Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 18) - Page 81

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Posted: 11 years ago
God!!! such a beautiful update... khushi is finally, gradually becoming arnav's wife.. great going...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update.. finally, khushi is turning into arnav's wife gradually.. loved it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

The chappie commencing with Khushi's soliloquy were she was displeased that her relationship with her Arnavji hasn't advanced anywhere & further her analysis was well structured. I felt that atleast in this one month Khushi has figured out a few things that might seem trivial on the face of it but has great magnitude in facilitating her to comprehend Arnav's temperament & help her take the right path to become his companion cum soul mate

The incident during Bade Papa's surgery unraveling to Khushi that Arnav kept himself away & would never entertain the idea of sharing his feelings & pain with her considering her his wife instead would only bury his grief within & that this new role as wife was only taking a toll on their friendship was astoundingly penned down 👏

Khushi reminiscing the night when she first witnessed one of Arnav's disturbed state after a nightmare probably that he had & she silently observing his every move not wanting to voice out her concern keeping in mind Arnav's aloof behavior towards her but his apology causing her to lose her cool & a repetition of that incident today compelling her mind to take things serious & confront Arnav to open up as this did seem like a continual occurrence in his life for quite some time looking at the organized manner in which he did things after having such nightmares & she wanting to sort out the problem that he was undergoing threw light on Khushi's strong self & genuine concern to help Arnav out of his troubled state inspite of his cold behavior when she had suggested for doctor's help


'Arnavji I am not a child. I am your wife now and you'll have to listen to me too. You can not always tell me what to do'

Wow!!! Loved Khushi's brave statement & she refusing to budge to any of Arnav's instructions & she stubbornly seated awake & waiting for him to finish

Sleep loved her, and vice-verse ❤️❤️❤️


Arnav at first thinking she would give up but then her stubborn wait & her droopy eyes breaking the resolve of his obstinate heart & he finally proceeding to their room with her ... I give a bow to Khushi for succeeding in her first step 👍🏼


The smile he got in return was alone worth the defeat. ❤️❤️❤️

Awww, Khushi is adorable, first she wants to make sure that he sleeps 🤗She attempting to make him feel comfortable but he not inviting the idea, then her suggestion that she'll help him sleep starling him whether she knew of his off late remedy for his sleepless state or she was trying to prove her doubts right & her words that Buaji helps her sleep the same way alarming him for a minute & at last he loving her threading his hair was enjoyable to read

When she held a convo, Arnav dismissing her the instant she uttered about nightmare, she using different phrases but when it was in vain she dramatically explaining the situation causing him to suppress his smile (smarty pants 😉) & at last he drifting off into a slumber loving her soothing honey like voice, her massage & his mind acknowledging his heart that he liked her ... buddy that was O U T S T A N D I N G 👍🏼 ... loved it

'I can take care of myself'

She kept running her fingers through his hair for a longer while just to make sure he does not get up again.

Now that Arnav has got a mother in his wife to shower him all the love that he longed for since long, all that he has to do is to open up & let her in breaking through the fences of the citadel (his insecurities) so that his angel will creep in like spring bringing greenery to his forlorn life

Khushi observing Arnav's sleeping form & she thinking if the reason for his helpless state & nightmares was due to his parents breakup, after that she admiring him loving the fact of being his wife & that suddenly creating fear if Arnav did believe in marriages & consider her his wife but her heart brushing it off on a positive note not wanting to probe further was an excellent scene. "For her sake she hoped he does"... so true at times though our mind knows the truth it lies in order to keep the heart contended that things are correct in our life

Arnav's tucking her hand creating tingles within her, ☺️ she wanting to get her hand out of his hold but when her wish was so granted she sighing in relief but the next moment his strong grip with hug over her in his sleepy state sending shivers down her spine & creating a dizzy feeling to her senses, she feeling shy & stiff on one hand & she loving this ethereal feeling on the other & drifting into a heavenly sleep ... wow!!! Anonymous ... L.O.V.E.D. I.T. T.O. T.H.E. C.O.R.E. ❤️❤️❤️

I'm agog to find out as to what will happen in the morning ... buddy curiosity is killing me ...Who will wake up first, Arnav or Khushi??? If Arnav wakes up first what will be his reaction on seeing him hugging Khushi? Will he ignore it like other mornings or will he think if Khushi has knowledge about it??? What if both wake up at the same time??? 😉 ... Eagerly WAITING for the next update with loads & loads of curiosity & guesses

Thanks for the mail 😊

Edited by fleurs - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
, khushi is just so cute. Trying to get arnav to open up and arnav's reaction when he thinks that khushi knows about his um niightly escapades is hilarious. Hope he opens up to her soon.

cheers
Edited by alex1906 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update hope Arnav lets Khushi in slowly and loved how Khushi didn't back down
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was great to get a little glimpse of their newly-married life in the last update. However, I feel like Arnav realy has to realize that if he wants this to be a forever-wala marriage, he needs to put in work to it as well; he can't just expect Khushi to put in all the effort.

I feel that Khushi is becoming a little bit more mature and understanding; I'm glad that bade papa had that talk with her because I think that's helping her keep her situation with Arnav in perspective. The way she stuck to her resolution to make sure that Arnav gets proper sleep was very wife-like, and I really enjoyed reading that part for osme reason. And I'm glad she's starting to think about why she has these protective instincts over Arnav.

Lovely part at the end with Arnav snuggling up to Khushi😆 Poor Khushi doesn't even know how to react. Damn, she must be a really deep sleeper in order to not feel that touch on her every night. I wonder if she will conduct her own little experiment now (that Arnav had first thought!) to see if this happens every night or not, cause I have a feeling that even if she asks, Arnav would deny, deny, deny!

Glad that the surgery went fine and bade papa is on the road to recovery! But why are Arnav's nightmares back if his dad's situation is looking optimistic now?

Looking forward to getting back to Arnav's thought process (I know we all always want some of Khushi's POV), but I missed Arnav's POV in this update!! Poor man is just so broken, and awkward; I really want to see how he wants to go about making Khushi his equal partner, not just his wife in name.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Absolutely loved the update... ! This update was more or less from Khushi's point of view and I thought that she is being pretty mature about everything... she realizes that Arnav and her need to be more like companions, equals for this relationship to work and this one way system of him just giving and expecting nothing in return would not work...
I also loved how Khushi is determined to make Arnav open up to her and is ready to do whatever it takes to make that happen... When Arnav ignored her after the second nightmare and refused to talk to her , the fact that Khushi decided to take matters into her own hands made me smile... Arnav Singh Raizada has definitely met his match in Khushi when it comes to stubbornness...😊

The way Arnav cant help but dissect, analyse and think about every word that comes out of Khushi's mouth had me smiling... Khushi's opinion, thoughts and feeling really do matter to him, he just hasn't realized it...
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'When I' she looked at him sharply 'flap my whole body like a fish out of water and sweat like a pig in the middle of the night without any apparent reason' she paused and looked at Arnav, who swallowed a grin that was threatening to bubble out"

Khushi is adorable... Even Arnav Singh Raizada couldn't resist this...!😆


Khushi is persistent and not the kind who will give up easily, so I know that she will eventually manage to get Arnav to open up to her... but what I am really hoping for is that Arnav doesnt make it too difficult for her...


As always waiting for more...😊




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Posted: 11 years ago
Read last three updates. Now is the time for progressing
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey ...
Superb update !!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Cant write a detailed review but can say each and every line is perfectly fitted together and flow like a breeze and must say your writing style have the special elegance and grace which i adore and respect .keep it up

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