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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Beautiful OS...
I loved the song also...though heard it for the first time...beautiful song.
Thanks for the PM

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Wow that was an amazing and mind blowing one shot,

Written so beautifully and exceptionally well,

Thanks for the PM and very long update to read xx

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Roshni

@rashika

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

This is so beautiful.

I love it.

You should write more.

That was so good.

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

loved the os beautifully done loved how she understood him after she saw the article loved how she told him to use his Harvard brains because she did not know how to cook loved the os amazing thanks for the pm

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@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

beautiful os.. loved it

very touching

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shruti

@shruti46

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

congratulations for 1st o.s shivi..

that is an amzing story...

i liked khushi directly speaking that she like him..

later on she won again when he make arnav understand that money is not everything..

if u have loved one with you everything else can be handled..

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Aww, that was a sweet story! There is no doubt about who the boss is in this relationship!! Love the fiesty, strong Khushi who will do anything for Arnav,

Now you should write another OS about thier initial struggles and how their love overcomes all the problems they have to face in establishing themselves as a couple

Edited by Japonica - 12 years ago