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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: monikasaxena05

Awesome update..

Loved Rey's reaction😊
Omg...Taani on a mission to save St. Louis..
Waiting 4 gang reaction after dp seeing her
Continue soon dear!!

thank you
Will try to update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Awesome update
Aww Rey miss his Taani...
Love Taani outfits
Omg!!! Tanya on a mission to save St. Louis where the people she love the most is there
I can't wait for her to kick those idiots

thank you
Hmmm I think the gang are going to have a big shock
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Posted: 11 years ago

sorry 4 short comment😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: navk


sorry 4 short comment😳

its okay
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 4B

25 sultan men + sultan= 26 men

Scene shifted to the collage

There were lots of students sitting in the hall and there were some people with guns and faces covered with scarf's but there was a man walking with a gun in front of the student. He didn't cover his face with anything, but from the look of it he was waiting for something or someone. That man was sultan he moved and sate on the chair.

Some girls were too scared and started crying and sobbing and the boys were worried and they tried to cum the girls but no use their sobbing noise got louder and this made sultan angry.

Sultan (to is men)- are ise chup karwade varna (pointed his gun to the girl) hamesha keliye chup kara dunga

The gang were there too and Sharon and the other girls were the one who were sobbing because of fear and when sultan pointed the gun to them they were more scared. Some boy got up.

Boy- deckye app esa nahi karsakte (the student's looks at him in shock) humne kuch kiya nahi hai jo app ye sab karahe hai...appjo chateho wo humare pass to nahi hai to app humare sath ye kyu karahe ho...hum bekasur logoko kyu marna chate ho..

Sultan looked at the boy with anger and got up from the chair and walked slowly but dangerously towards the boy. The boy got scared with his moves and kind of moves back. But sultan grabs him from the neck and looks straight in the boy's eye which makes the boy more scared.

Sultan- tum logone kuch kya nahi hai ..to kuch karo humare liye (and he laughs, so does his men) (he leaves his neck and pushes him to the ground with the students, he looks at the students on the ground) tumlog bekasur ho isliye tumloge mere kaam asakte ho...

Rey (angry but scared)-kya kaam asakte hai hum tumari

Sultan (looks at rey)- tumlog muje Tanya se milwa sakte ho...(turns and slowly walked away )FBI Tanya...sabse powerful agent..not just powerful but strong fighter... bekasur or masumo ko bachan keliye kuch bi karsakti hai...

Swayam- lekin agar appko unse milna hai to ye sab kyu

Sultan- oyy (looks at swayam) tune suna nahi bekasur or masumo ko bachan keliye kuch bi karsakti hai...wo zarur ayegee...kich be karke tumlogo ko zarur ayegee...or fir me appna bhai ka badla lesakta hu...

Speaking of bhai, swayam thought "shukar hai ki taani yaha nahi hai" he closed his eyes and putted his hand together for pray "hay Krishna ji agar muje kuch bi hojay to meri behan taani ko khush or safe rakna".

Rey was thinking about taani "please god agar muje kuch hojaye to taani move on kare or khush raha", a long wet tear went down his cheeks. He wanted to spend his whole life with her, he wanted to live and die with her.

Everyone were thinking about their love ones. Here outside the collage few steps away from it. Tanya gang were discussing the last steps.

Tanya- okay agents...what we'll do is ..that i will go in and you guys will stay here.

Agent- but ma'am app akele ...it's no safe

Tanya- don't worry i will handal everything ...so agar me 30 min me nahi aye to ...tum sabb action lelo but agar 30 min me tum logo ko student bahar nazzar aye to samjo we have completed our mission..to fir tum log un student ko protect karo and unse kuch details pucho okay

Agents salutes to her - yes ma'am (Tanya salutes to them back) all the best (she leaves)

Back with st Louise collage

Sultan (annoyed)- ehh 3 gante baki rehgaye...abb or kitna deer lagawo gee Tanya...

Here the students felt really hungry.

One student stood up, holding her stomach.

One of sultan men sow her and told her "kaha jarahi ho, bet... chup chap bet". The girl replied "dekiye hume book lage hai". Hearing these noises sultan started moving toward the poor girl. And this move of his made the poor girl more scared. Sultan holds the girl from her hair and says "book lage hai...bechari...abb humbi kya karsakte hai tuu...--"

THAD

Sultan leaves the girls hair and turns and see where that noise came from. He saw one of his men on the floor, blood coming out of his neck. Sultan understood that she has came, Tanya has came.

THAD

There another man of his has died

Sultan (in anger to his men, shouts)- wo agaye hai ...jow or dundo use...(5 of his men went)...ajj me tume jane nahi dungee Tanya...

The students got scared because know their collage will be filled with blood.

Here with the 5 men's

The 5 got separated in to different directions.

One of the man was walking had a knife with him. He was walking slowly then someone tapped his shoulder. He turned around and the next min he was dead. 2 men was holding a gun. He saw someone running across a class. He went to the classroom and saw no one was there but someone from top twisted his neck and then he was dead. With 3 men (up stairs) they were together with different weapons. One of them noticed a shadow (Tanya). He signed the other 2 then moved that direction.

THAD

The 3rd fell on the ground in front of the other two, dead.

Scene shift down to the student and sultan

Sultan and everyone heard some noises from upstairs then saw the 2 men fell from up stairs.

The two men fell in front of sultan's feet. This made sultan angrier .

Sultan (angry and shouts)- chupke se vaar karti ho ...agar maa ka dood peeya hai to aa mere samne aa

Tanya jumps from up stairs and landed in front of him. She didn't say anything (because the gang might recognize her).

Sultan (didn't know who it is bez of the cover Tanya was wearing on her face)- kon ho tum (silent) kon ho tum bolo (she still didn't say anything and this make sultan more angry) bolo (he looks at his men and signs them to take charge) muje iska cheehra dekna hai ..jow

10 men moves to her -http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v1Cb2d0ZUVs

The men were trying to move the cover off her face but each time they would move a half, she would put it back on. They were keep on trying to move it but still she never lets them see her face. This got repeated and somehow Tanya got a hard scratch on her neck. they keep on fighting with her.

Everyone was shocked to see one person fighting with 10 men but they were also confused as in what is there to hide her face. But they got a hope in them that this person will somehow save them.

Sultan got angrier; he just wanted to know who it was. So he took Sharon and holed the gun on her head

The gang (shocked)- SHARON

Taani stopped fighting when she heard "SHARON" and when she stopped there someone punched her and she fell on the ground the men were keep on hitting her but they stopped on sultans order.

Sultan- bass abb ise utow or iske chehere se kapra (cloth) utaro ..jaldi (two men take her from the each side and made her stood in front of sultan.)

Sultan throws Sharon back to the gang, holds the cover of Tanya (slow move). Tanya closed her hoping this was a dream. Sultans removed it up to her lips then top of her nose then her eyes and the removed it fully.

The gang saw her and they got the biggest shock of their life, specially reyam.

Everything stopped for them (and also for you)

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Here i end

Precept

Tanya intro to the gang

Taani takes the gang to her office

Lots of fun is coming up

Please write down what you think might happen next (i might add it to the next update)

Ohhh ya since you all kind of gets who Tanya is then

i had made it earlier but i really wanted to show you

so how is it

Edited by d3fannm1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

RES😉

Edited by rabitaarey - 9 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yaayyy...at last update kiya...was waiting for this for so long...
It was amazing... l
Tanya fighting wid goons...:-)
Sultan n his men's...how dare they beat tanya ...

Update next part soon... :-)
Edited by mehreen_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow!!!
Seriously u made that Id card ??
Its amazing... :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update

waiting for this from so long

luv that part when rey n swayam were praying for taani's future

update it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow!!!
awesome update...
I loved the Id - card!!!
Loved Jalebi bai ;)
update soon and Pm me

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