Virmaan : After Marriage-2 : Thread~5 : Part- 249 on 118 - Page 45

Created

Last reply

Replies

686

Views

123.3k

Users

45

Likes

1.3k

Frequent Posters

kokubaba thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
finally u updated after a long wait..update was rocking as usuall do continue soon...eager for d holi part damaal...
Niaksharma thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelic-Catty

Plz plz updte.. i know m bugging alot.. if u hve time so plx .. n sorry for poking lot


no worries
m glade that some one like to read my work...
Niaksharma thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: panamaa

awesome update nd precap

why virat is angry
love this story so much
nd thanku for accepting a new baby idea
waiting...


thanks for likeing...
Will try too soon
Niaksharma thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rasp_berry

N perfect updt...happiness is in the air...True love is not just physical attraction it moreover heart to heart connection...superbly done girl...kudos...cont soon


thank u
m glade still some readers fine this story interasting nd readable...
Niaksharma thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelic-Catty

Omg the precap wht hapnd.. virat is gussa ummm sumthng interesting is yet to cum dat means.. after sch intetesting precap cnt wait for long plz plz updte jaldi jaldi... if u dnt hve ne work can u plz updte next part plx.. i know m being greedy but wht to do . Precap made me so curious :p


ups...
Will try...
May be tonight...
Niaksharma thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Syed695

Liked d precap..angry virat back...waitin for d holi party!!


thnx
will knoww soon
Niaksharma thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Syed695

Fabulous updates!!!!

This was complete treat to have romantic virman...passion is bk...eagerly waitin for next!!!


thanks
will try to soon
Niaksharma thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

<font color="#3333ff">Awesome updates Khushi!! ⭐️Loved it.. Virman are lost in their world 😳.. Their romance made me blush 😛.. Virat and his naughty lines ;).. Too good.. Manvi bhi kuch kam nahi hai 😉.. Superb! Piyu is so adorable.. Precap is interesting.. What happened?? Why is he so angry?? Waiting for the next.. Take care 😊</font>


thank u so much meera...
Happy u like it
will gve update soon nd make it all clear...
Niaksharma thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhYA_123

KHUSHI FINALLY READ ALL 3PARTS. ALL R SUPER SE UPAR, MINDBLOWING, HAWA TIGHT. LIKED VIRMAN ROMANCE,VIRAT CARE 4 MANVI , LOVES POSSESSIVE VIRAT AND CUTE PIHU SO MUCH. PRECAP LOOKS AMAZING. SO UPDATE SOON.😊


thank u so much..
Will try
Niaksharma thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
PART-238
:
Next morning...
Maanvi wake up first nd without making any sound she go to wasroom for get ready..in sometime she come out from wasroom wearinf white plain..silver boders saari..looking like angle in it..she wear plan glass bengles in her..which making sweet magical sound..she walk towards bed after brusing her hairs nd put them one side like always making her backless blouse visible..whoch holding silver work with sparking jari work..
She walk near bed nd saw how her husband nd daughter sleeping like they didnt sleep from last one month..she shook her head nd walk towards them nd sit one side of bed..of course payal's side..she bent nd kissed on her forhead nd cheeks..smile loving at her princess..than she look towards virat..who also looking same cute kid..she shook her head again brush his rough hairs..
M-move her hands towarsd virat nd piyu's forarms nd shook lovingly-piyu..my bachcha...get up...virat...utho plz...
P-sleepy voice-peeez naa mummma...me ko neeni kalne do..
V-hug her daughter nd pull close-yes...main also neeni..
Both r not opening there eyes..
M-uffo...see morning ho gai hai..nd aaj holi bhi tou hai..hume pooja me jana hai..piyu...viratt..
She again shook them..
P-drowssy..nd sleepy cute innocent voice..nd fliping to other side nd sawing her back to maanvi nd hidding her face in virats arms-papaaa...me ko neeni ali hai...
M-piyu no drama jaana..see aaj holi hai..aap ko colours se nahi khelna?...aur pooja bhi tou karni hai..varna swaminibabi gussa karengi...plzz...
V-relax maanvi..thodi der sone do na yaar..aur tum bhi soa jao..come..
He try to pull her too bt she puss his hand off nd stood up from bed..
M-okay..
Both virat nd piyu open their eyes fully nd look at her...
V-whisper-maan gai..??
Nd both look at maanvi...
M-angrily place her hands on her hips-okay..mat utho..mujhe kya hai..main akele hi humare naye guest nd family ke saath holi mana lungi..
She said with looking towards virat..making him shock nd burn in jealousy..
M-nd than piyu-aur haa..baki ka SOP ki prepration bhi...
Hearing this piyu jumped from bed nd sit up..
P-shouted-SOP...
M-smirked...nd left room..
V-maanvi..try to stop bt no use..
P-mumma no...see main tou flesh hone jaa li hoon...ishhh..papa...
Nd look at virat...
P-papa..see aapne kya kiya...
V-still thinking abt maanvi's words...
P-papa...
Shouted..
V-look at her-hun?
P-aap ki valje se mumma nalaj ho gai..
V-kya?
P-aul ni tou...me ko jol se pakal ke lakhkha tha...main kese ulti...
She sadi like little maanvi..
V-maine pakda tha?..achcha?..tou neeni kise aa rahi thi?..hmm?
P-uffo papa..ab baby ki talat compin mat kalo..chalo me ko ready kalo fast fast..
V-haa meri maa chalo..
P-hehehhe...maa ?...letin woh to dadi hai naa...
V-haa bt tumse kum..now ready hou jaye?..mumma ko bhi manana hai naa?
P-haaa...utho me ko aul chalo jaldi..
She said with raising her hand to carry her..
V-smile nd shook his head..too dominating bt i love it..with that he pick her in his armed nd both get ready...
After getting ready... They went to downstairs nd see everyone already leave for pooja..
P-papa lun..hum late hai..
V-haa my bachcha bhagna hi padega..
Nd both rush towards garden where they arrenge whole pooja nd than party..
Virat nd piyu reached at pandal nd stood besides maanvi..piyu ask sorry to maanvi with cute words..so how can see angry on her..she said she is not angry with her piyu..which make payal too happy..she kissed on maanvi's cheek nd rush towards adi nd alliey nd stood with them..
Maanvi smiled.. Getting chance virat also walk near her to talk bt she walk towards panditji nd starts helping him..
(i know i didnt add holica dahan part in it according to hindu festival its came before one day..i put directly holi part)
in some time..guests starting coming nd garden filded with so many peoples..some relatives nd some friends..
They did pooja nd than had breakfast with guests nd than swaminibua as always put tikka to everyone nd they starts playing holi..in whole time virat try to talk with her bt no use..
Last time virat saw her talking with kids nd instrusted them abt carefully playing holi..than music starts nd people starts playing holi..he looking for her here nd there bt he didnt find her in garden..he want to coloured her first..he become to restless now..just than his eyes fall on karan who walking towards one corner of garden..his frowned angrily when he saw maanvi walking just above him..he excused from guests nd walk towards them..
He stoped little away as he saw maanvi talking with him nd laughing..of course he trusted her nd she knoe she cannt do anything wrong..not in dreams nor god can make it happen..bt still he doesnt like that karan near her maanvi..
He angrily walk towards them..not putting attention their words..bt
M-to karan-i love
maanviii..
Hearing this roarer voice both karan nd maanvi look at that direction found virat stood just little away from them..
M-virat..
V-i love..what?
M-nahi..nahi virat woh..
V-room me chalo..

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: MidnightLibrary

11 months ago

Rishtey the Bond of marriage (new chapter) Rishtey the Bond of marriage (new chapter)

Chapter : Melodious Encounter https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/52348

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Koeli

5 years ago

Comment Migration Request Thread #1

Hey guys, This is the place where you can request for comment migration. Please know that FFEs are going to migrate your comments. Rules - You...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish

6 years ago

Kassir ...Sujal&Kashish...Part 28 - Pg 33

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".