and late nights.

One such day,Shree came in with a good news.Something has been found.Shree had been tracking the IP address from which the order for the consignment had been sent to Mahesh.Though the email address is inactive after that email,but a connecting IP was still working.He had tracked down that IP and found the IP to connect signal from Goa.He was trying to hack that IP and get the information about the owner but it was getting difficult.The IP was catching signals from a different source and he was getting lost.

After spending two sleepless nights,he had got the owner of that particular IP and it was some Anurag Srivastav.Goa police had been informed of the same and they have started to look for him.That have taken them to an underground godown usually used for preserving wine.But they didnt find anything suspicious.They have checked into the government records and found an Anurag Srivastav there.They have sent his picture and his details to ETF.Shree had come to inform that to his seniors.

Shree projected the picture on the big screen and every other head turned towards that.It showed a pretty handsome,well built man at an age of late 30s,clad in a brown t-shirt, wearing specs,long curly hair tied in a pony tail at the back of his head, looking at them with a smile on his lips.According to the details he was a gym trainer at goa,basically belonging to gaziabad,working and staying at goa for the past 12 years.

Everyone was looking at the screen but Arjun looked back at Rathore and found him looking keenly at something,lost in thought.

'Rathore...',Arjun called him but there was no response,

Everyone turned back at Rathore and found him lost.Ayesha who was near him called him again,this time a bit loudly,

'Sir,kiya hua?? ap thik hai?,'

'haan,Shree is admi ke color pe zoom karo,uske right shoulder ki taraf,'Rathore told Shree,after composing himself,

Shree zoomed at the spot and found a tattoo,not completely visible but a part of it was peeping from the side of the shirt.It seemed like a designed 'S',with a 'A' embeded in it.Arjun looked at the tattoo and again looked back at Rathore,silently waiting for him to speak what was troubling him.

'ye to ek tattoo hai,Goa mein ye bohot common hain sir,isme itna special
kiya hai?',Ayesha asked

'I know this Tattoo,'Rathore stopped at looked at Arjun,'it is on Sa...Sushma's back.'

Ayesha,Shree,Sakshi and Chotu kept looking at their bosses.There was something surely big hidden from them and it concerns Rathore Sir.They were looking at each other when rawte barked his orders,

'Ayesha and sakshi tum dono Sushma se milo aur check karo uske back pe ye tatoo hai kiya?agar hai to take a picture of the same and check uska koi special meaning,tattoo banane walo se pata karo.'

'Right sir,'they were about to sprint out when Rathore called them back,

'Sakshi ruko,mein aur ayesha Sushma se milte hai,tum aur shree is anurag ke bare mein pata karo,anurag ke nam pe koi case pehele hua tha,criminal records se match karo,sakshi tum reporters se pata karo,shayad kisiko ye chehera yaad ho...Chotu tum...',

the conversation was interupted with a call on chotu's phone,he spoke on it for few minutes and then spoke up.

'Sir mere informer ka phone tha,Dock's ki taraf firse kuch movements nazar ayi hai,check karna hoga,mera informer bhi yahi hai,mein milta hu',

'ruko chotu,mein bhi chalta hu',Arjun retorted back and both went out for the docks.All others left for their work.Rathore asked Ayesha to wait for him at the parking,he would be there in 5 minutes.Ayesha too agreed and went out.



Journey to the security custody was a silent one,though ayesha kept on looking at sameer every now and then,but sameer never responded back.He concentrated on the road and kept on driving.Ayesha kept to herself and didnt bother to ask him about his concerns.They reached the Security area in another hour,it was located in the outskirts of the city,and entered.Ayesha and Sameer showed their cards and went in.After a few more formalties they reached in front of Sushma.

Sushma was drinking water when Ayesha went inside the cell.She looked up holding the glass in her hand,some water still left in it.Sushma noticed Sameer waiting outside and smirked.Ayesha walked upto her and spoke to her,

'Tumhare pith pe koi tattoo hai?',

'Tum mujhse kiyu puch rahi ho??apne chief se puch lo,unhe pata hai,mujhse bhi zada ye baat wo jante hai mere bare mein,',sushma replied showing sameer through her eyes.

Ayesha looked back and found Sameer standing outside facing his back to her and speaking with the inspector on duty there.She looked back at sushma and spoke to her,

'ghumo mujhe wo tattoo dekhna hai,'Ayesha told her angrily,

Sushma didnt budge and started drinking the rest of the water from the glass.Ayesha held her arm and turned her harshly which brought her closer to ayesha.This move angered her and she splashed the rest of the water on her face.Ayesha was taken aback by this incident and was about to slap her but just that moment a sound of a tight slap was heard.Ayesha looked up and found sameer standing there and sushma laying on ground holding her cheek,eyes red with anger.

Sameer was talking with the inspector when he heard sushma speaking to ayesha about her chief but he ignored.But then he heard a splash of water being thrown and found ayesha with a wet face he couldnt hold on and entered the room and slapped sushma with all the anger he had.He stood there with his hands fisted and face red.Did he repent for what he did?? He didnt know.Ayesha kept looking at him and Sushma, both were looking at each other.

'Ayesha ise uthao,'the husky voice came back after some time,

Ayesha held sushma and made her sit on the bed,her lips were bleeding and her cheek red.

'anurag kaha hai?',sameer started,

'mujhe nehi pata.'

'mein last time puch raha hu,anurag kaha hai?aur tum logo ka plan kiya hai?',

silence.Ayesha held her hair in a fist and she made a painful face but still silence prevailed.

'Sapna,',Sushma looked up hearing the name and ayesha too surprised,'haan sapna.tum mujhe kuch batao ya na batao,mein pata karke rahunga,agar tumhe lagta hai,ki tumhari wajay se mein kamzoor par jaunga,to eisa kuch nehi hoga.Mein kisiko bhi kuch nehi hone dunga itna yaad rakhna.Tum sapna ho ya Sushma mujhe koi fark nehi parta.tum sirf ek criminal ho aur hamare kabse mein ho.Aur tumhe saza dene ke liye mein kisi bhi had tak ja sakta hoon.Ayesha tattoo check karo.'Sameer kept looking unblinking at her eyes.

Sushma was numb.She kept looking at sameer utterly suprised.The man who came the day before and the man standing in front of her were two different people.She might have unestimated their power.A blunt smile formed on her lips,

'the game will be interesting,'she thought.

Ayesha had taken a photo of the tattoo at the back of her shoulder and indeed it was similar to the one they had seen on anurag's chest.She forwarded it to shree and signalled to Rathore.

Rathore got up still not breaking the eye lock with sushma and waited for a few seconds and rushed out,directly towards the parking without stopping anywhere.Ayesha took care of the formalities and went out to find Sameer holding on the door of the SUV completely eyes burning with fire.She went close to him and stood there waiting for him to compose.

Bas itna hi...please read and give me your reviews...😊

PRECAP : some more clues found...sushma escape from jail...😉

thanks
RIMI



Edited by rimi_invisible - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome.. loved it.. etf getting clues.. rathores quick thinking.. sushma misbehaving with aisha.. rathore slap her instead.. finally rowdy rathore in action.. superb.. thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update
loved it
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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