An ArHi SS:Seduction *Thread Two* (COMPLETED) - Page 99

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

151.4k

Users

409

Likes

5.1k

Frequent Posters

noureen.shah thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Really v v vvv amazing storry.. loved it
Aruni. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
WOOOW!! The mysterious air of this story finally makes sense... The closest thing i know to this story is Ella Enchanted, and to have a fairy tale story on Arshi is
Last line of the curse... is that the way out? Waiting to read more.

Maddy1270 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

A truly beautiful banner... kudos to the person who created it! And the new

Naming Khushi's loyal servant Sheetal' is a nice twist. It's truly said that one's real character is revealed by the way one treats one's servants or waiters, etc and the way they respond to one... the servants considering Khushi the rightful heiress to the Gupta fortune, rather than the usurpers, says a lot about her character. The insidious cruelty shown Garima to Khushi is the worst kind... at least with Payal, her dislike of Khushi is blatantly obvious, but with Garima it isn't so! Khushi would never mean anything more than a burden she had to bear...a price she had to pay in order to stay in the Mahal. No, Garima Gupta wasn't really cruel... quite an understatement, I must say! Payal usurping Khushi's rightful place and using the latter's wealth to dower herself is quite selfish on her part. That Khushi had been adopted and gone on to enjoy all these luxuries must have rankled with Payal who believed that the Gupta wealth rightfully belonged to her as she was a Gupta by blood whereas Khushi wasn't! Khushi's myriad talents had been encouraged and supported, and tutors had been brought in to teach her the languages, painting , and mathematics... glad to note the progressive outlook of Khushi's parents, especially of her mom, at a time when marriage was all a girl was considered worthy of. The love and understanding they and Madhumati showered on her was lost when they died, so it's no wonder that Khushi withdrew into herself, thus playing into the hands of the usurpers, Garima and Payal. Khushi's stitching that bridal veil for Payal as a gift is an selfless act that sadly wasn't appreciated or valued as it ought to have been. "You look good, Khushi. You look like...a true Gupta. Not one single guest will think otherwise tonight." That's such a cruel thing to say, especially as her kindness and generosity reflect that she was just like the older Guptas, unlike Garima and Payal. Their crassness is highlighted when they valued a designer' veil over one beautifully handcrafted one having love imbued into each and every thread. If Shyam was intent on marrying Payal, he had no business touching Khushi... deliberately or unknowingly, Shyam Manohar Jha has always proven to be a disaster for Khushi once he steps into her life! Payal's hatred is truly virulent. I blame Shyam for waiting till the last moment to tell the truth of his feelings for Khushi, not that the outcome would have been any better if he had told her earlier... the insult and humiliation to Payal are all the more greater... this betrayal combined with her hatred for Khushi pushed her over the edge, making her hold Khushi responsible for all her woes. I believed Khushi to be a ghost or one of the fairy folk, but a curse... never saw that coming! ...but innocence can dare... could this be the key to undoing the curse? Payal's cutting words were bound to leave Khushi with a sense of guilt, especially now that two people are dead. Khushi laying aside her guilt and grief to provide solace to Garima is a poignant moment. Garima accepting Khushi as a daughter seems to be the only good thing to come from this tragedy... does she know that Shyam was in love with Khushi and had broken off the marriage with Payal? The curse is all the more vile as it has condemned Khushi to loneliness and to a world devoid of happiness, as the moment she is happy she gets trapped in her portrait. And the fact that she never aged ensured that she would have to change jobs and dwellings frequently if she were to keep her secret. Just a thought: Khushi really gives new meaning to the notion of the older woman in a relationship! Khushi gathering such a vast array of knowledge in diverse fields is another good thing the curse yielded. A sentence for the hatred born from a seduction that had never been... heart-rending yet beautifully put! And then... There was nothing he could do, but leave her to her fate... it seems to reflect her loss of hope or could be her acceptance of her fate. Now that the truth is before Arnav, he has no option but to believe in her honesty and that she has no hidden agenda. Was it because of their heightened love for Khushi that they could see Khushi being drawn into the painting? Or has it something to do with the painful loss of a loved one that both have experienced which is the key to this? No, she hadn't run from him. She had run to the painting...because she had been overwhelmed by happiness on both occasions... thank god he has realised how much he means to her, that she isn't indifferent to him, as he feared! Arnav empathising with her suffering makes our heart go out to him as it indicates not only the depth of his love for her but also the depth of her suffering. Wonder what was that object that Khushi left behind, and which broke his control over his emotions!

chenis thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Why can't khushi be happy ?why is arnav not believing what khushi told about her in the letter?
What's in the dam letter?
I know lot of questions but i am not able to put my taughts together.you really leave with the cliffhanger at the end of each update and that's creating more curiosity in me to know where this story is heading to.
I hope soon arnav believes khushi and find a solution to keep khushi happy ever after.
Crazy4IPK thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
Uff, what a cliffhanger!😔
Juhi, your way of enigmatic story telling sometimes kills me, you know!
But it sure creates suspense and interest towards the tale.
I read last two updates in four days, as really busy with school. Is liye maafi chahti hoo. I always wanted to be the first reader of your story. But the heck of AD doesn't let me.
Anyway, let's come to the story, how it progressed in last two chapter. Khushi's story is quite mysterious. what happened with her that compelling her to be with Arnav, after so much insistent from him? Was she married? You still didn't reveal the content of the letter. Arnav is so much in love with her, that even ready to accept her in any condition. What about that seductive dream? the pull towards her is so visceral, that he can't get her out of his sight and out of his mind.
Eagerly looking forward for the next update.

Akanksha- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
That is totally unexpected twist.
Didnt even think such thing is possible. But the way you wrote it left me speechless.
Absolutely fabulous and fantastic update
Farah008 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing genre...never in my wildest dream did I imagine this kind of plot!
revathysugathan thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Had to comment after reading Part 6 - Never in a million years could I have imagined the past that you have written here 😲
I don't know what I feel - 😡 at Payal for the hatred she had for K, at Garima for being clueless and 💔 for Khushi for the several bleak lifetimes she had to go through.

But I see one ray of hope here - the last line uttered by Payal - Is Arnav going to be her salvation? What if she lost her innocence? 🤔

Now am on the seventh part 😊
foreversarun3 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
Just read ch 4 part 1!!!
OMG thankfully she's back!!!

But OMG what happened??

Awesome part...gonna read the next soon 😊😊
Kaatya thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
I am stunned! Never did I expect such a twist.. Your writing is exceptional. 👏

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

27 days ago

The Unending Dream OS [Completed]

In Every Birth, Find Me The night air in Mathura was thick with monsoon rains. In her small room lit only by a flickering diya, Radhika drifted...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

28 days ago

Moh-Maya ~ MayRa OS [Completed]

Whispers of Maya The glass towers of Delhi glittered under the cold moonlight, but inside the corner office of Ruan Publications, darkness...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

2 months ago

Pyaar Ya Rebound? ~ Rumya SS [Completed]

Intro: Rudra fakes a relationship with his best friend Soumya to impress glamorous Bhavya-but ends up falling for the one girl who truly knew...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

4 months ago

ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed} ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed}

[NOCOPY] P Y A A R. K A. N A G H M A. "Friends?" a little boy extended his hand towards a girl which she responded. They smiled and embraced...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

5 months ago

Student of the Year: When Love Lost Its Way [Completed]

Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @JasmineRahul in Submit Writing Prompt Thread who requested for writing: The alternative version of the...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".