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Posted: 11 years ago
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Unreserved my comment on Page 1
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was just wow...beautiful one...loved the way you portrayed his emotions...loved the OS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -FrozenRain-

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Raina First of all a warm welcome to you into Kriyaansh/Arsha Fandome
Shaz tussi great ho ji
Coming to your OS its beautifully penned..
I loved it how you described Rey's feeling on missing Kriya the love of his life..
Its a pleasure to read the OS with Song as BG.


Thank You for writing up on Reyaansh

All the best for your Exams



Thank youuu! Hahha yeah, Shazzy jee great hain! 😆

Thanks so much again! Yeah, writing an OS/FF with songs embedded is my USP😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..DamonCrazy..

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Mera REY!!!
I am highly flattered at the fact that I could turn you into such a pankha in a week <3
Thanx Upi :* Apne ArSha ke liye kuch bhi <3
Unresed! BEST LAMBA COMMENT, WOOO 😆
Okay...RAE!!!!! 🤗
Dude...am I happy to get you on board this ship or WHAT!!!! I bet, you are😆
You know , I think I've commented about how your OSes, though rich in depth & emotions, tends to go a little on the mushy side. Ek do-baar to kaha hoga 😛 But you know what...THIS was perfect from the first line till the end <3 I know, even Maisy says that. Everything I write ends up being too OTT or cheesy. Thank you though! YAAAY 😃
I'm so proud of you Rae 👏 Most of all because, even though the basic essence of your writing is same, some how, its become better :p This was so controlled & perfect & angsty & BANG ON!!!! The way you described Rey's heartbreak...best of all through his first love...DANCE, was perfection. YEAH! I wanted to incorporate dance in it somehow, because BG mei music bajaana bohot ho chuka tha! 😆 Thank youuu! 😳
Reyaansh Singhania felt all the walls around him starting to build, and that was the day he vowed never to love again.
THIS!!! I loved it <3 I don't know whether it was the perfect placing of the dialogue, or the way you fit it with the song...but it was extremely poignant & powerful & struck straight into my heart. And you know what...I connected to Rey again in the way I used to when I watched D3 <3 I could feel HIM, & his heart was open for me to read. And that...you don't know how much that means to me! <3 OHMYGOD. BIGGEST COMPLIMENT EVER. I made you see the OLD Rey in this work. HAILA!!!! I'm SO flattered Shazzy, 😃
I am going to now go & repeatedly pat my back...for having made YOU a part of this fandom which I adore SO FREAKING MUCH!!!! Because damn...you have SO much to give it <3 Tu saamne hoti toh I'd have patted your back too! 😆
#countingtillKriyaGhai #likeMAD!
PS...Love ya 😉
PPS...Everyone else...yeah, yeah...I am awesome😎 Excuse the modesty😎


THANKOOO SHAZZYYY <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -spongy-

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beautiful
such an amazing OS
it had so many emotions
and the emotions were so well written
i loved it
the way rey was showed.. and the way he suffered 👏👏

bravo !!
loved it
please please PM this OS to me 😳


Thank you SO much! Yeah, I wanted to write something about his heartbreak, so voila! 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Blind.Dance-

Choco chips??

that's all I could remember in your name :P

Well coming to the OS. It was beautiful. The song you used!! I love it to hell.. And yeah this song suits well with the current Reyaansh Singhania's problems :P

I loved the way you portrayed his emotions. \

And a new ArSha Kriyaansh Fan??

Then come run into this tight hug and Welcome to ArSha/Kriyaansh Land and keep dreaming !! 😆

Welcome!! 🤗


Yeah, SO many people had started calling me that, ki naam rakhna hee pada😆

Thank you SO much! I love this song too, and it fit perfectly, I thought. So use kar daala! 😆
*JHAPPPIII* 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

Amazing work...u dnt seem like a 1 week fan, ur way of xpressing his pov was marvellous..do write more


Wow. Thank you! That means a lot! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you so much! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovely7010

It was just wow...beautiful one...loved the way you portrayed his emotions...loved the OS


Thank you so much! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!! I have no words to tell u what a mind-blowing writer u are!! 👏
Your description is so beautiful...loved the way u have described Rey's feelings...it's absolutely amazing
Loved ur os a lot...do pm me when u write more

P.S.-Welcome to the Kriyaanshians' family 🤗

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