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angeldream14

@angeldream14

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#121

loved it

its common for girls to let go if their husband hit them but they dnt realize is that he can do it again n u shld give a person second chance but he shld take it for granted that he will always get that

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

oh very different concept... i liked reading it.. one question... does arnav knw it was khushi before he helped her tht day...

it looks like he knew her...since u mentioned he had met her a few times when he was in college and visited the gupta house...

is tht the reason he helped her?

im glad khushi is opening up to the dr.

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Once again I am ever so grateful to you for approaching a subject that is taboo amongst so many families. I love how the link to Arnav is from Aman as a friend and a brother to Khushi, makes me also wonder if this is going to cause a rift in their relationships if Khushi and Arnav date..
A strong Khushi has emerged form an awful experience ad I hope she remains strong.
A lot of questions will be answered no doubt in future updates, such as does Neel know about his daughter, has he given up parental rights. will he make a future appearance.
I hope I am not wrong to assume that Arnav did not recognize Khushi due to bruises the night he stopped to help her along with his driver? Did he not recognize Kinjals voice as he has not met herr?
However I do want to ask why does Sarah refer to Kinjal as Massi rather than Maami, ?

You write from deep within the heart and everyone should read your work, so I am praying no one gives you reason to move this to you blog.. those that were unable to read Choices really did miss out on beautiful story.

Posted after reading prologue again:

I owe you an apology for incorrectly assuming, they both do not really see each other that night. Also Arnav it appears eavesdrops outside the bedroom door not on the phone .

Edited by srat - 11 years ago

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Peda

@Peda

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Hi S

I finally had a chance to catch up with this story.

Congratulations...the prologue was riviting.

After reading chapter one I was once again amazed at your insight on domestic violence and the sensitivity with which you handle it.

I am now really looking forward to reading more.

Thank you so much for taking the time out to pm me

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pmehra300

@pmehra300

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Superb chapter

Loved it

Poor khushi has gone through so much

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Arnav and Kushi they both had their pasts and they are suffering with those memories...

Wonderful Update

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

beautiful one
sad tht women has to go through so much...

fighting is not evryone's might

PS: isnt khushi was the same person tht Arnve saved tht day... than..
is tht he pretended not know ... or wht ?

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fhussain237

@fhussain237

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Great start to the story hun
So arnav n aman are best friends
Im surprised arnav hasnt met khushi properly
Looking forward to next chapter
Continue soon :-)

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.Brooke.

@.Brooke.

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Fantastic update.Looking forward for more 😊

Thanks for the pm.

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#130

very emotional update.. khushi is a victim of domestic violence, abuse.. the scars are still there.. she is uneasy even by touch of her brother.. she must have gone through so much of pain that she is still feeling the pain.. Sarah is cute.. ballerina.. arnav have dropped khushi at the airport.. does he remembers that.. well also felt sorry for arnav who have gone through a heart break.. loved aman a sweet brother who is so concerned about his sister and his love for his niece is superb... loved the update..

thanks for pm 😊