Originally posted by: LooneyLuna
This was such an expel meets IPK chapter! There is no other way to put it..The intense pheelz, the million emotions, and totally unexpected followup from where we left last. Just like good old LLATW days. Loved it.
I liked the way you began, the magic of the mahal and its pool..on a beautiful night with Kay and her feels, So finally we know aag dono taraf barabar lagi hai (or something like that)!
I didn't expect things to spiral down the way they did though, but than I realise one of the biggest problem A and K have EVA (not her ya) had is acceptance. Like Kay couldnt believe the shiz that was happening to her after her forced marriage so she donned the "pati parmeshwar identity" and well we all know what happened when A confronted Kay about her and Shyam. Yup. So how in the world did I NOT see this coming?!
Just like I actually walked into the FB trap. You are the last person I'd expect a sex scene from before conflict resolution (well conflicts that matter anyway). Anyhow all that got NOTHING, on my dammm pheelz. Why am I not standing outside under the rain while reading this? They need to start making water proof laptops bas. So I dont really blame Arnav and his reaction as well as his vivid imagination, and didnt he say Kay was the one with the imagination? In your face bro. And so he realises some things NEED to be satiated, doesn't matter how you go about it. Oh how I love when your ASR gets needy, and knows exactly what he wants. I can bet you a grand showdown is on its way. Now that he sexchange attyre with the Aman on the flight.
So aman is bachpan ka dost, and anjali's confidante! His liberties around Arnav make sense...but what is with almost hero-worship when it comes to Anjali ya? Wonder how exactly Aman is going to intervene? I spy anjali singh raizada flying to lucknow...soonish.
Interesting this the first time I have heard Sheesh Mahal being referred to as a "house", but I am not going digress into the thoughts of KKG, gita, kasam and all!
Ah the classic, I NEED YOU! is back! I love those moments, when A voices it out and Kay lashes back, "what am I just a thing you want to possess", and well whatever follows...in this case though, its seduction. And holymotherofcupid is it going to get hot in here or what?! I am on the edge of my seat, having forgotten well and truly about the events on a certain terrace in the north wing of the mahal...
And so the scene is set, the "hole" is ready in its full glory, Kay is ready in her patent reddish sari, and arnavji with his seduction eyes. It all reminds me of how far we have come from chapter 1, from just glimpses to full on eye sax! Until it all becomes too much and we go into the balcony for some fresh air, and much awaited acceptance...just so we come back a full circle to where we left on another terrace not long ago, KDHI-ing for a love that exists so naturally, but shouldn't (apparently). KBA J?! Brilliant the way it all ties up.
And now another scene is set, for the much awaited interlude, the past and more KDHI. Yet another cliff for poor luna and a few more sleepless nights.
For now I am just going to maintain that blue room, had deep gutterful significance. bas.
This chapter truly brought in the "SEDUCTION" just like Meera said!
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ps. Advance mein sorry, m not make an appearance again until you decide to write the rest of that letter or reveal all the mysteries. Can't take anymore teasing!
Ye Hai Mohabbatein
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