FF : Ariya - kahi pyar na ho jaye -note - pg 49 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsumm update 😊 cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Omg update ho gaya and mujhe pata bhi nahi



Hmmm but I like it...poor ariya unke saath hi aisa kun hota hai...ek sakshi kya kam thi jo ab raj bhi aa gay...


And w t h...aate hi riya ko wifey bola...grrr


Bechara arjun jal bhoon ke raakh ho gaya...and that sakshi...kabab mein haddi banana jaruri hai kya...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb yar..!!
phle riya jealous and ab arjun ki chance😉
hmm so he indeed feels something but isn't able to say..!! aww jaldi kuch socho arjun babu..
ye raj khatra ban ke aaya hai...
by god arjun was so jealous😆
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesommee just now came across this ff . its plain amazing. cont soon plz pm me if psbl
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks friends for all your comments . i will continue soon ,jaise he aagee ki story bana lu lol ... want this to b very outstanding n different but enjoyable love story but i assure u guys this gonna b ariya story coz i love arjun n riya pair .. so kip on commenting n if u guys want to give me ideas pliz do so n message me i will dictate it to u guys . thnks n muahz😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First of all thanks for making it Ariya...i loved thm a lot...!!!
BTW the update was superb...!!!
Loved Arjun n Saakshi's convo...!!!!
Wow Saakshi paired up with Arjun...why didn't Arjun said anything if he didn't like it...????
Awww Akdu felt a bit jeaous whn Rathod pair up Riya up Raj...!!!
This Raj guy looks so cool...!!!!
Can't wait to read further...!!!!!
Thanks 4 pm dr...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey thanx for making it ariya.
and we always support you
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome
love it
continue soon
plzzz pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 4:

riya was thinking why is raj behaving like this . I have to find out what he is after n why so sudden interest in me .. (yes u r right here riya knows who raj is. He is her mausi's only son n her best friend n bhaiya n no one knows about this relation. She shares all her secrets with him n he knows riya is interested in arrjun )and why didn't he told me that he is joining ETF ..

everyone boarded the bus. Chotu took the drivers place , aisha n liza sat together sameer sat on the first seat while shree had to talk to him regarding some information he got so he sat with rathod seeing this riya went to back seat n sat there waiting for shree to come.arjun n raj came n looked for the place to sit ,arjun saw riya sitting alone n decided to go n sit with her but raj beat him to that n went to sit with her saying arjun I will sit with my wife n winked him n arjun fuming just nodded his head . n took a seat behind them sakshi saw arjun sitting alone came to him and said arjun kiya kar rahe ho akele baithe ho , mei baith jao tumhare paas .

arjun: sakshi bus mei aur bhi seats hai toh tum mera dimaag khane ke badle kahi aur seat le lo.

Sakshi got sad n said koi baath nahi arjun n turned to go away

But arjun after thinking something said " ok sakshi come aake baith jao par chup chaap he rahena warna ... samhje yah samjhao

Rathod was listening to them n thought ravan (arjun) ke dimaag mei kuch to chal raha hai ajj achanak se sakshi par itna maherbaan . kuch toh chuth raha hai ..he said last line a bit loudly n shree heard that n said kiya huwa sir .

Rathod : huh no no kuch nai shree bas ...

Scene shifting to riya and raj .

Raj: ri kaise ho .

Riya: thik hu sir .aur app

Raj : kiya ri sir kiwu kahe rahi hoo laddo

Riya (pov) oh acha to ab ayi isko meri yaad . abhi batati hu . nahi baath karunggi inse tho bas strict work mate jaise he rahungi

Raj(pov) uffo lagta hai yeh mujhse bahot naraaz hai . abb toh manana parega aur kaise ,kuch to sochna hoga ..

While converstion was taking between riya and raj , arjun was intendly listening n thinking yeh raj tho bahut he ghatiya kisam ka insaan lagta hai . yeh meri ri ke saath flirt karne ki kosish kar raha hai . what the , meri ri , yeh kiya kahe rahe ho arjun dimaag nahi chal raha tumhara .tumne sirf ek baar pyar kiya hai who bhi roshni se.. par patani dil hamesha iski taraf kiwu khichta chala jata hai

Raj (pov) oh toh arjun sahib meri aur ri ki baatee sunn raha hai .abhi maza chakhata hu is samjhe yah samjhao ko ,bahot takleef de raha hai meri ri ko nah. He shifted a little more closer to riya n put his hand on the back of riya seat behind her head.and moved his head closer to her ear , riya shocked at his antics and say raj kiya kar rahe ho

Everyone is now watching the happenings between them n among them one is very happy n that is sakshi n she is thinking "areh wah ,lagta hai mera raasta saaf hone wala hai " n another one is fuming n that is no one then our hero ,arjun.

Raj: holding his ears n says I am sorry jaan , my laddo mujhe maaf kardo

Arjun(pov) what the! Jaan ' Yeh kiya hai .aesa lagta hai jaise riya aur raj ek dusre ko achi tarha se jaante hai n he is burning with an unknown feeling while rathod is amazed seen arjun like this. Suddenly shree goes to raj n shouts at him " raj sir yeh kiya koi tarika kisi larki se zabarzasti baath karne ka , app riya ki khamoshi ka faida utha rahe .

Arjun : ha raj is mission par ek couple bun ke ja rahe ho iska yeh matlab nahi hai ke tum sachh mei riya ka husband ho .aesa badtameezi nahi chalega, hamara team ek family jaisa hai aur ...

Suddenly riya says : its ok arjun sir n shree .koi baath nahi .insee mai nipath lungi , app log meri waja se larye math pliz ,shaanth ho jaye while arjun n shree slowly turned away sakshi said areh wah arjun sir app toh kamal ke ho kiya sunaya raj ko .

Arjun gives a angry look to sakshi n she kept her mouth shut while rathod called shree to sit down ,shree glance at riya n said riya u ok nah if u want u cum n sit with me and riya said no shree I am fine.

Arjun(pov) why is riya tolerating this guy why not she saying anything . pata lagana parega akhir kiya hai aur agar kuch hai to kiya?

Riya to raj in angry mode : kiya tamasha laga rakha hai sir aapne . hadh hoti hai besharmi ki . mujhe nahi pata tha app larkiyo se iss tarha pesh aati ho . while stading up she say haatiye mujhe dusri seat par baithna hai n raj was like lagta hai riya mujhse bahut ziyada naraz hai ,aese baath kar rahi jaise mujhe jaanti tak nahi ..

Arjun and shree : smiling (pov) yes that's like riya..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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its awesome update dear.
so raj sits with riya.
ohh so riya and raj are cousing brother sister.
so raj knows everything that riya loves arjun.
love the way arjun scold saakshi.
arjun was very jealous.
riya was angry on raj.
love shree concern for riya.
in the end I love arjun pov.
and rathore pov🤣
continue soon.

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