An ArHi SS:Seduction *Thread Two* (COMPLETED)

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124555

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Posted: 11 years ago

#541

loved every bit of it

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HIPKKND

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Posted: 11 years ago

#542

OMG you are such a tease!..and I was all so excited that we would get to read about the past and the reasons why they can't be together..now this is a real cliffhanger!..can't wait to read the updates!

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Nutcase

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Posted: 11 years ago

#543

The writing flows amazingly from your imagination into words. Your mind is incredible with the ideas and the way you script the story is thrilling, holding the sense of suspense, mystery, pain, agony, love and passion. I deeply enjoying reading your works. The intricacies you weave into the characters and their situations, the way you take the plot forward while providing wonderful backdrop.

Arnav's past was described in a heart wrenching manner...Khushi's story is still a mystery...Waiting for it to be unraveled..

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CRAZY4CARTOON

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Posted: 11 years ago

#544

You haven't revealed the
contents of the letter yet
Why Why Why
What the hell
happened in Khushi's past

dying wid curiosity to
know what Khushi wrote in her
letter.
really hope we get
to know in the next chapter.

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mysticmanthri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#545

in days where silent readers are abhorred,occasional readers are not given likes or acknowledgement ,writers threaten to take their stories to blog,where plagiarism is common,its really refreshing to see your end note,not only your stories are epic suspense filled romantic and novel the way you come across in forum is truly commendable .i wish you the very best in all your endeavors and real life,keep writing and entertaining!

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BSRaizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#546

Too good Juhi, v eager to know khushis truth so Awating for the nxt part!

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jakhushi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#547

Initially I was distressed because of abovious reasons... No details of the letter 😆.

But you weave such poetry with words...that it kind of sucks one into it, revelling in the mystery rather than being disgruntled by it.

Of course..now my previous theory doesn't stand ( of Akash ka girlfriend) ... But all that stays here is the pain. The pain of not being able to share what the they want to..what they both need.

This chapter wasn't about Khushi and Arnav's seduction...but also of your readers...with your words...into another world of chandeliers and great halls... And dark mystical gardens... Of nights bereft of lovers touch... Of yearning.

I am sure you are trying...but please khao some Taras on us...and update ASAP 😊.

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rvas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#548

ur evil😆...loved the updates and was left feeling happy and restless at the same time...u may be evil but ur an evil genius so can't hold anything against u

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kanika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#549

superb update ,full of mystery.

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Nikita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#550

That was absolutely Fantastic !!

but we still don't know Khushi's secret...but Arnav's reactio to the letter tells tat its something very..erm..i don't know...super natural or something ?? O.O

And damn! That teaser was Arnav's dream...! No..!! U meanie !

But now i just can't wait to know khushi's truth !

*sigh*

I'm so in love with this FF !