ARSHI FF: CARPE DIEM #4 COMPLETED - Page 67

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Posted: 11 years ago
pls make arnav to know the truth,...pls make him understand his mother motives
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: msmarple

This is getting very difficult to read ..both Arnav and Khushi are suffering...

very nice update.


It's equally hard for me to post this story.. I haven't written it on ARSHI.. So, I can't make Khushi to jump instantly into Arnav's arms after Shyam's death. This is a story about a girl who almost ruined herself by a wrong decision.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh..god..I can't help but blame mrs raizada and fate
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh very cruel of her...arnav's mom is playing again...even lav is ready to snatch arnav from poor khushi...very painful indeed...both hurt souls r dying in love and sacrifice...:(...awesome update,beautifully written
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bs1224

Thanks for pm...

I'm hating Mrs raizada ..she is a selfish person ..not even a mother... Mother thinks of his child's happiness even if it's anything subject or object or even love ..but she ... She wants arnav tk marry lavanya because she is presentable in their high class society ... And she ia wealthy... Which khushi is not when people come to know that arnav is younger then khushi ..then they will makes talks ..and khushi is not wealthy...

She has not only spoiled arnav's life but also khushi's
And now also she has not realized her mistake ... In fact to top all her deeds she is feeding lavanya's brain against all wrong...

I just hope arnav come to know everything soon before his mom plan something else...
They both are feeling that the other one does not love them and does not deserve them ...feeling ghastly seeing them in so much pain

Simi ..well you did a phenomenal work ...HATS OFF...

I have a request please don't end it on a sad note ..if you are thinking of it ...then please drop the idea ..because i hate sad endings ...

And as of the truth i hope it's in front of all soon



I can't say now whether it has sad ending or not. In actual story Khushi found a new love in her life . 😉I must say, At the end you will feel only for Lavanya...😊 I loved her in this story...she's my favorite...
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Posted: 11 years ago
again ruining AK's life.. hope Arnav gets a whiff of what happened/going to happen..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: amus5

the beauty of today's update is that everyone has given their version of "Only Mine" but the last view of Arnav where he says that she is not mine is the best.It shows the despair,total breakdown - the hopelessness of the entire situation . I would further say that arti,la and khushi's viewpoints are a build up to the climax being arnav's despair...


Another thought that comes to my mind is - there is a saying " if you own/love someone set it free - if it comes back to you then it was yours all along but if it doesnot comeback then it was never yours to begin with"

arshi are soulmates and what better proof do you need ...??

thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😃




True Love will definitely find a way...😊 But the path may or may not be rough..
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Posted: 11 years ago
it too much for me
i cant see them separate
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh god... why soo much pain.. :"(
I can't see arshi like this..suffering soo much..
And this separation.. :(
Dam emotional update..

Thnks for the PM..
And for the update tooo
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was awesome and very emotional update yaar👏
i just cant stand arnav mom...she is the most disgusting mother one can have😡

she ruined two lives just for her selfish motives..see the nerve of the woman still call khusi a witch..then who she is😡

arnav was soo destroyed after khusi was gone..😭 arti didnt let khusi to even see arnav who was lying unconcious after accident...she destroyed her own sons life😡

she let the la and arnav relation took next level so that she can trap his son to this marriage and get money and fortune..😲great..and even now she want to get la hooked to arnav in any way
she even reponsible for taking advantage of lavanya too..she fooled her in this trap too😕

but arti forget one thing arnav can never evr forget his doll till he is alive...

khusi is sooo shattered...she feels sooo tainted to go with arnav...and again now she wil let him go to lavanya...gosh when her misery will end...she has suffered soo much...why she cant be happpy once...😭

here arnav too feel bad for forcing khusi his doll and hate himself for her pain...and now consider him to be like shyaam...he feels that he had lost her...😭

poor souls have been shattered and ruined by thier own people...😭

i just hope arnav dad do something ..he is only hope...only he can tell truth now😭
Edited by AR_EternalLove - 11 years ago

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