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kajal511

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

awesome sweet update
really loved arshi's selfless love for each other

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MamiaRehman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

OMG !!! ... its Beautiful... really heart touching ... i loved it ... <3
at some point it made me teary too... i just loved it ... <3

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Simran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

This was a very nice and sweet OS!!

Thank you for the pm!

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Nakshatra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

this is an unique OS

OMG u r Amazing

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.ButterCup.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Beautiful OS..

Very well written..

loved it..😊

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Nikita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Awww..that was such a beautiful piece of writing !

Amazing this OS was..😳

Very well written..

Loved it dear !

Thanks for the PM xoxo

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mehak

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Dat was seriously a ver good one shot!!

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Shraya Biswas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Loved it! Arnav's sacrifice, Khushi's stubbornness, their confession...loved everything... :)

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Arshix144

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

This was a rather adorable OS Shona!

Arnav and Khushi's equation was portrayed very beautifully. It was great to see a rather confident and Jhansi ki rani Khushi for a change, she totally took control of their relationship from the get go. I liked the way she made the first move in their initial meeting and also the fact that she didn't let Arnav end things between them in the end. You described the protagonists' feelings and emotions wonderfully!

Thank you for sharing your work with me, appreciate the PM :)

Edited by Arshix144 - 12 years ago