FF : Ariya - kahi pyar na ho jaye -note - pg 49 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
superb yar..!!
bechara arjun jal jal ke pagal ho gya..!!
aur ye raj koi kasar ni chod rha..!!! woah he is cousin of rii?
hmm looks like sam and raj together formed this plan..!!!
and their pov..!!! aab aayga na mazza😉
aww love how shree and arjun are concerned for her..!!
and riya woahh she is way too angry.. ab to raj ki bhi watt lagegi..!!😆
continue soon..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Superb story... read the whole story in one go... really interesting... update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Fantastic update dr...!!!!

Wow Raj is Riya's cousin n knw about her love for Arjun...!!!!

This means that he did all this just to make Arjun jealous...!!!!

Aww Arjun wanted to sit with Riya but Raj beat him to this...!!!

OMG first he scolded Saakshi n thn he allowed her to sit with him...majra kya hai bhai...!!

Wow Sam called him ravan in his mind... n himself iwas confused that wht is cooking in Arjun's mind...????

Loved Riya n Raj's MV n their convo...!!!

Awww he called her meri Riya...how cute...!!!!

Wow Arjun was super jealous...!!!

Loved the way Shree stand for Riya... although there was no need of that...but poor guy didn't knw anything about their relation...!!!!

OMG even Arjun started samjhonify Raj...but Riya saved the situation...!!!

Awww Shree is such a great frnd...!!!!

Wow Riya got angry n scolded Raj n Arjun got happy whn he saw that...!!!

Can't wait to read further...!!!

Continue soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
OMG THIS IS AMAZING YAAR

bechara arjun to jal bhoon ke raakh ho gaya...lol

and wow raj is riya's bro and he knows about ariya ...awesome

so raj is intentionally want to make arjun jealous doing all this

but i think he forgot riya and as result riya is so much angry on raj

lol raj...tum jo kuch kar rahe ho ...hum tumhare saath hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

part 4 B

rathod was watching all this drama and thinking areh waha arjun ki ko ab band baaje ge .lagee raho raj ...hehehe n he was laughing in his mind

After few hours they reached to a dhaba where all of the ETF members got off to eat something while our riya went to the hill side called sunset point just few meters away from dhaba.as she was hygiene freak so she decided to skip meal, this didn't go un noticed by our 2 hero's, arjun n raj . just as arjun was about to go n join riya ,raj went to her n stood beside her with her favorite food in his hand which he had bought from the hotel near ETF building .seeing this riya had a smile on her face which she didn't show to raj n in angry mode riya said " yeh kiya hai raj sir ' and raj making his puppy doggy face said 'oh ri mujhe ab toh maafi dedo meri jaan and he kneel down on his knees n said 'I am so so sorry meri jaan , my laddo woh tumko surprise dena tha isi liye nai bataya yah joining ke bare mei. Ab toh gussa thuk do nah ...''

While riya n raj were busy in there drama whole ETF team were watching the scene with open mouth thinking what is happening there with riya and raj and why is raj kneeling infront of riya . all shocked and surprised , while sakhsi was happy n arjun furious .rathod was smirking seeing arjuns situation .

Riya: acha acha ab thik hai uthoo tum , aur ek he sharth par tumhe maafi milee gi ..

Raj: woH kiya?

Riya: mujhe jaldi se apne haatho se khana khila do nah bhaiya, kitna din hogaya hai tumse khana khae huwee ( she said making a cute face)

Raj laughing said ' ok ok ab natak bannd karo aur come yaha baitho mei khilata hu

Everyone were as shocked as they dint expect riya to be like this and they thought only one thing ke raj ne riya ko propose kiya hai shayad aur riya ne lagta hai yes bol diya...

Riya and raj after eating their food came back to the team n they all boarded the bus . once inside the bus shree came to sit beside riya so he can get update from riya regarding the latest drama between her n raj . and riya told shree every thing about the relation between her n raj n told shree that no one knows about her n raj being cousins so its secret and they are trying to make arjun sir jealous and so now shree is in the conspiracy of making arjun jealous with riya and raj.

While the besties were having their heart talks raj came n sat beside them n shree said ' sorry raj sir ,meine appko bura bhala kaha .

Raj: koi nai shree , tum ri ke dost ho tumko haq banta hai aur yahi toh sache dosti hai , ek doosre ki waqt per saath dena (smiling)

Shree : ok tum dono gappe larao mei rathod sir ke pass se kuch kaam niptaloo aur waise bhi ri ,tumhare samjhe yah samjhao ki nazar idhar he hai , zara bachke plan aage bharhaeyo

Raj and riya full on gossiping n giggling regarding their past life n friends and raj telling riya stories n happenings of back in kolkatta.while these two were having blast arjun was furious n angry and shouted at them ' yeh tum logo ka lovers park nahi hai bus hai ,disturb ho raha hum ko auur agar romance karna hai toh yaha aye kiwu ' samjhe yah samjhao

Riya and raj said together : sorry sir ( and winking at each other)

Edited by farana786 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
note: hey friends sorry to write such a short update but do bear with me will update soon .
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Yipppieee me first...🥳

OMG that was such a cute update dr...!!!!

Wow Rathod was having a great time seeing Arjun's condition...!!!

Awww that Raj is so rocking n is such a sweet bro...!!!

Loved the way he apologized her n he even brought food for her hygene freak sis...!!!

Wow Saakshi kai dil mai laddu phuta whereas Arjun was hell angry n I sure he wanted to break all his bones...!!!

Awww she forgave him n made him feed her by his hands... So cute...!!!!

OMG thy all thought that he proposed her n she accepted...!!!

Wow Shree couldn't control his curiosity n made her spill the beans...!!!!

Loved Shree n Raj's convo...!!!

OMG Arjun was super jealous... Yayyy their plan is working...!!!!

Loved it to the bits...!!!

Can't wait to read further...!!!

Continue soon...

Edited by Aks13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Awesome update dear.
Love riya and raj moments.
Rathore is amazing.
So arjun is jealous.
And rathore understands this.
Continue soon.
And thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
superb yar..!!!
arjun to full on jealous hai by god..!!!
koi na koi to zarur pitega😆
love how raj manaofied her and then she told him to feed her by his hands..!!
lol everyone confused ye kya ho rha hai... and sam mazze le rha hai arjun ki condition pe..!!
aww even shree was concerned for her..!! omg so riya bhi plan mai included hai?😲 ab to shree bhi aagya.,..
ab kya hoga?😆
continue soon..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Awesome super amez update
Loveit
Cont soon

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