ASYA (KABHI) FF- Given and Denied- Thread 1- Chapter 1 to Chapter 14 - Page 74

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vinita459

I loved it...love AsYa nok-jhok. Akdu is protective about zoya...she thinks he's trying to dominate her. Loved the end, zoya kidnapped...akdu to the resuce.

You remind me of the old QH which I fell in love with.

Please update soon. Thanks


Thank you so much. glad that you loved it🤗
That's really a pleasure of mine😉
I want to remind you the old QH but not in the same way that it becomes boring🤔
so please inform me if it bothers to you😳
I will try to update soon😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: treasure11

i will never help her again asad she has helped u more than u have😡

i just hope zoya is ok😭
and buddy this is soo mysterious !!!!!i am unable to predict anything!!!!!😆i can't think of any possibility ,nothing means nothing!!!!!
GOOD JOB huh...😉

thanks for the PM again buddy !!!!! i start when i see ur PM ...


he acts as stupid when he was enraged.
I also hope that she is okay😕
Oh really!! that's a pleasant surprise for me😳
Thank god you can't predict otherwise it will be boring😆
You are most welcome buddy😊
Thank you so much for your lovely comment buddy🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sarbrathan

That ass took Zoya? Is Zoya working for Rashid's company like a subsidiary or something? When will Zoya find out about Asad's fantasy girl?

Good writing as always, I won't be comment for a week now, a lot of exams and stressed.
Thanks for the pm

Aww...that's so sad. I really wait for your comment.
So please do well in exams..it is the most important😃
you can read the FF later.😉
back to my FF Zoya will know about his fantasy girl after the case of Ayesha has been wrapped up😳
She is kidnapped by...you got it...so don't want to tell anything..😊
Thank you so much for your analytic comment dear.🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

OH MY GOD !!!

What the hell did you do to my poor Zoya ?? 😡 😭
I will kill you if anything wrong happened !!
Asad run for the mercy of your love 😆 🤣
I hope he saves her though its too late !!
but its never too late in stories 😆
I think its related to her stupid office !!
You better update sooon


Okay sweetie don't get stressed😆
She is okay till now😉
You will kill me?😆..It hurts buddy😆..then how will you get update🤔
don't worry akdhu hain na...😉
Ya...it's never late in stories...😛
You got it right😃
I will try to update soon😊

thank you so much for your threatening comment🤗
Edited by swapno - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: snehasya

I guess this is that nasty Rashid who has kidnapped zoya and I wonder what will asad do to him if he is actually Rashid

asad he didn't pain attention I hope zoya is fine
hey update soon waiting and it was really nice asad is being caring for her it will bring them closer loved it
update soon


Thank you so much🤗
you are in the right way😉
zoya will be fine..don't worry at all😃
Glad that you loved it😳
i will try to update soon😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno


Okay sweetie don't get stressed😆
She is okay till now😉
You will kill me?😆..It hurts buddy😆..then how will you get update🤔
don't worry akdhu hain na...😉
Ya...it's never late in stories...😛
You got it right😃
I will try to update soon😊

thank you so much for your threatening comment🤗


oh I am feeling better now after your reply 😆
Ya I won't kill you now I will kill you after you will finish this story 😈
haha You're most welcome buddy !!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--


oh I am feeling better now after your reply 😆
Ya I won't kill you now I will kill you after you will finish this story 😈
haha You're most welcome buddy !!


Haye...MAAR DAALA...
Okay good for you murderer 🥺
then I will become a witch and come to your stories and curse those married people...😆
Edited by swapno - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Zoya got kidnapped I hope she is ok can't wait to see how Asad saves her thanx for the pm and update soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow superb
loving protective asad❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: swapno


he acts as stupid when he was enraged.
I also hope that she is okay😕
Oh really!! that's a pleasant surprise for me😳
Thank god you can't predict otherwise it will be boring😆
You are most welcome buddy😊
Thank you so much for your lovely comment buddy🤗


u r welcome😊
will we get a mangalpuri asadcrying zoyaaa zoyaaa😆



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