Arshi FF: Hopes and Ambitions. Thread 1

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Jay

@jduke

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#721

Cool update. White tulips without a word took care of everything :). Kudos to the way Arnav defended Kushi and shut everybody. I really like the way you developed Arnav & Kushi characters and how sweet they are by nature. He is slowly getting emotionally involved with her but not to the point of his / her realization. Will Kushi ask Arnav about Lavanya or she don't want to ask anything about his past and as for some unknown reason she trusts him?. I hope they will have some civil conversation on the way back.

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Pinky_b

@Pinky_b

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#722

Wonderful one. I just can't help but wonder how khushi could be so forgiving, because even after everything she felt she was "too harsh" on her husband and somewhere may be just for a second she regretted it. I loved the conversation between payal & khushi and the significance of tulips was very well inculcated in the scene. Glad that arnav stood up for khushi, but would have been more happy is she had defended herself. I understand yashodha & the reason behind her tauts but shwetha, I am not able to figure out akash's character completely. NK is really witty and he is one of them who can bring the "best" out of arnav as far as khushi is concerned. Shyam & his never ending misdeeds and to top it the nerve of the man to pronouce him as a winner & a better person after everything he has done so far. I hope arnav shows him his right place pretty soon.

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45678

@45678

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#723

wow, an awesome update. loved it. amazing.

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#724

Mistakes were made, lessons were learned. This will go on with life. Both will learn with time.

Glad he realized it and made an effort.

Her heart is a naive hopeless fool which still wants to hope for that man.

It's not like he doesn't care. His defensive protective attitude towards her is a proof enough, be it in front of his family or other. He's always ready to be her shield.

People will always talk about his past and it will surely upset her but she can only get out of it when Arnav is emotionally and physically committed to her.

Being a woman she would want a proof of his loyalty. Then only will these things don't matter to her.

Right now she may trust her gut feelings but sooner or later this issue will make her insecure.

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#725

I just loved Arnav's apology.

Smart guy! He said it with flowers.

And Payal was there to tell Khushi the significance of white tulips.

I just wish she learns some lessons Khushi and stands up for herself against Aakash.

Arnav might not have much time for Khushi, but he is always around to defend her when his family misbehaves with her. Loved how he stood up for her.

And then Khushi did the same for him before Shyam.

Shyam is out to provoke Arnav into making a mistake.

Waiting to see what happens next in this intriguing tale.

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rdforfun

@rdforfun

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#726

just came across this wonderful fiction.

read all the chapters in one go.

fabulous writing

loved it

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Jignasha

@Chokri_ASR

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#727

What a great update, his apology with the white tulips was the best...loved that he made an effort which shows he felt bad about what he did. Now would love him to kiss her like the way a husband would his wife. But seems like that is still far away...

Love how they both defend each other, Arnav in front of his family and Shyam...while Khushi in front of Shyam. It shows they are committed by the bond of marriage. Loving the story and your writing is superb!!!

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#728

fabulous update

loved it

thanks for the pm

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#729

Loved the update Shweta... It was simply superb!

First the white Tulips... What an awesome way to render an apology, both pretty & thoughtful... Khushi's heart melted at this apology... Khushi was already feeling a bit guilty about being too harsh on her husband the night before... All she wanted from him was to hear an apology & there it was! And Payal's opportune dropping in at that time filled her in about the significance of those lovely flowers... But the important thing to note was that Khushi's lips were still tingling just thinking about the mind blowing kiss from her husband... 😉 She is definitely not immune to his charms... Hope we get to see more of these toe-curling smooches albeit done properly not the Neanderthal way...

More Brownie points for Arnav when he defended quite expertly his hapless wife at the mercy of his atrocious brother & obnoxious mother... It is true, they are both turning malicious towards Khushi now that she is basking in the limelight, for all the hard work she has put in. But I have no worries on that front b/c of one chikna neta is guarding his gorgeous wife like a bull-dog. 😃

Loved the way Arnav said, "Trust me. You are good. Just remember you are better than all the people put together in this room." He is so supportive of her. Loved the way he kept an eye on Khushi so protectively throughout the evening. This shows his deep concern for her welfare. He may keep denying that he doesn't feel & want to feel anything for his wife, but little does he know that he is in it too deep already...

It was evident in the way he warned Jhangid, & of course in his expression and words in the end... The way he grabbed Khushi's hand & walked away spoke volumes regarding his feelings for Khushi... Jhangid said one right thing though, they are a match made in heaven... Loved the way Khushi put Jhangid down & praised her husband. Between the two of them, they can take on the world... Really creeps & jerks like Jhangid have no business hobnobbing with the big wigs at any level...

But am worried a little about the little knowledge that got passed on to Khushi during the course of the evening... Hope it doesn't come back to haunt Khushi anytime soon. Arnav has no plans to betray Khushi I hope she believes her heart than these gossip mongers...

Edited by pixiegirl - 11 years ago