FF| With Or Without You New Thread Link Pg 151 - Page 23

Beautiful update...thanks for the PM

Rather than bringing his past r critising his present nani n anjali should do r think ways to make him come out of his grief mariage z not d soln to make him move on, guess he z afraid to get in any relation n make another soul unhappy...suffering d physical n mental pressure in a marriage dt too it was love marriage where she was leading her life with d person she loved him d most n if dt decision dt choice went wrong it leaves not just with a heartbreak it affects deir mental stability,lack of self confidence afraid dt people would jndge them its really vry tainted situation in one's life but she proved herself as fighter n now would emerge from it emotionally... Waiting 4 arshi meet n her interview...

Both Arnav and Khushi are individuals who have been hurt because they placed their faith in people who did not deserve it...

Uuufff Shiz this is one hell of a intresting story...I always love this thing about ur writing that ur writing keeps reader's intrest intact till the end...Reader is unable to leave the story at any point...
N another hing is connctions between past n present...Like Arnav has a past n Khushi also has past...It seems Arnav's Samara has left him n Khushi was forced by Neel to leave him...Prologue was awesome one...They didnt see each other because Darkness hides many secrets...
Aman n Arnav are friends...I always love their bonding...Aman is a good brother,,fierecely protective of his sister but at the same time allows her some personal space too...
I think After Aryan,, I m going to fall in love with Sarah...:)
but I have a question...Prologue was 4 n half years back...Present day,,Sarah is 2 n half years old...shouldnt she be 3 years old...Becoz back then Khushi was in Her first Trimester...
Yyyaaayyy U r going to give us weekly updates...Plzz Dont keep us waiting for long for this story becoz U knw Dark stories always make me feel restless...
Going to read next chapter...Waiitng for Kinjal n Di to make an appearence...
Thankkkss allloot for pm Shiz...:)

Chapter 2-
This was awesome on revealing bits of Khushi's past...some lines in ur story just make me wonder how u come up with such deep thoughts n simple philosophies...I guess khushi didnt notice her being a victim in their relationship...Becuase Wives always forgive their husband on showing care n saying apology,,no matter what they do to them...Khushi was one such woman...Adding to that,,She was in love with him...sometimes love makes u blind n U just plainly ignore other person's flaws, then there comes a time u start thinking that other person has no flaws...
Sarah..Mera paara baby...mwwuuaahhh...
From Arnav's take on weddings, it looks like the Man has decided to Not move on in his life...He is still in a delusional state... But now Nani has put her foot down n She has challengd that she will get him married within six months...
So Khushi got a call from R&A associates...I guess next update will show interview...
Waiting for next part...
P.S its been ages since last update of The Photographer p...Plzz give us update of that story too...
Thankkkuu soo much Shiz for pms...

Updated my comment on page 28😊

loved it

Loved d uodate very much..m lovin d khushi in dis ff..i dnt kwn y bt srnsv is becumin saddy n dull in dis ff..apne hii khayalo mein rhens n all..i hope he ill b back wid a bang..ofer wise its a nice update..waitin fr drr milan nw..at d iv!!
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This story seems so different as it deals with emotions other than love. I'm sure this difference is its USP. They have so much to first overcome at their own personal levels before they fathom anything between themselves.