Kuch Pal Ka Saath- Conclusion 3-pg 100 - Page 9

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Posted: 19 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: sweet_jaanu27

heyyy!!! just read ur whole fan-fic today! awesooome, gr888 job!!! 👏 👏 👏 gr8 part 2, loved the little friendship "speech" by Das, haha...keep up the good work n continue soon! =] 😃

yayyy another reader!!haha jus playing, thanx much n i liked the speech too😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Mehandikhan

awesome part plz cont soon. 👏

thanx

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Posted: 19 years ago
#83
awsome 👏 👏 👏 i can't believe that they had a fight for such a small thing.i loved the way raj punched that guy for his frnd.he is a true frnd.cont soon 😊 😊 😊
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Originally posted by: coolgirl249

awsome 👏 👏 👏 i can't believe that they had a fight for such a small thing.i loved the way raj punched that guy for his frnd.he is a true frnd.cont soon 😊 😊 😊

thanx, yeah he's cool

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part- 9- "This is so not spirit!!

As the week went on, everyone forgot about the fight and the competition. Eveverything was back to normal. Shazad was walking by when he saw Kripa.
S- Hey Krips
K- Hey, whats up
S- Nothing much…tell me about you
K- What about me
S- You Raj Party
K- Oh, Shazad it was nothing
S- What do you mean nothing? You guys kissed.
K- So?
S- Kripa….
K- Wait…how do you know
R- Raj..he talks a lot when he's drunk
K- Oh god
Angad and Raj were also walking around the campus.
A- Soooo
R- What?
A- Kripa…
R- What about Kripa?
A- Umm…well the party, I heard you too….had fun
R- Your talking about the kiss?
A- Well, if your gonan be frank, then yeah.
R- Dude, it wasn't anything
A- What do you mean? You asked her out that day right
R- Hoe do you know
A-……Girls open up really easily to me..I have that effect.
R- Kripa told you?
A- No….just…..
R- It didn't mean anything?
K- Shazad, it was a party…I had to kiss someone
R- Angad…Its just a kiss…chill out
Shazad and Kripa were walking from one corner and Angad and Raj from another corner….they bumped into each other.
R-Hi
K- Hey
R- Ummm
K- I…..
A- Shazad, I you see the new….um….new lunch menu
S- Lunch Menu?? OHHHH…no, lets go check it out
A- Lets go
Angad and Shazad left hurrily.
K- I have to go
R- Me too
They bumped each other again, and again, and again
K- Ok…you stay there, I'll move to the right ok
R- uh-huh
K- bye
R- see- yah
As they were both walking their ways..they both thought
R/K- It didn't mean anything…..or did it?
It was lunch time..and Raj, Shazad and Anagd were bored
R- Hey lets play ball?
S- Yeah…we never got that re-match from Angad
R- Three on Three
A- Umm
R-Come on dude, you always coem up with am excuse.
S- Yeah, lets go
R- (mocking) Or is it a waste of time
A- Basketball is never a waste of time…lets go
The three guys played and played good. Everyone started watching. Ms. Nisa came
N- Boys be careful…your playing to aggressive
D- Shhh Nisa!!
N- Mr. Das I…
D- shut up…lit me see.
Mr. Das was watching the game, but his eyes were only on Angad. There was a curiosity in seeing how far Angad would go….Mr. Das wasn't worried, but he was some what concerned. At the same time…it was fun to watch the game. Kripa Meem and Vedika came too.
K- WOW!! Its been a while since a saw Shazad and Raj play
M- Do they play good?
K- Yeah, but I heard Anagd plays even better
V- Really?
The bell rang so they had to end the game. Once again, Anagd won..but it was a close game. Raj and Shazad both had 6 but at the end right before the bell Angad scored a three pointer.
R- Good game bro
S- Thanks, but Angad, your amazing
R- You should join the basketball team with me and Shazad
A- ……Bye guys….
R-What?
S- Don't tell you you care about being late to class
A- …I have a test this period, cant miss it
R- But….
A (mummered)- This is a waste of time
Anagd just left. Mr. Das kept staring at Angad. He smiled…it was amazing how far Angad went to win this game.
S- Ok…usally people are happy when they win
R- Whatever…lets celebrate
S- What? We lost
R- So, lets celebrate for Anagd!
S- Ok lets…
Shazad saw Meem going to class. He wanted to be with Meem, and he knew the only chance he ever got to be with her was during class
S- Nah bro, some other day.
R- Ok, bye
S-You get to class too
R- Yeah I will.
Everyone went to their classes. Well, except Raj. He poured Vodka into a Spirit bottle and celebrated. He was drinking along, and he bumped into Ms. Nisa.
N- Why arent you in class
R- The game got me tired so I just went to a drink. Im going to to class now
N- Ok
R- By the way, that was a good exam you gave us yesterday…pretty challenging
N- Thankyou…and I'll share a secret
R- what
N- You did pretty good. I was surprised.
R- Thank you
They were having a very intelligent conversation, which was interesting because Raj was pretty drunk at that time. Amir just had gym, he was walking when hesaw Raj. He was very thirsty, so he just went and took a drink from Raj's spirit bottle. He didn't notice that Ms. Nisa was there
Am- THIS IS SO NOT SPIRIT
Ms. Nisa looked at Amir then Raj and then the bottle. She raised her eyebrow
Am (thinking)- Opps
Am- Bye Ms. Nisa…bye Raj
Amir hurried away
R- I gott get to class…see you later
N- Ok…
Raj was walking in the halls when he got a call from Shazad
R- What?
S- Dude, whatever it is your drinking throw it out, cause the teachers are looking for you
R- Crap!
Raj threw away the bottle. He was walking into one hall, when suddenly Meem came and turned him to other way
M- Wrong way buddy
R- What
M- Theres teachers there…go another way…
R- Ok
Raj started walking another way, Vedika came and gave him gum.
V- Here chrew this and just keep your mounth shut
R- How do you all know?
V- Word travels pretty fast around here, but the teachers are looking for you. While they were talking, Kripa came and pulled him into the bathroom.
K- Your so stupid!!!
R- Your in the boys bathroom
K- I know that!!
R- But….
K- Shhh
Kripa washed Raj's face, and fixed his hair.
K- Just…
R- Kripa
K- Hmm
Raj looked at Kripa, and touched her cheeks. Raj looked like a little kid with his puppy eyes.
R- If I say I love you, will you stop being my friend?
Kripa stayed quiet and just stared at Raj.
K- I have to go..take care of yourself
Kripa left, and the dean came in
Dean- To my office now!!
R- Ok
In the Deans Office
D- Where you drinking
R- Yes I was
D- You know you'll get punished right?
R- Yes
D -Ok…
The Dean made Raj sign a contract that he wouldn't drink for the next week. The funny thing is, that the next week was winter break. Later on, after dismissal Shazad and Raj were walking out of the school.
S- A CONTRACT???
R- Yup
S- Dude, when I got caught, they called my parents and suspended me for two days and all you get is a contract!!!!
R- What can I say, my magic works on everyone
S- That's bull!!! But Im happy, you didn't get in truble
R- Thanks bro.
Raj saw Kripa walking.
R- Bye
S- Bye
Raj went to Kripa and walked to next her.
K- hi
R- Hi
K- So
R- So
K- Nothing
R- cool
They were walking next to each other, but didn't say anything. Then slowly Raj went for Kripas hand, and held it. Kripa looked at him, and slowly put her hand on Raj's arm and her head leaning on Raj's shoulder. Raj smile and kissed Kripa's forehead. They walked away…

To be cont

PROMO- SECRETS….

Comments plzzzz

I know yal dun rly like anagd with sum1 else and Kripa with sum1 else, but like see raj and kripa are so cute. Dotn hate me or my story

karishma*********

ps- every1 go see karam apnaa apnaa...Iqbal aka Shiv is sooo cool!!
Edited by Desi Pride - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86
awwww raj n krips gettin closeee 👏 👏 👏 ur ryt they r shoooo cuteeeee 👏 👏 continue soooon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#87
well is ur story gonna have angad n kripa 2gether or no?
i like it but i want them 2gether plz
continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: bhumishah

well is ur story gonna have angad n kripa 2gether or no?
i like it but i want them 2gether plz
continue soon

secrets....😆😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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yeah make them switch partners plzzzzzzzzzzzzz i dont like raj with kripa it grosses me out lol 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#90
thanx guys..lolz had skool today...(grrrrrr) lolz...skool is fine, its da taking a bus, then train, then walking from 74th st -46th st, that makes it hurt. lolz, but i'll still try to get in a part today

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