INTOXICATION THREAD #2 / LAST PART UP ON PG 54 :) - Page 18

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice to see the new thread.

Arnav's telephone convo is cryptic but seems quite dismissive of Khushi: "Routine work. Following a bar dancer." Now that the DIB has confirmed Arnav's innocence we can all heave a sigh of relief! The professional respect shown by both Inspector Khan and Arnav and their professional discussion about the murders has been quite realistically portrayed. So is Shyam an abusive husband or has Khushi being forced to continue with a role she dreads? Her fear of Shyam is very stark and palpable. From Arnav's convo with his handler, really seems that Shyam is the spy / traitor. Khushi's desperate search for help ending in disappointment is heart-breaking: After ages she had felt there was someone whom she could trust even a little bit. Someone who seemed capable of helping her with the predicament she was in and if not that at-least of advising her, guiding her... imagine how great her sense of betrayal will be when she realises that the person who she thought would help her out is instrumental in tightening the noose around her neck! Another voice inside her that was seeped in cold hopelessness told her that her hope was like the last flicker of a candle's flame before it dies out completely... her foreboding sadly comes true... beautiful yet heart-rending imagery. Even if Shyam recovers from his injuries, I doubt if he would confess to his crimes or admit that Khushi is innocent of acts of treason... he might actually implicate her further in his dealings! I remember what you said about his cruel eyes. It must have been so shattering for Khushi to realise that not only Shyam but also Arnav used her for their own benefit and, in Arnav's case, the one person she hoped would prove to be her saviour turns out to be her destroyer! I can't fault Arnav's contempt for her, though, as he believes her to be a traitor and no patriot is going to love a traitor... [am a fan of NCIS: LA, which has a lot of such spy themes and undercover work wherein the characters have to do things that often go against their own values... so I understand Arnav's motivation]. She was a means to get to his target... when it come to a question of national security, the intelligence officers have to make use of any means necessary, though we might shudder at it. "Why, Arnav?, she cried suddenly, catching hold of his coat lapels with both hands and unsuccessfully trying to shake him. Arnav shot a quick glance at the door, where the men were waiting and pried her fingers away from his coat in a forceful movement. "I don't have to answer any of your questions, Arnav said coldly at the same time... shades of the forced marriage track! 'And I won't leave till I get an answer from you. What right did you have to use me, my body like this?' she repeated weakly with the pupils of her eyes dilated with pain and bewilderment. As she was being taken outside the door, he was struck by the air of absolute stillness and silence that encompassed her... I felt a sharp pang on reading these lines... would be interesting to note his reaction when he finally learns of her innocence. He cuttingly calling her a s**t was uncalled for!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Feel really bad for Khushi... She started trusting him and he just used her...

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Posted: 11 years ago
I am sad
Utterly sad
After reading update as well as your note
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Posted: 11 years ago
firstly I m glad that arnav s not the killer that I was a little afraid of but m also hurt with arnav's behaviour towards khushi...maybe he is doing this to save khushi in some way...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awesome thrilling update..so this was the story..wonderfully written..Arnav was an Intelligence agent..Shyam was a culprit for what?!and Kushi's fear became true n she was dejected for Arnav's betrayal and words..yes he has to pay for that..wanna see that..how embarrassed she wud be getting such cruel accusation..how she cud be a partner of crime for shyam..these agency miss to learn the ppl who are with the culprit judging as such that they r also under crime..waiting eagerly for the next..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Poor khushi...she was just beginning to trust arnav. Her hopes got burned even before it started blooming...
Arnav...why????

Anyways iam all yay for daily update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Poor Khushi...
Arnav was using her...:'(
Ow cud he..:-@
She s compltly brokn...
She trustd him...
Hope..He'll realiz his mistake...
Waitng 4 d nxt part...
Cntinue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
You did it, didn't you? you made me hate Arnav very much. why? How could he do that to her. Because she was married but slept with him he is using name on her😡. he doesn't know her. he got what he wanted for he and some more, stupid fellow arrrggg. what will shyam do now?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Maddy1270

Nice to see the new thread.

Arnav's telephone convo is cryptic but seems quite dismissive of Khushi: "Routine work. Following a bar dancer." Now that the DIB has confirmed Arnav's innocence we can all heave a sigh of relief! The professional respect shown by both Inspector Khan and Arnav and their professional discussion about the murders has been quite realistically portrayed. So is Shyam an abusive husband or has Khushi being forced to continue with a role she dreads? Her fear of Shyam is very stark and palpable. From Arnav's convo with his handler, really seems that Shyam is the spy / traitor. Khushi's desperate search for help ending in disappointment is heart-breaking: After ages she had felt there was someone whom she could trust even a little bit. Someone who seemed capable of helping her with the predicament she was in and if not that at-least of advising her, guiding her... imagine how great her sense of betrayal will be when she realises that the person who she thought would help her out is instrumental in tightening the noose around her neck! Another voice inside her that was seeped in cold hopelessness told her that her hope was like the last flicker of a candle's flame before it dies out completely... her foreboding sadly comes true... beautiful yet heart-rending imagery. Even if Shyam recovers from his injuries, I doubt if he would confess to his crimes or admit that Khushi is innocent of acts of treason... he might actually implicate her further in his dealings! I remember what you said about his cruel eyes. It must have been so shattering for Khushi to realise that not only Shyam but also Arnav used her for their own benefit and, in Arnav's case, the one person she hoped would prove to be her saviour turns out to be her destroyer! I can't fault Arnav's contempt for her, though, as he believes her to be a traitor and no patriot is going to love a traitor... [am a fan of NCIS: LA, which has a lot of such spy themes and undercover work wherein the characters have to do things that often go against their own values... so I understand Arnav's motivation]. She was a means to get to his target... when it come to a question of national security, the intelligence officers have to make use of any means necessary, though we might shudder at it. "Why, Arnav?, she cried suddenly, catching hold of his coat lapels with both hands and unsuccessfully trying to shake him. Arnav shot a quick glance at the door, where the men were waiting and pried her fingers away from his coat in a forceful movement. "I don't have to answer any of your questions, Arnav said coldly at the same time... shades of the forced marriage track! 'And I won't leave till I get an answer from you. What right did you have to use me, my body like this?' she repeated weakly with the pupils of her eyes dilated with pain and bewilderment. As she was being taken outside the door, he was struck by the air of absolute stillness and silence that encompassed her... I felt a sharp pang on reading these lines... would be interesting to note his reaction when he finally learns of her innocence. He cuttingly calling her a s**t was uncalled for!




I can't fault Arnav's contempt for her, though, as he believes her to be a traitor and no patriot is going to love a traitor...


Though how he behaved was beyond reprehensible, thanks dear for not missing this very important point...😊

I am going to make the reasons for his contempt for her clear in the next update, but love you for catching this ahead of that..:)
Edited by IPK007 - 11 years ago

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