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Farwa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#441

loved it he so jealous sooo jealous loved it sachiii Muaaah... oh poor Arnav Anjali destroyed his plan aweer
... lol he has to ask his family to borrow his Khushi sad... hehe they know it already what NECESSARY WORK he needed to complete with Khushi. ... arey kya garam lohat pr choat mari zabardast can't wait for next update

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henamani

@henamani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#442

a nudge in the right direction. i wonder what arnav babua will do now

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swat.g

@swat.g

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Posted: 11 years ago

#443

First of all, I am reslly sorry for not commenting from 5chapters! I just caught up with all the updates! And Gosh! What do I tell you Farha? You are one of THE BEST ipkknd writers in this forum! PERIOD! I haven't read a writer who could inculcate the essense of ipkknd into everything you write!!

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swat.g

@swat.g

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Posted: 11 years ago

#444

From the vampire Khushi to Arnav's past and then tthe boardroom laughter!! The jealousy to playful! The realisation of love and the scratches!! Akash and Khushi! Lol! I have never.been more satisfied after reading an update than I have been when I finish reading your update! Whether it be L & L or D 4 D! I always feel a sense of peace! Like when you have had a delicious meal! Pleasure! I always get more than I expect from you! Thank you! For taking the time out for people like us! Thank you Farha!!

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khushboo

@khushboo1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#445

first of all a very bda wala sorry for not commenting on the last two updates..

i just love a jealous arnav and the last update was full of it..i hope this will help arnav to confess his feeling for khushi at the earliest..

manorama is trying quite hard to make khushi his bahu...but her dreams are gonna shattered...

loved!!!

super adorable update!!

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aayt

@aayt

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#446

what the...

poor thing when finely he is in love everybody is hell band to be zalim samaj

their all plan ruined all because smiley singh raizada

he is all in kushi's dreams dear asked ur brother u dare to dream about his khushi

Anjali n nani done fantastic job n it was fun to see raizada's reaction

like hell akaash's rishta khushi is his n will always his this little push is enough to make him realiz things can go this way if he didn't make final move soon

lovely update waiting for next

continue soon

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@-happilyunknown

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Posted: 11 years ago

#447

I think i am going to faint with anticipation..I ...I ...LUb you! :D YOur a fantastic writer! Update soon please!

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#448

lovely update.

i loved her snapping at him. yeah, feisty girls are good. and they can turn that devil on.

and again nani and di in intense planning... cute. asr would take forever and beyond to come to the idea of marriage i guess. poor baby though. i feel for him.

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bridgeofdreams

@bridgeofdreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#449

Hey,

Though I caught up with the story more than a week ago, I did not manage to comment on the updates. And now I'm here :D

The story started giving interesting introduction with little information about the characters specially Arnav's and Khushi's. But Khushi was the one to show some of her characteristics first. despite of the values she has, yet she asked arnav carelessly to be in a relationship with her!

Khushi is an independent girl who can lead her life by herself and take decisions. She prefers to have everything she deserves not less, not more...,so when Arnav gave her the position she is in, and asks her to come to Delhi for work, she makes sure that she gets what she is worthy to have.

Her fantasies, desires and all the feelings grew more with time just being with him for a day that without further planing or thinking, they made the next move when she challenged him to prove her wrong leading to their first lovemaking, and since then they cannot resist each other acting senselessly not caring about anything in the world but them being together.

Though I don't believe in such relationships, yet I enjoyed going through your updates. Still it's all fiction, but intriguing nonetheless.

Time has passed and they started to open up to each other understanding the other. Their relationship is progressing that they started feeling each other, discovering the soul not only the body.

What I like about Khushi that she doesn't trouble herself too much to think upon things without telling the other, Arnav in particular: 1. She told him about her fantasies and asked him for a relationship 2. when Arnav was trying his best to behave to show that he is interested in her as a person too (Chap 32), and she did not like that, she simply texted him venting her anger out.
She also confessed her feelings although he does not acknowledge them. But when he ws confused he could see that he loves her too. However, the distance is the best way to figure out your true feelings. When she is away (In Lucknow) he could not tolerate that, and when she reached Delhi, his joy and happiness explained it all. Realization dawned into him that he loves her.

Arnav had seen many destroyed marriages around him, which deeply affected him, that he does not believe in marriage. Yet he wants Khushi. After knowing about his past, Khushi is ready to give him a chance believing that she can change his POV, and made him look at marriage from a new light.

His family is just amazing. Poor mami is thinking to tie Khushi up with Akaash, but Nani and Anjali are smart enough to understand the happenings.

Their messages part during the meeting was so cute.

Now, he is experiencing jealousy because of Abhishek, how sweet!

Payal, being a sister, she advises Khushi fearing that Khushi might get betrayed upon as Arnav never believed in commitments, not knowing that their relationship reach to levels where there is no come back, not now, not ever.

Pam is so sweet; knowing about Arnav's and Khushi's relationship, she always tried to help Khushi.

LOL! arnav's reaction to Nani and Anjali when they spoke about Khushi's marraige not knowing that they are trying to fix her marriage with him. On his dead body, he would allow them to speak about Khushi and Akaash!

Some updates were so sensual. That game in the kitchen, and then that night after dinner.

Are we going to have scenes of Payal's wedding now?

The story is beautifully written; you have portrayed their feelings, desires, thoughts, games and everything very well keeping me all hooked up.

Why do I feel as if I missed some points? Anyways, don't want to enlarge the comment.

Keep it up :D

PS: This marks my longest comment ever! Just minutes ago I commented on another story with a long one (which was the longest till now) until your story took that quickly!

Shaimaa

Edited by bridgeofdreams - 11 years ago