INTOXICATION THREAD #2 / LAST PART UP ON PG 54 :)

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#311

That was a lovely update Jenny.

Loved the way you have described the mountains. In one part you have mentioned Dadi and the rest Nani.

Loved how Arnav realized what sort of a person Khushi really is and one can't tarnish the rest with the same brush as his late wife. Khushi was helpless to the extent of trying to take her life!

So the scum Shyam was polygamy practioner and had used Khushi for his double crossing activities!

Loved the Macbeth portion that you have used.

Waiting to see the next Arnav-Khushi confrontation.

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mbbsrocks

@mbbsrocks

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#312

Ohh i knew she is innocent

And woah that cowardice bracelet.

Who is Arnav's past girl??

And ib the first para you said he Turned. Wat does that mean??

Well update was fabulous

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shr1234

@shr1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#313

Whoo! Super fast updates! Amazing as usual. And they were hell of shocks. Poor Khushi , I really feel for her. And I'm amazed that she still has the power to live, as it appears in the teaser. Or has she finally broken down, a customer waiting and slurred speech were the indicator??

I don't know how to feel about this pace.. should I be happy that you are updating o fast or should I feel sad now that I will be missing a fabulous writer like you, because of AD.. Mixed feelings with a great part of sadness...

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Deepthi

@Beauceant

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#314

Very emotional update.. I generally like to comment as soon as i finish the first read, but really here i had to collect myself for a moment.. I can imagine how it must be for you to write it and seriously a brave job..

Khushi was innocent after all.. The revelation of her innocence was so painful, i was initially surprised how the official just said all that so casually. But yeah its part of the job i guess.. And however sadistic that sounds, here is one situation i'm glad Arnav will suffer after knowing the truth.. Totally deserves it..

I just hope both are ultimately emerge from all the pain of the past to build a future together, may be with a bit of help from nani..

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#315

Very touching and emotional update Jenny.
Feeing really sad for Khushi...she has gone through so much...noone wants to live such life.
Waiting for the next update...loved the teaser.

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Uzii

@Uzii

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#316

Wow very interested story n this is totally new concept n I'm looking forward for new stories frm u after ur break plz do come soon.

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chenis

@chenis

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#317

Feeling very bad for khushi. Poor girl had to face all the abuse and physical torture from Shyam and the only person she trusted also betrayed her.

As now Arnav realizes his mistake lets see how he redeems to get back khushi in his life.

P.s plz donot make khushi accept his sorry so easily as in the show.

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Jay

@Sharaa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#318

Jen, we must thank u lot to give us such a wonderful story... With Arhi... Both having scars physicaly & emotionaly... Khushi is innocent, well i know.. After last chapter, i hate Arnav, but now, i feel for him too... I want repentence,but not much. I want them together... Hamesha. Bas