INTOXICATION THREAD #2 / LAST PART UP ON PG 54 :) - Page 33

Jen this is a beautiful story, very poignant and moving in its etching out of some of the things that go on under the surface of the 'normal' that we as citizens are most of the time completely unaware of. I do nto think you need to apologise for anything.

khushi is the price for the security that most people enjoy in any country. It is sad, painful, yet it is beautiful in its integrity. Yes, it is difficult to read about injustice, and it must be difficult to write, but I, for one, am very grateful to you for having written it and given us a chance to read a good story.

I can only pity Arnav - he has murdered twice, once knowingly in the throes of anger, hurt and betrayal, the second time in a cold, calculated, deliberate way. Which was worse, one wonders?

Thank you for respecting us enough to make all the efforts you can to give the story a proper ending.

so major raizada was wrong after all...awesome

Its difficult to read...
But i really love reading it...
Thanx for the super fast update and extremely loved this chapter...
Finally Arnav knows the whole truth...
And what a bas***d Shyam has been..
And he's trying hard to mend things...
But this time Khushi isn't gonna make it easy for him...
And I would love to see him apologise to her..
Waiting for the next update... :)

Its a brilliant story and u ought to be proud of it
Loved the update
U ll have to reedem urself mr raizada coz u have hurt her dignity

oh come on jenny, I am loving this story - yes, the story is very intriguing but not a difficult read - iam enjoying this very well - I wish u could extend it with some more updates loved the update - so arnav has got a clean shit for khushi - so its time to feel guilty I guess - loved the teaser - tit for tat from khushi - will wait for the next update - btw when r u updating next jenny? - thx for the quick ones dear

Poor Khushi...
She suffered alot...:'(
Feeling bad 4 her...
Nw Arnav realizd his mistake...
Bt its too late...He did hurt her...
Wats he gonna do nw..??

Aarnav made a grave mistake this time, didn't he??

He used literally, someone, who thought of him as a hope for a better life,he cruelly crushed Khushi's hopes for a better future..


She was already going through a lot, all those suicide attempts and those marks.. And to think what Arnav did to her, almost repluses me!


Arnav has to redeem for his actions, he can't let Khushi be another Arnav.. He can't let her kill her soul..

awesum updates feels really bad for khushii