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Amanram

@Amanram

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

I love the concept and the way you are doing the story telling. the past being told through the sessions with the therapist and the future will be most probably working at AR and her interactions with Arnav.

I am glad that khushi managed to walk away and start afresh - lots of abused women do not find it in them to do it especially if they have kids to consider. their spirits are so crushed and they feel so worthless that they are convinced that they cannot function without the help of the abuser. It is really a sad state of affairs and one sometimes feel so helpless and frustrated for not being able from one's point of view to make these abused woman see sense!!!

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Stimmy

@Stimmy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Great story I must say. .

The way you moulded Khush's character is absolutely praiseworthy. .

She is making sure to stand for herself and not to dependant like she was before. .

Looking forward for future updates. .thanks for the PM😊

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Kamala

@Kamala05

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Very intriguing concept.

I am glad that it is not a normal love story of Arnav and Khushi.

I like the concept of story.

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shr1234

@shr1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Oh the great coincidence or destiny! Aman and Arnav are great friends and by the looks of it , both don't know who helped Khushi or Arnav helped whom that fateful night. There sure is more than what meets the eyes in case of Samara and Neel, the creep has already managed to infuriate me. I loved the way Khushi is holding together. I cannot imagine but only guess how difficult it must be to rise again after being in the hell. Sarah, stole my heart away :) Beautiful and captivating chapter, thanks for the PM :)

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Nikita

@zoobie-doobie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

This looks very very Interesting..

The Prologue was fabulously written .👏

Would love to see how the story unfolds..

Do PM me when you update !

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Nikita

@zoobie-doobie

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Lol..after reading the prologue and commenting , i realized that the first chapter was already posted and so i'm commenting again.

Ok , so Arnav and Aman are friends...and Arnav somewhat knows Khushi .

But didn't he remember that she was the same girl he had saved 2 years back..?

And Khushi flinched at her brother's touch...due to her past with that Bas***d Neel..

I loved Sarah..she's such a cutiepie !

And Khushi goes for counselling session..Hmm...i feel really bad sad for her.

Poor soul...

I'm really loving the way the story is proceeding.

Would love to read more.

Do PM me when you update !

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fraser

@fraser

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

first of all thank you for come up with new one... till now i didn't read choices but still thank you
one question) aman n arnav are friends. did arnav never see his friend sis?
at time arnav come to know the women is same who will stay in his house two years ago. what will his reaction? m excited for that and yeah m fallen with baby sara charcter do add up her pic

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preethi.saseeda

@preethi.saseeda

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Fiction at its best and that is what I have signed up for... So refreshingly written story with a deep subject... Arnav n Khushi are both victims of failed relationship and they have very disturbing past...

You had written the prologue in a very intriguing manner and I loved it... N it is all going to get interesting again... When she does not know him, he will get to know soon that it is she whom he had unknowingly helped that cold winter night... Can't wait to read further... My Tuesdays look promising now :)

hope u continue to write here in IF... N if you choose to move it to a blog then please provide me access for the same :)

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#149

First of all, sorry for the late reply.. Im so so glad that u have started a new FF..

Coming to it, looks like Khushi has gone thru a lot.. Arnav helped her then and then they went apart.. Well, they were never together so they really didnt go apart.. And then Arnav n Aman being friends.. And Arnav knows Khushi but still doesnt know that she was the same girl whom he had helped all those years ago.. Khushi has had a bruised past and so does Arnav...

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#150

This story is really going great...jst read the prologue and first chapter.. I guess arnav and khushi will help each other at finding solace...
Am glad khushi is out of her abusive relationship. .!!
But did arnav not see her on the other night? I guess we will have to wait to know it. ..
Waiting for tuesday already!