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Posted: 11 years ago
Ahaan, The twist tastes too good 😉
Now face to face. Waiting for the confrontation. Continue soon. And once again sorry for the late replies!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Payal_156

sorry for d late..
awesome updates..
very well written
lovely
thanks for d pm..
ahaan waiting for d face to face convo..
update soon!!



its absolutely fine payal...and thanks so much for reading my work...next update soon...thanks payal
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

Sorry sorry sorry for very late reply!
Exams you know?
So started from 5c.
First FB of Arjun was about , Rosh-Sam-arjun, was quiet funny. And rosh, Ah this lady have her own effect. Liked the fb ver much.
Then Samerr and Sapna! That was short time meeting changed his whole life. I just imagined Sapna and Sameer! And their convos on coffee shop was cool.
Terrorist attack? May be something is in suseence!
Lets go to next chap!

Actually man! You dropped the bomb. Sushma is Sapna! Now what will happen??
The case going well!!

Heck this Nita gal really annoyed me. I mean who does that for attention. Errr!
Rocky wasnt innoscent! Great going story.
Continue soon rimi.




thank you so so much vampire...you read and commented on every part...i am really honoured..👏😳😳

yeah lots of bombs coming up..stay tuned to the story...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

Wowww you dropped bomb again. Thats rocky's brother name came out of the blue. Very well crafted case and its realtion Sushma really made this case even more interesting with a little touch of personal feelings and turmoils of Sameer . Loved it!!



thanks dear again...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

Ahaan, The twist tastes too good 😉
Now face to face. Waiting for the confrontation. Continue soon. And once again sorry for the late replies!



stay tuned...next part coming soon...thanks for all your comments dear...loved you...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you everyone for the lovely comments...here comes the next part...it is a bit short...small convo between the love birds,long part coming soon...



Part 10:


'hi sammy,long time,kaise ho??'

Whatever self control Rathore had maintained till now was slowly losing with her sight in front of him but the call 'sammy' took it completely away.He held the arm of the chair Arjun was sitting and kept looking at her.All the pain,despair and abundance everything came stricking him again,this time a bit more harshly.The reality of the dream he had woven once has crashed down into his worst nightmare that might continue to haunt him all his life.

Arjun understood Rathore would not be able to start so he started his questioning.

'Sushma,why are you here?'

'ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte,kafi suna hai apke bare mein,per lagta hai sab bakwas hai,apko to ye bhi nehi pata ke mein yaha kyun hu?well ap hi ne pakda tha mujhe us din godown mein,remember?',Sushma replied
casually,patiently,smiling and curling a strand of her hair,

'mujhe sirf mere sawal ka jawab chahiye,kiya yaad hai batane jau to wo tumhare liye bilkul bhi acha nehi hoga,tum samjhi,ya mein apne tarike se samjhau?

Contrary to what Arjun had thought about her response,it turned out to be a hearty laugh from her side.She suddenly started laughing out of the blue holding her stomach,as if would fall down from the chair any moment.Sameer and Arjun kept looking at her surprised by her sudden gesture.She calmed herself down and sat silently for few more seconds.Then came the reply,

'Sammy,ye tumhara dost,bilkul bewakuf hai,oh sorry ab to tum log dost nehi hona, second-in-command.Batao ise,ise galat lagta hai ki sari duniya nasamaj hai,ye akela ki samjhta hai.Nahi,Acp mein samaj rahi hu tumhari bebasi,kuch clue hath nehi lag raha hai na?mein thori madad karu?,'and again she started laughing.

Arjun looked and Rathore and found him angrily looking at Sushma,

'Apni bakwas band karo sap..,batao yaha kiya hone wala hai??kiya plan hai tumhara?'

A smile crepped up on her face,

'Abhi tak sapna ko nehi bhule sammy??acha chalo batati hu,',Sushma leaned forward and lowered her voice as if whispering,'blast hoga,booom,5 bar,aur tum nehi rok sakte,bhag jao,mein tumhe marte huye nehi dekh sakhti,'she made a sad face..

'Blast?kaha hoga blast?kab hoga?'

'Aree sab kuch mein hi bata du?to tumhara dept kiya holiday pe jaiga?kudh pata karo,apne is dost ke sath,kiyu Acp rawte,ye sab kuch pata laga leta hai??'

Both of them got up disgusted at her direct sarcasms.There was a blast to take place they need to find that as soon as possible.Both went out leaving a smirking Sushma.She did have the guts to irritate the acps.But then she was the best in her field just like them.



They headed towards the ETF office.Both were disturbed with this revealation.They already had an idea that something like this gonna happen.But then confirmation of the same was a disturbing thought.Both reached office and assembled everyone at the conference room.

'Team,5 blast plan kiya ja raha hai,kaha,kab,kaisi blast we dont know.We need to work on that team.Seher ko bachana hi hoga.'

'kiya?? apko kaise pata sir?',Ayesha asked Rathore,

'hum abhi sushma se milke a rahe hai ayesha,usne hume khud bataya,'

'per wo jhoot bhi to bol sakti hai?shayad bhatkane ki koshish kar rahi hai?kuch aur hone wala hai?'

'ho sakta hai...Chotu apne informers ko activate karo,dekho kuch bhi pata chalta hai kiya?,Shree sushma ke bare mein kuch pata chala un files se?'

'Jee sir,Sushma,Anna kartos ke maut ke baad unka business join ki hai,almost 8 saal pehele.Kehete hai wo Anna se bhi zada khatarnak hai.Anna goa se operate karta tha,wo bhi wahi se suru ki thi apna kam,per in 8 salo mein usne apna business india ke har jagah fehelaya,india ke bahar bhi uska kam chalta hai,Dubai,malaysia are major areas jaha se wo operate karti hai.Uska exact location track karna abhi tak possible nehi hua hai.kaise kam karti hai,contact kaise karti hai,kisiko nehi pata.'

'Pata karna hoga shree,wo yaha achanak kiyu ayi?ek kam karo,anna ke bare mein pata karo,uski maut kaise hui?uska background check karo',Arjun told shree

'right sir,ill do that',Shree went out to his work station,

'Ayesha and sakshi,department mein jitne bhi bomb blast ya smuggling ke previous cases hain,unhe check karo,dekho kisi mein anurag ka nam hai kiya?'

'sir.ye Anurag ?'

'Mahesh ne bataya tha,kisi anurag ne use wo consignment ta contract diya tha,dekho uske bare mein kiya pata chalta hai?'



All left for their respective works leaving behind the two Acps.

'Rathore tumhe kuch kehena hai?'

'kis bare mein rawte?'

'sushma ke bare mein,tum use pehele se jante ho,shayad koi ajeeb baat jo tumhe tab ajeeb nehi lagi par ab lag rahi hai?'

Rathore looked away,he was trying to think.Rawte was asking a question and he didnt have an appropriate answer.He was so madly in love with that girl that he never thought she could be such a devil.

Yes he got it.Devil's Club.Sapna visited that club every alternate day.It was a normal covered parking lot area and members consisted of a few drunkards,few intolerable drug addicts and some suppliers.He had once asked her why she went to such a filthy place to which her reply was that one of the members was her cousin and she was trying to protect him from any harm.She never introduced her cousin to him,nor was he asked to join her to meet them inside.

He always waited for her outside the parking area and was always asked to keep her bag safely with him.Though he found it quite strange at times and wanted to go inside with her,she used to shut him with a kiss on his lips and a promise she would be back soon to complete the rest of it. She always kept her promise but what she did inside and what was there in the bag that was so important, he didnt know.

'Cousin ka nam kiya tha?',Rawte asked him when he finished..

'paul,that was how she called him',

'goa mein hi reheta tha to we can try to find out'

'tumhe sach mein lagta hai rawte ki wo sach hai?'

'i know,uspe yakeen karna...'

'gunaah hai,...',rathore completed and rushed out of the room.Arjun kept looking at his retreating back.


bas abhi ke liye itna hi...tell me how you liked it...likes and comments must...hope you will enjoy this part...

thanks
rimi



Edited by rimi_invisible - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
no energy now true lol
i guess..
haww here 1st too
waiting for treat asap!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing dear Awesome update
I must salute the guts of this spna AKA Sushma too good
SO now blasts are planned or is she laying
Cant Wait to read more
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update
loved it
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
hmm ye bi ittu sa lol...
hope my treat is big..
awesome part..
lol acps get effected by sushma..
blast haww..
hope yaha bach jae..
u know wat i mean hehe..
nyc convo!
stalking rocks..!
waiting ..

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