Arshi FF: Hopes and Ambitions. Thread 1 - Page 71

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

311.1k

Users

155

Likes

2.2k

Frequent Posters

A_BA thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
You are updating so fast (not that I'm complaining), I haven't been able to comment after the last couple of chapter!!

Chapter 17:
It's wrong of Arnav to treat Khushi as just one of his employees - he's basically only talking to her for work related issues and doesn't even realize that he has responsibilities as a husband. Sure they are not the conventional married couple, but he still owes it to her to respect their relationship. In spite of all her personal drama, Khushi is still able to prevail and make an impact within the NGO; shows what a fighting spirit she has.

Chapter 18:
Jealousy is an interesting emotion and you portrayed it so well. NK is harmless to Khushi, but he's working wonders in terms of making Arnav realize that he actually has a wife that he should treasure. I'm glad Khushi spoke up about not being treated as a wife, but Arnav's response was a little bittersweet for me. I'm glad to know there is this intense passion between them, but I feel bad for Khushi that she was robbed of a beautiful first kiss (I'm assuming it's her first kiss) - yes the kiss was passionate, but it was as a way to prove a point/show Khushi her place. And obviously, Khushi realized it too as she admitted to feeling like a wh*re, which was so sad.

Chapter 19:
I'm glad that this arrogant Arnav realized that he made a huge mistake with his wife - the tulips were a great first step to getting his apology going, but he needs to do more; he's a politician (and should be a lawyer according to Khushi) so he should have lyrical process and should be able to at least talk this over with Khushi (unless he's that affected by Khushi that he's not able to convey his thoughts to her).

Arnav's mother and brother prove that having money doesn't buy one class - those two are disgusting and a disgrace honestly. Can't imagine how Khushi is living with her. Arnav is there to listen to these taunts occasionally but he won't always be there to stop his family from speaking like this towards his wife - he needs to realize that he shouldn't let Khushi deal with this and should move out with her at the earliest.

Shyam is a creeper - gave me the chills just reading about him. I am so scared that he's going to do something really bad, I just have a bad feeling about him and his intentions. The unfortunate thing is that he's not scared of anyone and that makes it easy for him to carry out his evil plans😡

I felt so bad for Khushi during her conversation with Shirin, or rather Khushi having to listen to Shirin's blabber. I know this Lavanya affair is going to come bite Arnav in the ass in the future, both with his politics and with his relationship with Khushi, but I'm really dreading that. Luckily, I know that Khushi is not going to take it quietly - she has showed it countless times that she's not intimidated by Arnav and definitely isn't afraid to speak her mind to him.

Thanks for the super quick updates; I'm really enjoying the pace and style of this story!!
richaarshi thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
thanks for the PM
update soon
yoga123 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
The title is apt for this chapter...loved Arnav's sorry...no body can be angry after this sorry...loved how he supported his wife at the dining table...and how he made sure that she would join him to the party...finally khushi and jhangid have come face to face...khushi's answers made the statement true that Arnav and khushi are a match made in heaven...I loved khushi's confidence in Arnav and her realization while defending their relationship with jhangid...today's events will definitely play a role in their relationship going ahead...Brilliant chapter...thanks for the PM
alicia212 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Wow great story please update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for sharing your story with us.
enlightenme thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Just a word for Arnav-Khushi's relationships 'its complicated'. 1st Arnav doesn't acknowledge the fact that he has a wife then in a spur of jealousy he realizes that Khushi belongs to him she is his wife and to prove a point ends up kissing her or should say brushing her up in the wrong way hurting her and himself in the process. Today was completely different he behaved like a very protective husband, who immensely loves his wife. Hate the creep Shyam I wish he does behave a bit more creepy than he already does and f**ks up his image and the public support that he has garnered. But, it was very irrattional for Arnav to behave that way in front of so many people. Khushi handled the situation well, though through this incident shyam came to know about arnav's weak nerve and how to infuriate him in public. All I can say is that he cares for Khushi a lot.

My thoughts is Khushi wants to give their realtionship a chance, she wants this marriage to work. She is falling in love with Arnav a bit in every update, 1st she was happy with the NGO thing (as Aman called it her favorite toy), then his heart felt apology (the white tulips) and this protective side which can sweep any girl of her feet. Whereas, Arnav has already fallen in love with her, though he denies it. But, more than that he respects her a lot, that's why he is denying himself the physical pleasure, that could come from marriage or outside it. Either He believes he is incapable of love or doesn't wish to fall in love. Waiting for love to bud and bloom in this story.

Sorry for the late comment. Life's busy. Wish to be here more often.
nishkka thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update. Please pm me future updates.
dreamymaya thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago

The conflict of emotions were beautifully pointed out. While Khushi disliked Arnav's last night actions, his apology in form of tulips made her heart melt and forgive him. That's she. Quick forgiveness. Easy and simple girl. She don't need grand gestures, a little affection and care alone. Arnav deep down knows he is having some special emotion for Khushi but he is afraid to explore it. He is scared? I was so proud of him when he defended Khushi against the onslaught of him mother and brother. Like a true Knight he saves her. Anjali and Payal are Khushi's strong supports but only Arnav could stand up and deal the bitterness of his mother and brother..How coolly he turned the tables..Wonderful! Excellent. He should have taken up law..

NK is sweet and behind all that cheery and funny persona he is a true man who cares deeply for Arnav like Aman. I can make out that. Shyam was true creep but loved the way Khushi stood up for her husband and I think she realised a few things about her husband during that conversation too..One thing was whatever people say about him, she won't leave him or distrust him. Arnav has a tough ride ahead to match up to this selfless, trusting and forgiving Khushi..He better acknowledge her truth worth soon - not to the world but to himself.

aarrsshhii thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
fab chapter!! he can say he doesn't care how much ever he wants, but his actions sure speak otherwise.. lovd the way he defended khushi in front of his family and they were really being outright horrible there...
and the sleeze bag shyam!!!how dare he!!
surely there seem to be alot changing between the hotshot politician and his wife :)
badfaith4u thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
He had her flowers especially the ones that signify forgiveness and worthiness
That's impressive
So the way he showed his mother and father their place when they were talking about Khushi as if she wasn't there

He's so jealous of NK
It's hilarious

I'm glad he warned Shyam and Khushi also answered back to Shyam

I hope she keeps answering back to people
pup03 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update !!! Arnav-khushi rocks.. match made in heaven even their enemy feels.. loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

5 months ago

ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed} ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed}

[NOCOPY] P Y A A R. K A. N A G H M A. "Friends?" a little boy extended his hand towards a girl which she responded. They smiled and embraced...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Koeli

5 years ago

Comment Migration Request Thread #1

Hey guys, This is the place where you can request for comment migration. Please know that FFEs are going to migrate your comments. Rules - You...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".