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barunaya

@barunaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

Loving this story and it's political backdrop...pls update soon, can't wait to know what happens in Udaipur...poor khushi has been through so much...I hope she finally gets her happiness with Arnav

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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

Finally i am here and want to say a huge thank you to Geeta (crazysobti) for making sure i be here ! 😉

And Paakhee (camlin) had also recommended this story but i had kept it in the pipeline for future reading.

You have earned a reader, stalker and spammer in me so best of luck to you.

Also i can vouch for some more crazy people to follow suit !😆

You my dear are churning up a master piece and i went crazy today lapping up all the updates.

Let me start with the two main protagonists Arnav and Khushi !

Arnav Singh Raizada here could not have been a more complicated soul.On one hand seeing him interact with his Daadi makes me want to hug him for life and then when the politician surfaces i want to run a mile from him.

The best part about this character is that he is not all black or white and you have made sure with your writing to bring out the humane side to him which most definitely can and does err.

There are quite a few scenes of his which have stuck in my mind. His altercations with Maa Saheb are very well written and that whole bit in chap 1 where "Arnav made a casual twirl and did an exaggerated curtsy bow" I swear i could totally picture him do that.

Coming to Khushi ... absolutely loved her in and out. Her innate Khushiness has a very subtle approach here and she does seem above the delicate 21 that she is.

The way she handled her parents loss was very sensitively written. But of course i was pleasantly surprised and proud of how she held herself against Arnav Singh Raizada.

I had not seen that coming at all. The turn of events were carried forward smoothly.

I am loving the transition that is coming across in her character , she is slowly but surely growing into the woman that she is to become.

The marriage albeit is in finality and what ever the reasons for them coming together the point remains that they are in it for the long haul.

Khushi also knows that Arnav is no Prince in shining armor but she does expect him to give that sense of security which only your partner can offer.She clearly is not looking for love at least not right now. Arnav on the other hand though outwardly seems to be in control of his emotions he clearly cannot really reign them in which was quite apparent in the last 2 updates.

I really wish that Khushi is able to be more in command of her self both physically and mentally when ASR is around.

I also want to mention that besides Arnav and Khushi , i am looking forward to read about all the characters in this story whether it is Payal and Akash , Aman and Anjali , Daadi and Maa saheb they all seem important to the crux of this story and are equally intriguing.

Okay i think i am getting carried away now so i better stop ! 😳

Next Update ??????????

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Anupama

@Anupama.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: _disha_

Hey baby i am just typing out my comment for her and actually wrote more crazy people to follow and you beat me to it !🤣

Kya decide kiya tha? We all will come na.. Hehehe..

Shweta, I am yet to read but I am sure m gonna love this ..!! And you ll love us for coming here.

#'Us' means more people coming..

So many coming together.

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: Anupama.
Kya decide kiya tha? We all will come na.. Hehehe..
Shweta, I am yet to read but I am sure m gonna love this ..!! And you ll love us for coming here.
#'Us' means more people coming..
So many coming together.

Yup as promised i have also come here. 😆

Maine bhi agayi!

Hi Shweta...Another new reader alert.

I will come more elaborately later on. 😉

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Camlin

@Camlin

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: kondhili

Yup as promised i have also come here. 😆
Maine bhi agayi!

Hi Shweta...Another new reader alert.
I will come more elaborately later on. 😉

I came here to write my comment but I saw yahan to party ho raha hai😆.

Welcome guys🤗

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Camlin

@Camlin

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#326

I am so waiting for Ujjain trip.

Right now I am wary to judge Arnav's reasons behinds actions. Clearly his past impacts his judgments. I think I'll wait before I again assume anything of him. He is so mercurial and Shweta you are doing an awesome job.

The respect he masses for his grandmother is truly remarkable.

I really want Khushi to study further.

Waiting for next chapter ... Update soon and now you have a whole troupe to nag you 😉

Paakhee

Edited by camlin - 11 years ago

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ShwetapS

@ShwetapS

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#327

Woho! After an uneventful weekend H&A experiences an avalanche! Thank you Anupama, Disha, Kondhilli for dropping by! I hope to give good updates to ensure you stay put! I am totally loving this group invasion 😉!

Anupama- I have heard a lot about your stories and slowly will be catching up all that I missed when I was dead to the writing talent on this forum. and will be eagerly waiting for your feedback once you read the story so far.

Disha - I could kill to get such Painstakingly thorough feedback! I am glad you have enjoyed the story so far... And you r correct, though Arnav believes he has locked his emotions and thrown the key, but a tiger can't really change his stripes and as the story progresses and he knows Khushi better he will realise that. At the moment, he is jus trying to fight the physical attraction.

Kondhilli - will be waiting for your feedback.

Paakhee- I know what we have seen so far of Arnav is a bit revolting... But let's wait till we go thro' the layers of his past.

And I know, Paakhee and Geeta, you are gonna hate me for this! But thank you! I truly appreciate both of you taking the efforts to bring in an audience for this story. Love you both for that!

Edited by ShwetapS - 11 years ago

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ShwetapS

@ShwetapS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#328

Barunaya welcome! Glad you have liked the previous updates!

Originally posted by: barunaya
Loving this story and it's political backdrop...pls update soon, can't wait to know what happens in Udaipur...poor khushi has been through so much...I hope she finally gets her happiness with Arnav

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#329

lovely update...

Khushi is an equal match for Arnav...but what is Arnav planning, staying away from Khushi...he knows he wants it...he knows he cant get it outside now that he is married...so does he plan to stay celibate now onwards...

or is he getting it on the sly, from his trips outside, that is why he is rarely home, is it ???