I Don't Need You - AR FF - prt34 updt 12-06-14 - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow. I can't believe you've put up so many chapters together. They were lovely. as usual Shashank is the villain. I hope wo Anamika ko armaan ke barey mein kuch bura na boley.
Oh please don't let anything happen to Ridz. I hope Armaan can treat her.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome parts nurshad continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
yayy finally u r done vid old parts now we will grt new updates. plzzz make it soon. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all the parts in one go!!!
Wow!!!
Amazing ff...
Loving it...
The way anamika talked with shanky...superb!
Hopefully Ridz will get well soon...


PS.busy due to xms n studies...don't get tym to come to IF...that's why can't read the updts regularly n comment...I hope u understand! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
yeayy.. all prts posted..
abhi new prt milega... dhnchk dhnchk..
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Posted: 11 years ago
..tommorow hope fully
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART - 31



'Now let's hear from our yoga instructor Ryan Dixon'

anamika entered her home to see her lovely grand mother watching in her word the best yoga show in this whole wide world but in anamika's word exactly opposite 'The yuckiest show ever made in this whole wide world'..so whenever anamika saw or caught ananya watching this ya ya ya best/worst show she starts her complaining this time also no different..

Anm: Oh no..not agaiin granny..you are again watching this...arghh

Ananya: aree it's a good show.. see i learnt many things..

Anm: Haah Haah I am seeing that only if this idiot can teach yoga then i can teach umm what i can teach? Yes Rocket Science..ya

Ananya rolled her eyes..

Anm: granny...ok then..(after thinking for sometime)...oh whatever...

Ananya laughed but then hugged her ... Truly she is a masterpiece..

Ana: You know Angel you are one piece in the whole world..there's nobody like you

Anm: Ya Ya..I know I Am the best ..

Ana: haan baba haan...By the way how was your performance?

Anm: As usual..You Know i am anamika malik...simply the best

anamika raised her fake collar and ananya laughed..

Ananya: you are so cute angel..Let's go angel now its time for dinner

Anm: NO Granny..i am full tonight..

Ananya: but dinner?

Anm: Not today..pleasee..and also your super grand daughter is little tired today too..

Ananya: ok super grand daughter..u go to bed then and please finish milk at least

Anm: ok granny..love you..

Ananya: love you too angel..good night

Anm: gud nyt



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Anamika came out from her wash room wearing her night dress .. She turned on the hi-tech music system in her room .. A slow sad song about family started in it..you may wonder why? Wasn't Anamika laughing a while back but now what happened ? Let's find out...

Anamika went to the balcony attached to her room and sat on the chair which was kept there ... Her mind went back to the event happened after the function ...



-- FLASHBACK --



''Superb Anamika,the performance was very sweet and touchy i am sure everyone in the audience loved that'' a very exited Mrs. Scott told anamika

Anm: I hope so mrs. Scott..btw you loved it nah?

Mrs. Scott: of course my dear why won't I? By the way anamika i need a favour?

Anm: favour?

Mrs. Scott: yes..can you perform in the next weekend?

Anm: Anything special?

Mrs. Scott: Yes .. It's a very special occasion we are celebrating mothers day next week.. that's why we need you..

Anm: Mothers day? i am sorry mrs. Scott i just can't do that ..

Mrs. Scott: But why anamika? Any problem?

Ana: nothing mam its just i am sure this occasion i can't celebrate this occasion is not for me..

Mrs. Scott: what? Anamika i am not getting anything? What you are saying?

Ana: Mrs. Scott please forget it i am sure you won't want to ruin your celebration with a performance from a child whose mother wanted to give her to orphanage..

Anm: i am just a big failure mrs. Scott .. a big bad luck and a big failure...this beautiful occasion would be a disaster if i step in the hall mrs. Scott...trust me..

Mrs. Scott silently listened all the thing anamika said a lone tear escaped her eyes listening this sad story of this amazingly talented girl...life is surely a bitch...

Mrs. Scott: Anamika come here

when anamika came mrs. Scott hugged her and said..

Mrs. Scott: who said you don't have a mom? All the teachers here are like your mom my dear...whenever you need anyone i would be there always..remember that my child..

Anm: I Know .. You would be there ..


--FLASHBACK ENDS--



A lone tear escaped anamika's eyes when she remember that word 'mom'..

Anamika: why? Why mom why ? Why you left me? Am i that bad? That bad..why can't i be happy for mothers day celebration?..why i am afraid to join the occasion? ...

After some time...

Anm: no... ...anamika malik can't loose .. i really can't loose to my emotions .. I need to talk to dad .. Otherwise i won't be able to sleep today..



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Anamika dialed her fathers number ...



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In India..



Armaan was crying very badly holding muskaan suddenly he feels his mobile vibrating..he opened the phone to see

'PRINCESS CALLING'

Armaan showed the phone to muskaan and said to muskaan

Ar: Muski mere beti ka phone ho ab main kya karun? Agar uthaunga toh use ek min. mein pata lag jayega ke main thik nahi hun ? Phir woh tensed ho jayegi..and main use reason bhi kya dun..

Mus: but armaan agar tu phone nahi uthayega toh bhi toh woh tensed ho jayegi...lekin u have a point too..but mere khayal se tujhe utha lena chahiye phone..

Ar: haan tu yeh baat thik keh rahi hai i should pick up it

Mus: hmm..

Then armaan picked his phone

Ar: Hey princess

Anm:hey dad.. I miss you so so so so so much .. When you will be back? Please ap jaldi se vaapas aa jao na...

Armaan smiled in his tears hearing his daughter's eager pleas to come back

AR: don't worry princess i will be back soon

Anm:Dad..

Ar:hmm..princess..bolo..

Anm:aap ro rahe the nah..you were crying..weren't you?

Ar:no my dear i am perfectly fine

Anm:Dad the truth please..i know you very well..i can tell from your voice that you were crying..what happened dad..please tell me..

Ar: Nothing Princess..Nothing..

Anm:Dad please don't be sad...please you know nah you are the best in the world..

Ar:Your dad is not the best anamika .. He is not ..

Anm:No dad you are the best i don't really know what is bothering you and why you are sad, dad..but dad remember one thing you taught me .. Never ever back off

Ar: princess a very very close friend of your dad is lying in the operation table but i don't know how can i save this very special person..that's all because of me..

Anm:No dad No...apke friend ko kuch nahi hoga dad kuch bhi nahi..ap jante hai kyun? Kyunki unke paas abhi ap hain aur apke hote hue apke friend ko kuch hoga that's impossible..come on dad..my dad just know how to win..he can't loose..so dad go and make everything right..save your friend dad..

Ar:I don't want to loose this special person princess..i always thought i don't care but i care..what if i fail?

Anm:You won't dad trust me..how can you loose when your lucky charm called you..you see you got call from the great anamika malik..you know how lucky you are?

Anamika made a light hearted attempt to cheer armaan up ... And some how she succeeded ... Armaan laughed holding his tear ..

Ar : really princess i am too lucky to have you as my life my daughter..thanks

Anm:awww..thanks..chalo best of luck dad..i know you will succeed in it...my prayers are with your friend dad..he/she will be ok for sure...now i am going to sleep dad but promise me you won't loose hope ..and trust me Armaan Malik won't loose his friend..by the way dad purani girlfriend hai kya?...i knw bad joke..gud nyt

Armaan spoke in his mind 'apki mom hai princess' but just said

Ar:GOOD NIGHT PRINCESS..

Armaan hang up the phone and he looked straight to see muskaan crying listening anamika and his conversation as he put her phone on speaker..

Musk:Teri beti bohot mature aur smajhdar hai re i am glad you have her..really proud of her

Ar:Me too re .. Me too ..

Musk:so ab kya karega tu?

Ar:I am gonna operate on her

Musk:Armmaaan .. Tu sure hai na?

Ar:Yes and i am confident .. I won't let anything happen to her .. I won't ..



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SO HERE IT IS.. FINALLY WROTE IT AFTER A LONG 4 TO 6 MONTHS GAP AND HONESTLY SPEAKING I DON'T KNOW WHAT I WROTE IN THIS PART? SO IT'S UPTO YOU TO BEAR IT OR NOT.. AS A MATTER OF FACT I THINK THIS IS BOUND TO HAPPEN IF YOU TAKE A THIS LONG LET'S SEE WHAT HAPPENS? THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR COMMENTING ON PART 3O .. Here's the next part .. I hope you enjoyed it...PLEASE LIKE OR COMMENT..

TAKE CARE
NURSHAD

NEXT PART : HOPEFUL THIS BOXING DAY


Edited by Nurshad.kajen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
RESSS...

unres...


bhai.. why did u write d note at d end? don't u hve no idea wat u wrote actually? u wrote something which is beyond the arena of appreciation.. soo beautiful.. soo full of emotion.. amazingly portrayed bhai.. i was missing anamiks soo much in armaan's present scene but in this update dat happened.. she actually called to boost her papa up.. unknowingly being the savoir of her mother indirectly as well.. this stry is soo close to my heart, i've alrdy told u soo mny tyms.. thnk u so so soo much bhai for resuming it... truly thnk u... waiting eagerly to kne further.. hope riddhima will be saved.. hope anamika's mothers' day become a happy event in her life soon.. hope their tangled lives get sorted out soon.. juz hope... update soon bhai.. nd this update is really heart touching..
t.c bhai..
luv,
di..
Edited by --Orchids-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res

haye... aab kya hoga... armaan ridhima ka chotu sa part brio yaar tum bhi na... itna suspence dala aur aabh bhi inna chotu sa...
aaab kab update doge tum bro...


i loved the update,.. and the bonding both armaan and anamika have...
anamika have same understanding towards armaan as ridhima have...

chalo ye acha huna...
aab beti ki duaon ke karan maa aachi ho jayengi...
i loved it indirectly anamika is praing for her mother ridhima... loved it... kash armaan bold deta ke vo dost tumhari mom hain beta.. i loved it... i wanna see armaan andn ridhima together again and anamika and ridhima ko armaan kaise ek karega...



continue super soon bhai...
Edited by Aayu-loveKaJen- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


waisey bhai yeh unres kab hoga? any idea??🤣

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