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fantastic work...glad to see kushi moving forward ...hope they find peace soon...continue soon

I am sorry for not commenting before. I caught up with both chapters and I am impressed. I like that you didn't just rush into their meeting even though we are desperately waiting for it. That notion aside, I am very much reeled into this story. Especially with Arnav, and there is Khushi also. But, he intrigues me to no end because to hold on to someone for this long, it means that she must have meant a lot to him. He is hurt and angry on the inside. It can be clearly seen in his actions, because he still looks back. The fact that he is very clear on not wanting to ruin another's life because of his own personal sorrow is rather commendable. I keep alternating between feeling sorry for him and wanting to give a good push to let go. A love like that...I guess like you said, it takes courage to hold on. Not many people do, and that is why we forget the importance of fighting a already lost battle.

Did I tell you, how much I love Sarah? I absolutely adore the kids in your story, they make me smile and leave me in awe with their maturity. This young girl with her mass of curls is not only striking but she is smart also. I love the bond between her and Khushi. And, the fact that Khushi sees her more as a beacon of hope instead a reminder of the past...well that is even more welcoming of a thought. Many people when placed in such situations take to hiding behind vain efforts that often measure up to nothing. They blame society, they blame their children, they blame their parents, but never the oppressor. Khushi sees Sarah as a enlightenment of her future, which is rather brave of her. But, I mean, who wouldn't love a angel who has a Mr. Ellie? I want one of those too!

The hardest part of this update was reading Khushi's insight into her traumatic past and somehow I know this is only the beginning. I fear to read forward because I know in my heart this happens more than often in the real world and yet we turn a blind-eye because it is not happening within our homes. And, I agree most of us aren't even under the impression that someone else is pulling our strings and we have become a mere puppet in the stream of life. To read about Neel, I can just say, he doesn't deserve to be called a man. Any man who thinks hitting a women and imposing himself on her makes him stronger, than let me tell you something, you are the weakest by far of any living creature on this planet. You play on your own insecurities and lash out. Khushi was strong to stay all these years, but I am much curious to know what compelled her to leave. It seems that she wasn't aware of the child, when she left. I am sure Neel must have done something quite nonredeemable to make her way to flee at that moment.

Thank you for writing out the sessions because I get to peer into Khushi's mind and understand her a little more. What is even more worth recognition is the fact that you are writing this context without any experience to back up your words and yet you hit home with every word of yours.

I leave you with a quote that still makes me shiver. I can hear the roar of women's silence.

Brilliant. I look forward to their meeting.

This is a lovely story Shiza.

Fabulous update...
The session 6 is quite revealing ... Limelight is total on neil n khushi relation...

lovelllyyy update dear..

Very heart grippingly written and I loved it... Sarah is a cutie pie and the mom-girl bonding was a pleasurable read... Children make our life more lively n lovely... N for her for everything she had endured in that marriage Sarah has been the only positive thing that happened from it...

When she decided to work last time she had to face hindrance in the form of an external Monster "Neil" and now is her situation any better??? That monster made her life miserable and she has been left with to fight her internal monsters now... She will have to fight it out this time too... We will have to wait n see how Mr a Raizada turns out to be with her!!! Can two lost souls find solace in each other!!!!

Awaiting next update :)

Nice update.. They dont recognize each other but Khushi knows what he is like.. And now she is gonna work for him.. Khushi really went thru a lot but then she fought for herself... Waiting for them to meet...

Thanks for clarifying how Arnav did not recognise Khushi in Shimla ...

awesum update loved it this stry is reslly interesting mostly it feel real m mean many women r going thru same pain as khushi here or even more worst khushi is lucky to have brother who support n love her many dont have anyone beside them n have to baer it all alone thx for pm dear

Sarah is truly a sunshine for Khushi<3 loved the mother daughter flower shopping<3 I love the symbolism of a zebra should be taken care with love" it is what Khushi actually needs now! She herself a zebra flower, waiting for a perfect owner to tend her with care and she doesn't even realize it<3

Loved how reality of "raizada" hit her. I
May be assuming a lot but the way you described her telling how he used to look at her n she felt it was dislike but why do I feel he had a 'thing' for his best friends sister but covered it behind his arrogance mask... Anyways I'm excited how Khushi will deal with the interview and her fear of facing people and speaking. She doesn't realize she is taking a step towards 'zebra flower owner".

Now coming to the last bit! I'm crying n I don't have guts to speak about it:( the words are not enough to say what I feel for Khushi and how much that innocent soul suffered :( man
How did she take all this for so long :( that session shattered my heart man :(((

Now to mention the first bit, I want to say I think nani n Anjali should stop with this. Let him live how he wants to live because soon it will change automatically ;)

Anyways shiz late but you know why<3 and yet again loved it! I'm
Hungry for romance but I knew what I'm signing for and I'm more thn happy with the result<3