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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
Awesome update
love it
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

part 4.

After few days all met riya.. she was in too much pain.. bt remaining strong for her parents..



Riya: ma raj kahan hia?



All were looking at each other wat to answer.bt arjun took the cue.



Arjun: ria wooh doc se kuch baat karne gaya hai.




Riya: sir thank u so much apne meri jaan bachai .. par ma kya raj mujhe shaadi ke liye taiyaar hia..? wooh mujhe ese accept karega..



Shree: ri sarein sawal abhi kar legi tu aram kar.. hum sab hai na yahan.



Nurse: please aap sab bahar jayeye inhe rest ke zarorat hai..



All went outside..



Shree broke down..



Shree: sir hum ri se kya kahenge.. ke raj.. uske saath esa kyon hua?



Arjun: shree tum riya ke dost hona toh uske takat bano usse kamzorr mat hone do..



Ab yeh hamare zimmedari hai ke riya ko kabhi yeh ehsaas na ho ke uske kuch bhi hua hia..



Riya's dad: par beta usee kabhi na kabhi toh yeh pata chal hi jayega ke uske aur raj ki shaadi ab nahi hogi.. tab kya hoga.?



Arjun: uncle use sambhal lenge bas aap kamzor mat padiye..



Riya was recovering with her family and etf family around.. she too sensed something wrong abt raj absence..



After 2 months riya was discharged..




Riya's mom: riya ab dekhna hum ghar jayenge


toh tumhe aur bhi achcha lagega..




Riya: ma sab log hai par arjun sir kahan hia?



Shree: wooh doc se kuch baat kar rahe hai




In doc cabin..



Doc: mr rawte filhal riya ko din mein 2 baar dressing ke zarorat padege .. her burns wll pain bt app sabko use sambhalna hoga..



Arjun: jee doc.. aur kuch?



Doc: aap riya se shaadi karne wale hai?



Arjun: jee agar usne ha kardi toh..



Doc: mr rawte ek personal baat kehna chahta hoon apke shaddi shuda zindagi normal nahi hogi. Riya ke burns jane mein bohot time lagega..aur uska confidence pata nahi ayega ya nahi yaa ane mein bohot time lagega.. tab tak may be u have to wait..wooh physically itni strong nahi hai ke...




Arjun: doc meine riya isliye shaadi nahi kar raha ke mujhe usse kuch chahiye bas uske saath rahekar uska khayal rakhna chahta hoon.



Har rishta alag hota hia aur kya ek rishte ke sahi mayna tabhi hota jab wooh physically consumate ho?




Doc: I m proud of u.. now I m sure riya will no problems in her life.. kyonki aap jaisa insaan uske saath hia..



Unhe every 15 days check up ke liye ana hoga.



Arjun: mein le aa aunga..



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Edited by pinkerbell - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Riya's house..



All welcomed riya and created a happy environment for her..bt suddenly all got tensed seeing raj there.




Before ria could say anything..arjun went to him..




Arjun: ab kya chahiye tumhe?




Raj: are mein toh ria se milne aya hoon..



He goes to riya..




Raj: riya kaise ho? Tumhare burn marks bohot bure lag rahe hia I knw..




Riya: raj tum hospital mujhse milne nahi aye..




Raj: riya shayad tumhare family ne tumhe bataya nahi meine yeh rishta tod diya hia..




Something pained riay more than her burns today.her heart was bleeding..




Raj: dekho riya I loved u coz u were beautiful charming bt ab...I cant marry a girl with burn marks on her body..





Tears were rolling down her eyes.. bt it felt like acid to her cheeks..





Arjun came to raj and held him by his collar..and dragged him outside..





Arjun: aaj ke baad agar riya ke aas paas bhi dekhaye diye toh tumhare liye achcha nahi hoga.



Get out..




Raj: mein waise bhi apne diamond ring lene aya tha..



Riya's mom took out the ring and gave it to arjun..




Riya's mom: apne ring wapas le jao riya ko uske zarorat nahi hai..




Arjun threw the ring on his face and it felt near his shoes..



Arjun: uthao aur nikal jao yahan se..




Raj: fine.. waise riya yeh tumhare arjun sir is not a bad choice for u..



infact wooh toh tumse shaadi karne ke liye ready hai pata nahi kya fayda dekh raha hai par..all the best..



Riya ran to her room and closed the door..




All were banging the door bt riya was broken so badly that she could hear nothing bt raj's hurting words..


Ria'smom: riya darwaza kholo.. riya..



Riya's dad: beta hum sab hai na.. please open the door riya..



Choree: ri darwaza kholna please..



Arjun : chotu darwaza tod do ,. Par please aap sab abhi yahi rukiye..




Chotu broke the door.,



precap:


how will riya face this bitter truth of her life??

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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
hate that selfish raj
arjun being so sweet
poor riya she's so hurt
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome yar.. Loved it.. Arjun's care for riya.. Riya sensing something fishy about raj's absence.. Arjun taking riya's all responsibility.. Mood spoiler raj.. Want to strangle him.. Riya badly effected by raj's word.. Now what'll riya do? Curious to know.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
Superb update dr...👍🏼
Poor Riya was in so much pain...!!!!!
Wow She asked for that stupid Raj n somehow got the negative vibes about him...!!!!
OMG Shree broke down but Arjun pacified him n told him to be the strength of Riya...!!!
Loved Arjun's convo with doc... He is a great guy...!!!!
Wht the...that b*****d again cme n hurt Riya vry badly...!!!!
He is such a cheap n insensible man...!!!!
OMG Riya was cmpltly shattered n locked her in the room..!!!!
Eager to read nxt part...
Thanks for pm dr...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
emotional update
glad Riya is recovering with the presence of her parents
n team around her
Arjun convo with doc was heart touching
felt bad for Riya she was continuously asking abt Raj
n wanted to meet him
but this guy is so selfish
he just came to meet her just to take back his diamond ring
n hurt her with his words
poor Riya 😭😭
Arjun's support n concern for her
is appreciable
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Awssuumm Pinku...Hate this Raj...😡😡 Aaarrrggghhh!! Luvd how Arjun handled him..Intrestinngg Precapp..Continuee Soon! Thanxx fr pm!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great update
i hate that selfish raj
waiting for riya's reaction
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwsssmmm part
loved it
Loved Arjun's convo with doctor...
that raj .. uff !!! hate him...
cont sooon
thanks for PM

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