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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Awssuum Pinku..OMG! My Doll got burnt..Thank god Arjun saved her..Yeh Raj Is such a Asshole..Hate Him! Hope Riya gets well soonzz..Thanxx fr pm..Continuee Soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
read both the parts togethr..awesum concept !! dat raj 😡 isko paise ki padi hai..gadha kahi ka! loved arjun's care fr riya..plzzz cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
awesome update dear.
omg riya get burnt.
love the way arjun was handelling situation.
that raj is money minded.
i killed you man.
meri poor doll kitna jhelna padharaha hain usse.
precap looks scary.
continue soon.
and thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
aeey ye raj kis miti ka bana h!!!
oh god..
i hope ria thk ho jaye...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update..
Riya got burnt..
Raj is so money minded,.
Hope riya gets well soon..
Loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
nice concept..that raj is such a 🤬...loved arjun's care for riya..continue soon... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77


Part3..



Riya's dad: doc riya kaise hai?




Ria's mom: wooh thik hojaye gi na?




Ayesha: doc boliye na?




Doc: dekheye burns ko toh treat kar



diya hia bt unke skin bohot hi patli hia




isliye zyada burn hogai hia..




unke recover hone mein time




lagega..



bake ke treatments hum jare



rakhenge..



Days were passing and riya's




treatments were going on..



no one was allowed to meet her..




they could only see from the window..



15 days passed that incident..



Arjun and choree were all time present



in hospital as rathod was needed in etf ..




Ayesha would go to etf for sometme bt




most of the times she was also in




hospital..




Nurse: yeh kuch medicines hai le ayeye..




Arjun took the list..





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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

Riya's dad: arjun beta aapne aaj tak




sara kharcha kiya hai.. hum kaise ?




Arjun: uncle kya riya meri koi nahi hai?




Aur ese halat mein aap sirf riya ke




barein mein sochiye..




Shree: chotu ek ajeeb baat hia..




jab se riya admit hue hai raj koi bhi



responsibility nahi le raha..




Chotu: ha shree usee toh paiso ke



chinta the ri ke nahi..



par arjun sir wooh riya ke liye itna




kuch kar rahe hia..




kahin wooh riya se pyar toh karne lag




gai.




Shree: pagal hai kya wooh sirf roshniji



se pyar karte hia par ek baat toh hai ke




wooh riya ke bohot fikar karte hia..




uske liye kuch feel karte..




Chotu: ha har rishte ka koi naam ho



yeh zarori nahi par uska ehsaas hona




important hia..




Arjun brought the medicines..and doc



gave a good news to them..




Doc: riya ke condition is better now..




u can see her bt only 2 person..




sab thik raha toh aap usee 2 mahine




baad ghar leke jaa sakte hia..




Riya's parents went to meet riya inside..





Ria's mom : riya hum sab tumhare liye




hia.. fikar mat karna..




Riya's dad: ha beta meri beti toh ek etf




officer hia..



wooh harr jung jit jayegi..




aur tu mera beta hia..




bahadur bachcha hai na?




Riya: aap log apna khyal rakhiyega..




ma raj kahan hia.?




Ria's parents gave an disappointed




look to each other coz from few days



they have seen raj's true colors..




Riya's dad: beta wooh bahar hai..




tum aram karo thik hia..


Riya's parents came outside all were



wanting to know abt riya.




Ria's dad: wooh thik hai.. apna dard




bata nahi rahe hai..




par sambhal jayegi..




Shree: uncle hum sab ri ko sambhal



lenge..




Riya's mom: yeh raj kahan hia?




Chotu: wooh uske office mein party hai



wahan gaya hia..




Riya's mom to her dad:




kya raj ria ke liye sahi hia?


jab se riya ke saath yeh hadsa hua



wooh toh jaise usee janta nahi waise



behave kar raha hia..




Ria's dad: ab mujhe bhi esa hi lagta




hia..



riya ke office wale raj se zyada fikar



karte hia uske..




Riya's mom: aur arjun wooh toh ek pal



ke liye bhi riya ko apne akhon se dur



nahi hone dete.




Sameer ayesha har pal uske barein



fikar karte hia..



shree chotu kaise bachcho ke tarah



roye hai riya ke liye..aur raj uske aakh



mein halke se nami tak nahi..



Arjun aaj tak sara kharcha sab kuch



unhone kiya..aur paiso se zyada unhe



riya ke fikar hai..




Raj's dad: aaj mujhe iss raj se baat



karni hai..



aaj faisla ho hi jaye ke wooh chahta



kya hai.


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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

It was very late in the night bt raj came to fulfil his formality of meeting riya..



Riya's dad: kahan the tum raj?


Raj: wooh office mein ek imporatnt party the wahi gaya..



Ria's mom: riya se zyada zarori party hai tumhare liye?



Raj: com on ab riya ko thik hone mein pata nahi kitna time lagega.. toh kya mein life jeena chod du..



Everybody was present there.. and no one believed wat he just said..



Ria's dad:kya kaha tumne riya se important party hia tumhare liye..?



Raj: please uncle waise bhi mein app logo se ek baat kehna chahta the bohot dino se..



Mein riya se shaadi nahi karunga..



Shree: kya?



Raj: ofcourse mein riya se shaadi nahi karunga..mein ek jhali hue ladki se shaadi nahi karna chahta.. kya kahenge mere dost mere family yeh society ..



Arjun pissed his teeth in anger.. bt controlled his anger and asked..



Arjun: bt u loved riya right..



Raj:look I loved her.. bt i want that I shoud proudly be able to present my wife I front of all.. warna wats the use..



Rathod: wooh tumhare life partne r hai koi dekhave ke cheez ya trophy nahi raj.


Raj: dekheye meine riya ko choose kiya coz she was beautiful, intelligent and charming..

Warna ladkiyon ke koi kami nahi hai mujhe..



Shree:tum kitne selfish aur ghatiya insan ho raj thank god ri bach gai..



Ria's dad: hum hi chuk gai ria ke liye ek sahi jevan saathi dhoondne mein,..



Arjun: tum riya ke layak ho hi nahi.. tumne usse nahi use khubsurati se pyar kiya hai..achcha hai riya se tumahre shaadi nahi hue..warna wooh kabhi khush nahi rehte..



Raj: yeh gyaan kisi aur ko dena.. mein pratically soch raha hoon riya ke burn marks dekhe hai tumhe.. yeh sab janene aur dekhne ke baad koi bhi sensible insaan riya se shaadi nahi karega..


Turning to her parents..



Raj: uncle waise bhi apki jhali hue beti se koi shaadi nahi karega so its better ke u take care of her..



Arjun in anger..hits raj.



Raj: tumhare himmat kaise hue mujh pe haath uthane ke?



Arjun: agar riya ke khilaf kuch bhi kaha toh aaj mein tumhe jaan se maar dunga.



Raj: hoon ... bohot badi batein karte hona acp rawte kya tum karoge riya se shaadi.. ek jhali hue ladke se shaadi.. mujhe samjhane chale ho..


all shocked hearing these words...



Arjun: haa mein karunga riya se shaadi.. mein uske saath rahunga hamesha..



Riya's dad: beta yeh aap..


Raj: wait a minute kahin tumahre niyat yeh toh nahi the.. riya ke liye itna kuch kiya sirf ek boss ke nate.. na not possible..

May be riya aur tumhare beech..



This time rathod hit him.



Rathod: tumhare itni aukat nahi ke tum riya aur rawte ke barein mein kuch bhi bol sako.. tumhare ghatiya thoughts apne paas rakho and get lost..


Raj: mein toh ja raha hoon bt acp rawte jiss irade se riya se rishta jodna chahte the ab wooh kaise pura hoga..



Arjun: tum rishte ka naam nahi hi lo toh achcha hai aur agar ek second yaha ruke toh apne paron par chalne ke kabil nahi chodunga tumhe..



Raj: yeh toh waqt bataiyega ke kaise riya ka saath dete ho tum.




Raj goes away from there.. arjun turns to riya's parents.




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arjun: uncle mujhe bharosa kijiye..



riya ese insaan ko deserve nahi karti



joh uske bahari khubsurati ko dekhe




ussee chodke chala jayee..




Riya's mom: kya tum riya ko wahi pyar



wahi izzat de pauge joh apne patni ko




deni chahiye kya uska tumhare zindagi




par wahi haqq hoga..



ussee halat janene ke baad bhi..



Arjun: aunty mein sirf yeh janta hoon



ke riya ke zyada khubsurat koi nahi ho



sakta..




kyonki uska dil khubsurat hia..



aur uska mujh pe aur meri zindagi par




wahi haqq hoga joh meri patni ka hona




chahiye..




Rathore: rawte kya tum sure ho?



Tum itna bada faislas sirf uss raj ke



kehne par le rahe ho..



Arjun: haa rathod..



mein yeh faisla apne dil se kar raha




hoon...



mein riya se shaadi karna chahta



hoon..mujhe par yakin kijiye..




Ria's dad: beta hum riya se poochke..




Arjun: uncle abhi riya iss halat mein



nahi hai ke hum usse yeh batein kare




jab wooh thik hojay toh hum uske




marzi jaan lenge aur uske naa hia toh




bhi mujhe wooh svikar hai.



precap:


how will riya react to her condition??

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