Asya FF: This is how it Began #KSG4Asad Thread 2 Link - Page 10

Originally posted by: delena_

interesting i will be looking forward for this!

Awww thanx 😃

Originally posted by: delka

<font color="#9900ff">OOO LA LA !!! COLLEGE DRAMA !!😛</font>

<font color="#336600">NICE😊</font>

Awww thanx 😃

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Hey the character sketch is really good 😃 Update the first chapter soon. I'd like to read it 😳

Sweetie, everyone's terrified while posting something for the first time. I was freaked out too, I remember 😉 So no worries, you're doing great 😳

Awww thanx a lot because I was sooo nervous and I'm actually really happy I did and thanx it means a lot to me 😃

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

interesting start...nice concept!!!
cont soon

Thanx I will update soon 😃

Originally posted by: princesbarbie

Nice

Thanx 😃

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

And this is something interessting!

What's gonna change Asya's lifef?

plz update soon!

can't wait to read more !!!!

update update update!

Awww thanx I will update soon 😃

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

Excel College... I see a MJHT fan here

loved the intro

Thanx Yesss I love MJHT I was sooo sad it ended because I watched all of it on YouTube 😃

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-

Nice start! (:

Thanx 😃

Chapter 1

Asad as usual was chilling with his friends and talking to Zayd

Zayd " Yea man Mr. Sharma's class is canceled today guys.

Asad: Thank god, I hate his class but who cares I would not have went anyways haha

Tanveer ends up hearing this and goes over to the boys

Tanveer: Hey guys miss my beautiful face

Zayd: Ummm let me think... NO

Tanveer: Whatever. Hi Asad

Asad: (moves back) Hi

Tanveer: That's all you are going to say to me!

Asad Laughs and says: What else do you want me to say?

Tanveer: Don't ask me just tell me how I look!

Asad starts laughing hysterically and so do the others

Zayd: You are so self-centered

Tanveer: You are just jealous that I wont go out with you

Zayd: Seriously (falls down laughing) I would rather kiss a donkey then go out with you.

Asad and the others start to laugh

Asad looks the other way and sees a girl in a pink salwar suit and is memorized by her beauty and ends up saying beautiful.

Tanveer: See he finally realized. Thank you and gets up and tires to hug Asad

Asad: Moves back and she trips and he says "not you. Her"

Tanveer: WHO!!!

Asad does not reply and just keep staring at the girl while she walks past him with her hair flying by the wind.

Zayd: Why would she wear salwar suits to college? Weirdo

Tanveer: I agree with him for a change. She is so ugly like why would you wear that I would give that to my servants to wear.

Asad sees the girl go into the principal's office and tries to go but realizes there is something hanging off him. He looks and sees Tanveer is hugging him. Asad is mortified and pushes her off and says, "Did I not say that get off me! Gosh she literally has no brains"

Zayd and the gang start laughing again and Zayd is on the floor holding his stomach while Asad left by then.

Asad is outside the principal's office and sees her and the principal talking. He could not hear anything. But Asad could still see her and was just memorized by her beauty. He see's them getting up and goes and hides behind the pillar. She comes out and Asad hears her laugh from the pillar and was awestruck by her voice.

Zoya: Thank you sir

Principal: I hope you have a wonderful experience in the college and here is your schedule. If you need anything please feel free to come by my office for any help.

Zoya: Thank you

She leaves from there and tries' looking for her class while Asad is still standing their thinking about her.

Asad: Wow, who is she I need to find out who this girl is.

Asad goes behind her trying to find her. When he finally sees' her she was going up to someone else before he could and he says

Asad: I will find out more about you soon. Be prepared Asad is after you and no one can resist his charm.

Asad leaves from there and goes back to his friends.

Zoya: Hi can you please tell me where this class is (pointing to her schedule)

Girl: Hi, yea sure let me see what you have. O you have Mr. Sharma first you are really lucky he is not here today.

Zoya: O thank you, and I'm Zoya

Girl: Hi Zoya I'm Najma you must be new here.

Zoya: Yea I am

Najma: You will love Excel it is really fun here.

Zoya: I hope so

Najma: So, Now that you have no class first period do you want to hang out and I could introduce you to people her and also show the college?

Zoya: I would love that thank you.

Najma: But there is one rule... No sorry and No thanks because we are friends so no formal stuff please.

Zoya: hahahaha Ok deal

They both leave and start walking around the college.

I hope you guys like the first chapter :D Please leave comments and likes pleaseee:D

Yipeee!! You updated!!! Finally yaar!! Did you know its been OVER 5 hours since you last updated! 😡
Lol jk 😆

But i still want longer updates! Im very greedy! Now into the update!

What more can i say other than i LOVEEE it!! Lol!!

Zayd: Ummm let me think... NO
Tanveer: Whatever. Hi Asad
Asad: (moves back) Hi
Tanveer: That's all you are going to say to me!
Asad Laughs and says: What else do you want me to say?
Tanveer: Don't ask me just tell me how I look!
Asad starts laughing hysterically and so do the others
Zayd: You are so self-centered
Tanveer: You are just jealous that I wont go out with you
Zayd: Seriously (falls down laughing) I would rather kiss a donkey then go out with you.

🤣

I cant stop laughing its hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I could resemble Zayd at the last line!
Please update SOON like soon i mean less that five hours! Lol ok fine im being generous here and making it 24 hours ;) FINE stop pressuring me!! Take your time but please make it soon !!!!!!!!

Please do!! Dont forget to pm me and thanks for the pm!!!! I tried leaving you a long comment in return for a long update ;)

Thats all for now! Byezaaa!!! <3

~Ira ⭐️