Polemic Jackanapes #2: [COMPLETE] Chapter 13-27B - Page 49

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Posted: 11 years ago
i think,after that heavy dose of PayalGiri where she tries to reason the whole feelings for Arnav, this one is giving an insight to him, but i need to read it, again and again; being almost at the similar phase in my own life..
loved it!
Thanks for the PM, lady!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved d update!!!
Arshi convo ws cute...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing chpp..here arnav is actually struggling in his life to hav a goal at which he cn focus frever..n den dat bitch psyal wrds r cuming bavk to back in his mind..y d hell she is having prob wid arnav..if her relationshp is nt wrking nice lately..y she is bringing arnavd failure all d tym..n she doesnt care abt khushi..she is j cuz..she is having a happy love life..where as payal is still struggling..

D phone convosation was light n amazing part of dis chp..where arnav frgt all his tension..n was nly engrosedin his khushi..

N d family talk..aakash is seriously a very sensible n humbke man..usse aise payal jaise ladki kaise mili god kwns..
N dat talking of arnav n aakash avt d case n arnav understanding d nature n d person aakash was very well described..overall it was arnav chps though!!

He kwns dat payal is behind all wrng nood of arbavs..n he ill defo do sonethn avt it..n sush payal fr dat!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
You mentioned the FF is moving slowly, yes real life have to go slowly and smothly as your real life based FF, this chapter spoke a lot and changed the perspectives of each other.

Distance do help create the closeness, both missing and what will be the best pick up line between these two then crosswords, one who wish to swim in the crossword pool and the other enjoying the swimming partner, it is his envision of seeing his kushi in six letter word which has more than 2 "eyes" dress. :P

Payal wait for Akash he is bringing your choclate sandwhich and beware before you finish your sandwhich he is going to jump on you no, not like you think he is going to jump on your throat for hurting his brother, may be someone must show you how your words are pricking, who else can do better than Akash.

What a nice view to see the family dining at same time, Deviyani is really lucky to share such with her grandson, this shows how she had brought up her grandson, soon she is going to put her foot down to have wedding may be weddings in her house.

I am not mad at Payal, what she is saying is right but how she is saying really hurts, damn I sound like a typical women.. *sob,sob* *sniff,sniff*

Sorry I have not commented previously, was catching up chapter by chapter, I appreciate all those readers who analyse and comment each and every chapter including you, I really like to read your comments in EIT blog :) but sad thing is only 3 more chapters pending and 3 more comments only :( Why Meeta Meera why? Why you want to end EIT can't you write how Krishna is growing with her magic, how she is with PJ? How she is going to find her Sri Krishna?... *sob, sob* and *wailing sob* .
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Posted: 11 years ago
Pdated Twiggs, on page 69!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
"He had allowed himself to be the plain canvas everyone he came across was allowed to paint on, but never realized what had become of him in the process"...so true...loved these lines
Among Payal and Akash ,one pin points the weaknesses ,the other shows the way..this couple is needed to keep the other in check ...

Khushi with her mere voice invokes a smile in Arnavs life and she made his day...their interaction brings smile to the readers also...😉 And I assume you are a bit of khushi in your real life too..
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice advice Akash although indirectly and hope you give a piece of your mind to Payal as well. I am a bit miffed with her after the last update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Khushi's call was like perfect timing for Arnav, he definitely had been having a bad day, and then the way they interact with each other, giving each other the comfort and peace of mind, just smile words of love and care, that's what relations are about!
Khushi's very attentive to her surroundings and is can sense things very carefully, she makes it point to get to the bottom of what Arnav thinks and feels. I just love her spirit and cheerful attitude!

Loved how Nani and her grandsons had dinner together, spent quality time with each other, in today's day and age, everyone is running around ,they always tied up as they say, these are moments that one misses so much.
I think Arnav will be much happier now and that's what the key point is, to feel loved and feel special by your family and loved ones, those are the feelings that uplift you and somehow insignificant thoughts don't matter anymore.

Twiggs, always look forward to your updates, love how real this story feels and the pace of this chapter was absolutely fine!

Looking forward to the next one.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Khushi called just when he needed her. Just hearing her voice calmed him. Love how he knows how her very vivid imagination runs away with her!
Good that Devyani insisted they eat together and talk. Just talking about mundane everyday things with your family is so important. What is the point of living in our own little bubble, like Aakash reading his magazine, and only being present physically.
Like how Arnav is learning more about himself.

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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic part
loved it
thanks for the pm

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