ArShi FF (Complete): The Ray Of The Dawn (Thread 1)

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_Chaverah_

@_Chaverah_

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: russelskhushi
awesome...loved it...

Thankyou buddy!!😊

Originally posted by: gangsu
vry nyc ff 😊

Thankyou buddy!!😊

Originally posted by: arnshi
Awesome update.

Thankyou buddy!!😊

Originally posted by: immachek
nice updte but are you going to take this story in slow progress or do we expect some fast movement
and when will arnav start his moves toward helping khushi

Firstly, thankyou buddy!!😊 Weel, the FF wil be a medium paced one.. Khushi needs to get out of the shell she made around her.. So, Arnav's gonna have some tough time ahead.. But, his moves will surely begin soon..😛

Originally posted by: jtammareddy
Brilliant. Khushi has gone through hell. I so want Arnav in action . They r so cute together.
Thanks for the pm.

Thankyou buddy!!😊 Khushi needs to get out of the shell she made around her.. So, Arnav's gonna get into action but will have some tough time ahead.. 😳

My pleasure yaar..😛

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri
thats amazing

loving it too much

cant wait to read more!

loving the way the story is shaping up!.

Thankyou so very much buddy!!😃😊

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beenish

@beenish248

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Hell you alwayz make me cry Candy ..

i read all updates which i missed some dayz back ..

ahh how i am gonna describe what i feel while reading ..

well coming to update ..

khushi fainted in his arms :O

i love payal and khushi's bond yarr ..

khushi try to hide her pain but how much she wnt to hide her pain but payal can read her very well , she did not eat any thing in whole day , how can b a person cruel like that b***h

Candy please make them beg for her life i want to see her on road :@

Gloria read arnav like a Open book My GOD

she is so sweet women yarr i loved her so so much ..

""Arnav couldn't help the smile spread on his face too..

"I need your permission.."

"Granted.."

Arnav was stumped to the ground.. He din't even tell her the reason.. This old lady was surely a mystery or rather, he was surely an open book to his wise beauty..

My MouTh was hanged Open what was that yarr ..

i so want to hug gloria ..

marvelous candy loved it ..

P.S i will b always there for you Candy no matter what ..

you are my closest frnd and and love too much honey .. :)

Edited by beenish248 - 11 years ago

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katj

@katj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Amazing story...
Thanks for the PM

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_Chaverah_

@_Chaverah_

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: beenish248
Hell you alwayz make me cry Candy ..
i read all updates which i missed some dayz back ..
ahh how i am gonna describe what i feel while reading ..
well coming to update ..
khushi fainted in his arms :O
i love payal and khushi's bond yarr ..
khushi try to hide her pain but how much she wnt to hide her pain but payal can read her very well , she did not eat any thing in whole day , how can b a person cruel like that b***h
Candy please make them beg for her life i want to see her on road :@
Gloria read arnav like a Open book My GOD
she is so sweet women yarr i loved her so so much ..
""Arnav couldn't help the smile spread on his face too..

"I need your permission.."

"Granted.."

Arnav was stumped to the ground.. He din't even tell her the reason.. This old lady was surely a mystery or rather, he was surely an open book to his wise beauty..
My MouTh was hanged Open what was that yarr ..
i so want to hug gloria ..
marvelous candy loved it ..

P.S i will b always there for you Candy no matter what ..
you are my closest frnd and and love too much honey .. :)

And I loved your comment yaaro!!! Love you too Pirih!!! I know sweetheart.. I do know that you'l always be there!!🤗

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi
good update..😊

Thankyou Buddy..😊

Originally posted by: namita11
Nice

Thankyou Buddy..😊

Originally posted by: katj
Amazing story...
Thanks for the PM

Thankyou Buddy..😊 My pleasure yaar...

Originally posted by: jenji08
wow mindblowing story...
i really enjoyed this story very much..
i read part 1 to 7 in one go..
thank u so much for this story...
eagerly waiting for next part...
from jenji_Pm

Thankyou so very much Buddy!!!😊

I'm glad you lykd it..😛

My pleasure yaar..😊

Thankyou once again buddy.. Shall PM you soon and yeah, The ray will be updated next on Saturday..😃

Edited by Chaverah_TFC - 11 years ago

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janu

@jenji08

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

wow mindblowing story...
i really enjoyed this story very much..
i read part 1 to 7 in one go..
thank u so much for this story...
eagerly waiting for next part...
from jenji_Pm

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Hey Dear...Finally finish reading all the chapters in on go and Must say I am just loving it..Love the way story is progressing..Poor Khushi ,have to bear so much..But thank god now Arnav is here for Her..Love Arnav and Payal relationship...Too cute..waana read more so do try to continue soon..Thanks for the PM..Take care

PS: Now going to read ur second FF...will try to comment on that ASAP😳

Geet

Edited by sweetdesire - 11 years ago

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Andi

@ARSHIANDI

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

hello dear read ur both stories😊

both r awesomme reallly,will cmnt tomoroow on 2nd one sorry

my was shouting nd i was reading ur stories😆

thnx to kamini(mwep) for telling me abt u😃

plz never stop writing like this i m fan of ur writing now😳

Edited by ARSHIANDI - 11 years ago

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Awesome FF...
Loved it...
Khushi has been going through a lot...She is working as a maid in her own home... Still she didn't loose her spirit... Loved her...
Arnav is so much in love with her... Her every pain is piercing his heart... He is really her prince charming... khushi doesn't know that her life is going to change... A life full of happiness with her soul mate...
I want her step mother to beg for her life...All three of them deserves the worst punishment...
Continue soon...

Edited by sincereme - 11 years ago

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AR_EternalLove

@AR_EternalLove

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

it is amazing story...

i read all the 7 chapters in one go

arnav is such a warm person...he loves khusi soo much

poor khusi life is worse than a maid...but now she didnt have to worry as arnav is there to get her out

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Sonaparam29

@Sonaparam29

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#60

I wannaa gv u d tightest hug ever chaavi..i hope i cn call u dat
Thankuu so much fr invitin me to read ur stories..i hav read all..except always for us ff of urs..
Dis arnav gosh..i dnt hav wrds to describe him..he is evry galls prince charming in dis..
N i kwn arnav ill do anethn to settle akl d wrongs which khushi had suffered in her lyf till nw..
M ready to witness hw a prince ill swept off his princess to his kingdom!!
😊 😃 😳

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