An ArHi SS: Seduction *Thread One* (COMPLETED)

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ff45reader

@ff45reader

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#231

That my dear was simply superb and fantastic. Plz continue. Though i wish to know the entire story all at once, i can hardly ask u to update it hourly now,can I or cant I? 😉

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CrazyArshiFan

@CrazyArshiFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

Ok, I cannot take the suspense. I am taking my own wild guess to stop thinking about the SS till next week's update.

Is it possible that Arnav and Khushi were lover's in their previous life or it could be someone made Khushi promise to look after Arnav.

Oh God cannot wait for next Tuesday!!!

As always Fab update

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Drkk

@Drkk

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#233

superb update.
Again a cliffhanger.
Waitng 4 nxt

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harsha

@harsha..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#234

It was just plain beautiful.

The flow was so fluid throughout your writing. Though I know that you must have put in a lot of efforts to write this but as a reader it seemed effortless.

As if the whole scenes and the transition between the scenes was coming effortlessly.

I guess that sums it up. Though I have a lot of questions in my mind but I shall wait for you to unravel them through your updates.

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lostintheashes

@lostintheashes

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#235

YOU UPDATED!! 😲
Have I ever mentioned how awesome your stories are?
They are awesome.
I loved loved LOVED it 😳

It was refreshing to have a confident bold Khushi. 😳
Looking forward to the next update! 😊
Great work 😉

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msmarple

@msmarple

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#236

Loved Chapter 1.

It has thrown up so many questions though that it is going to be quite a difficult wait till the next update appears. 😊

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@fanAR

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#237

you have me intrigued now ... I can't wait to see how you will reveal their past .

I absolutely love till now :)

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#238

Once again you seduce us with these two characters and your words. Attention to detail allows for nothing to give away the story line ;-/

You have switched the dialogues to fit other charctaers - Lavanya will be chamkeeli !! NK is married to her !!

And now we eagerly await Saturday for when we will read your update and say to our self, how does she do it, why did we not think of that possibility...