ArShi FF (Complete): The Ray Of The Dawn (Thread 1) - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
dat was awesome
thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
i have read it all...wonderful concept...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Thankyou yaar!!😊

Originally posted by: prha

Waiting for the next update eagerly !!!

Its up, Buddy!!!
Thankyou Buddy!!😊

Originally posted by: rulama

That was interesting!

Arnav gets the full report of Khushi's status in her own home and is riled enough to get into ASR mode!
Khushi being Khushi gets them the lunch pack even amidst the chaos in her life!

😛 Well, apparently, yes..😛

Originally posted by: saigadu

Amazing story...

that parmila and daughters duo is making khushi's life hell
i hope arnav makes their life hell
and as promised give khushi a wonderful life she deserves😊

Thankyou Buddy!!😊 We'l see what Arnav has to say about this.. 😆 I guess Arnav can do that job better..😉
Thankyou Buddy!!😊

Originally posted by: eversweetdreams

Thanks for the pm will read this story in coming days.

Sure buddy!! Thankyou for dropping by..😊
Thankyou Buddy!!😊

Originally posted by: vidya.sanjay

Loving the story.

Excited to see Arnav taking Parimala to task.Khushi indeed deserves her prince charming.

Thankyou Buddy!! I'm glad u'v lykd it..😊

Originally posted by: ranogill

Thank you for sending me pm...I will read it from start and comment again...as far as this chapter goes you wrote beautifully ...I got tears in my eyes for khushi

Thankyou Buddy!! I'm glad u'v lykd it..😊

Originally posted by: Aisha1996

Amazing update
Loved it 😛
Thanx for d pm

Thankyou Buddy!!😊

Originally posted by: ragvir.fan

thanx for the PM .

will read all the chap and comment ...
just gv me few days as it will take tym to read...

thank you 😊

Sure buddy!! Thankyou for dropping by..😊

Originally posted by: mwep

it was a lovely

read ur 2 stories today
u r an amazing writer
now coming to the story
luved arnav n payal's bond a lot
n aakash he will be a bhondu always lolz😆
pamela n her daughters -may u all rot in hell😡
feeling bad for khushi😭😭

Thankyou Buddy!! I'm glad u'v lykd it..
OMG!😲 You did what?! 😲Well, I.. I'm humbled and honored yaar, thankyou..😃 And thankyou for the lovely comment.. 😛

Originally posted by: tejaswini.253

dat was awesome

thanx fr d pm

Thankyou Buddy!! It was my pleasure..😊

Originally posted by: ranogill

i have read it all...wonderful concept...

Thankyou Buddy!! I'm glad u'v lykd it.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Wonderful update! Nice concept👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: karsvinu

Wonderful update! Nice concept👏

Thankyou so very much Buddy!! I'm glad u'v lykd it.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
nice story..!!!!!!11
hate khushi's step family..they force her to work like maid..worse than maid..!!!!
ASR is back..he will show them their right place..!!!
loved this arnav and khushi/...!!!!!!!
payal and aranv's bonding is too sweet...loved them..!!!!!1
thanks for pm..!!!
continue soon...!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: khareshelley

nice story..!!!!!!11
hate khushi's step family..they force her to work like maid..worse than maid..!!!!
ASR is back..he will show them their right place..!!!
loved this arnav and khushi/...!!!!!!!
payal and aranv's bonding is too sweet...loved them..!!!!!1
thanks for pm..!!!
continue soon...!!!!

Thankyou so very much Buddy!! I'm glad u'v lykd it.😊 As informed already, the next update will be on the coming Saturday...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
nice updte but are you going to take this story in slow progress or do we expect some fast movement
and when will arnav start his moves toward helping khushi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Brilliant. Khushi has gone through hell. I so want Arnav in action . They r so cute together.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
thats amazing

loving it too much

cant wait to read more!

loving the way the story is shaping up!.

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