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That was so well written...Great job Your story and the characters (Arnav, Aman, Sarah and Khushi) have captivated me in different ways. I am in awe right now after reading the update. So many different emotions running through.

Arnav's first love leaves him and he feels betrayed and doesn't want to move on. He has become the ASR that we all fell in love with. Arrogant, tough, hardass J

Aman, caring brother who would do anything to see his sister happy. Glad that he was able to get her away from the beast. The way he cares for his niece is commendable, trying to fill in the father role. You can tell that little girl means the world to him and she loves him right back. Hoping his wife Kinjal is not the jealous types that does not like the attention he gives to the little girl and Khushi. Dal main kuch kala hai...since they do not live with him, but it could also be that Khushi wants to be independent...my mind is all over the place right now.

Sarah is so cute, what a precious little girl! She seems well behaved and mature for her age. Love that she has her own sense of style of dressing and wants to be a ballerina...how cute!

Finally our dear Khushi...poor thing has been scared but I hope this story is about healing and she can find peace. The fact that she is afraid of a touch from even her brother shows she has been brutally beaten. Love how despite what has happened to her she wants to independent and not rely on her brother...hats off to Khushi! Realize the revelations might be hard to swallow but needed as so many women go through this. Hoping you plan to heal her and Arnav and they both find love within each other. After all that is what we want Arnav and Khushi together.

Thank you so much for the PM and would love to read your other story but it is not posted anymore. Any chance I can get access to your blog? Please pretty please :)