Res. Unres.
See! I knew it would be some curse. I literally got goosebumps when I read through Chapter number 6. It was magnificent. Really. The way you brought Shyam into this, the hatred Payal had for Khushi and how the whole death scene happened and those words that came out of Payal's lips. It was all so good. I don't know what to say. Seriously. I was like.. wow.
Everything is so unique and you write everything so beautifully. The whole suspense was worth a wait you doll!
The concept.. its perfect. I've never ever heard of such a story before. I adore how you relate everything from your fictions to real life. These curses, witchcraft.. everything really exists. And you've beautifully explained it here.
The shocking part is that Khushi's like 100 + or something. ._. Everything is so magical! It was sad how Arnav kept waiting for Khushi in the blue-room. It's sad how, Khushi had always been the nice one and now she's going through such a bad thing, a curse.
There's so much to say, I had so much in mind but I've seem to have forgotten! I'm so sorry! I'm just overwhelmed by this story. Even in my maths class, I had this story in mind. Literally. I kept wondering about the curses and the how you've written about the way she goes into the picture when she is full of unconditional joy and happiness, and what's Arnav going through. I hadn't even payed any attention to the teacher and time just flew away. Lol. This story is driving me crazy. I can't wait to read more. And I got so excited while reading the story that I quickly sent the link of your story to one of my best friends and she doesn't really like Arnav&Khushi.. but she read all of the 8 chapters in a day and she kept bothering me with her annoying me all day that she wanted to read chapter nine. LOL. So Juhi.. you better update soon.
I love the banner which you've posted with Chapter 7. It portrays the story so well. The 'Arnavs' of your stories are super surprising. You always show something different in him. The way he promised Khushi with all his heart that he'd definitely find out a way to break the evil curse was emotional. He's desperate. But it's sad too.. comparing to his past that is. He's fighting for her and himself. Oh and in Chapter 8, he is such a caring and sweetie. First he made her all happy by the love making and then when he confessed to her by the lake.. later he made her forget the joy so that she wouldn't feel the pull and go back to the painting. I felt so bad. And then I was covered with goosebumps.
The lake scene was so beautiful. And the time of his confession! Haha. Amazing. But whatever, the rain had made her forget for a few seconds. :/ She was so glad that she had to go. *sigh*
Please, tell me it'll be a happy ending? Please tell me that they'd find a cure? :( I know that you will answer all this with time. Anyway! Take your time.. Because this torturous wait is worth it.
I must thank you for presenting this splendid story. Thank you SO much! I really love you for that. :')
Update soon, doll..
Loads of love!
Ps- I have a request? Actually after this story.. you might find me crazy but can you like write a story which has Arnav as a Vampire and Khushi just an innocent girl who he falls for? I'd be super glad! ^_^ Thanks!
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