Polemic Jackanapes #2: [COMPLETE] Chapter 13-27B

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janu

@Janu75

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#391

An update without my favorite couple but not one to be skipped though!

Nervous Payal, Akash has never witnessed that and she was always In her elements all the time he knew her.

The discussion was fairly realistic and Akash reacted the way Payal had not expected and I think Akash has every right to get miffed since he knew nothing about this.he is right that he feels left out of this and on the other hand Payal is right that what ever she did was before ,was during a casual fling between them.

To be in a relationship or to stay in it,either of them has to take a sensible approach and often find men put their foot forward .

If only every couple thinks this way and solve their issues!

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#392

This is one story where the comments also invoke so much to think about and the discussions going on after this update were so interesting to read ! I absolutely love reading Meera's and Sandhya's comments.

So much has already been said and my opinion is not very far from them.

However there is one thing which i have always wanted to say that in PJ , from where i see things (my opinion), it is Khushi and Payal who are the main leads and the story revolves around these two central characters and more so from their points of view with the men playing some thing more like a character role which i love. { And that's exactly why even a non Arhi update is as interesting as ever}

Akash is more than a keeper , he is a fantastic boyfriend and above that a wonderful human being , and Payal is just real. They both reacted how it came to them naturally.

Real world sucks more often than not but the right companion makes it all worth it in the end.

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#393

Awesome update...

Loved the fluster and tongue tied Payal... Its very rare to see her like this but this change is always welcome...

Poor Akash had to apologize many times in a day and that too to the same person... But everything is fine at the end and that's all that matter...

Loved the update...

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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#394

No arshi in this update :(

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#395

Your Payal hasn't always had a positive response; the reasons for the same are varied. But i would like to say that I differ in my view point regarding her. She might not be the docile woman we have known from the show, she is real and perhaps because I can associate with the person that she is, Payal of PJ is someone I wouldn't refrain from championing at any point of time.

And what you took up in this chapter is an issue I'm sure most couples must be facing, in some way or the other. The relativity factor is there, and fiction might take us away from AD, but it is in this that we seek what we are already leading, wherein the two separate paths have their margins blurred; PJ gives you just that.

I also like for a fact the way you led Akash's reactions; the initial flirty attitude, which then went through a myriad of emotions. The best part however was him picking up on her perturbed state and asking her about it at the right time.

And yes, I must also tell you that I'm glad you kept this one just about Payash😊

Edited by Eccentrica - 11 years ago

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#396

Hi I came across your wonderful FF! I read it all in one go! It's simply amazing! Please could u pm me with future updates? I have buddied u. Thank you.

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#397

lovely chapter...

finally payal and akash get a chance to talk...loved it the way u written...calm at the same time emotional and intense...both are right ...glad that they talked and sort out everything...

thank u for the lovely chapter and pm...

cheers...

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#398

Loved how you portrayed...Akash's insecurities...it was bound to come up...

I so happy that after their talk...things look more brighter for them...

Love the way put your words...your writing speaks...volumes and every chapter..one can learn from you more...awesome work!

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Sonaparam29

@Sonaparam29

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#399

Beautifull chp..i always lyked dis patmyal..so ambitious n strong..n dis aakash is also so sensetive..n mostly mature..
Overall a nice chp..aakash n payal relationshp is described very well in dis chp..n m glad it was a arshilious chp..cuz v wan oder characters description..n der lyf
Payal loves aaksh very much..bt dis is her 1st love..so sge is actually scared..dat aaksh ill hurt her..n aaksh cnt think of livin payal in his wildest dream..
😊 😃

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Bavari

@Bavari

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#400

Excellant update. Payal's anger towards Akash's reaction is not fair. Whatever stage their love is she shouldn't have kept him dark in pursuing her dreams. B'cos in relationship whatever the decision both of person involved in will have equal impact. Loved Akash so sweet of him to trying to patch up. Thx.