ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 9 - COMPLETED

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#551

finally their journey got over...

khushi was really nervous of what the night might be like...

the yacht was beautiful...

and the fact that he got it..n specifically designed...n the k on it...that was the best thing anyone would ask for..

he didnt want anyone else to have it...

the whole yacht is simple amazing...

no matter what he was worried as to y she took the pills and spoke to her about it...

the lehenga he gifted her...wow...that was simply beautiful piece...

hr made sure to have help if she needed,..but loved the fact that she said she wanted to get ready by herself...

am sure khushi must be looking the most beautiful woman on earth and arnav the most handsome guy on earth,..

the sindoor and magalsutra added to her beauty...

he was mesmerized seeing her under the moon light..

wow..the place he choose to make a witness of their love...fantastic...

it was all like a dream come true...

the anklets were like wow...

aww..he called the goddess of love and beauty...

the romance and their consummation was way way tooo hot ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

the fact that it was under the moon was beautiful...

how did u mange to write with thought going so wild 😉

she desperately wanted him and he wanted it slow...

the promise to stay together forever...that was an over whelming moment,...

he took care of her..changed the bed sheet...

helped her to have bath and not to have a sore..can anyone get more caring than this...

the shahyari and vm was fabulous..

mind blowing update 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏👏

update the next soon dear 😃

p.s. it was liek someone told u to write a beautiful dream every girl would wish in reality...thats what u did...phenomenal job..hats off to you 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 🤗

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#552

Wow... finally the most awaited chapter is here. What a beautiful update. Very romantic and passionate. The yacht photos were awesome. Arnav really made their first night so memorable... on the ocean, under the stars and lots of love.

I liked the VM very much. Really hats off to you for making such amazing VM.

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srmirji

@srmirji

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#553

extraordinary update...no as arnav says I don't want use the normal words it was way way too good...

how do you mange to write with so much precision...considering every details ...from clothes to jewellery to perfume to make up everything. Hats off dear...if I could ever write stories I still would not have matched the extent you have thought and written about their first time together...

thanks a ton...

sri.

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amus5

@amus5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#554

that was truly a hot update.. but with a charm of its own and the description of the yacht alongwith with the reason behind the purchase of the yacht was wonderful ... i love the yacht ...haye kya kiya tune arnav hamare dil ko ☺️

thanx for the update...pls continue soon

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angeldream14

@angeldream14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#555

awesome

so sweet n hot

will the truth effect their life

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#556

di...Di...DI...this is AWESOME...I'm out of words...this is just sooo beautiful...I just moved to ArShi land...ab wapas aane ka maan nahi hain...you have written it amazingly...loved it so much...all our waiting for their first night worth it...thank you so much for this fabulous update Diii...

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 11 years ago

#557

Arshi remarr with Payaash.Now honeymoon/SR.so romantic.nice vm

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#558

Loved the update...!👏

I cant believe Arnav gifted her a yacht... 😲 but then again he is Arnav Singh Raizada, he doesnt do anything halfheartedly, especially when it has something to do with Khushi...!

Khushi's refusing to speak because she was so nervous was actually pretty funny...😆 I loved how Arnav planned everything, the lehenga, the deck, he even had two girls waiting in case Khushi needed help... Honestly the man doesnt miss anything...

Their first night on the deck was just perfect... It was written beautifully...👏

I loved the way Arnav took care of Khushi later and made sure Khushi was not uncomfortable in any way...!

Looking forward to reading about the rest of their trip...!

Edited by Addicted87 - 11 years ago

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shubhanjli

@shubhanjli

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#559

Awesome update..

Arnav gifting her a Yatch. Her lehenga was out of the world. Jewellery used was amazing. Anklets were just beautiful. After all Arnav Singh Raizada is gifting all this to his precious wife Khushi Singh Raizada. I loved every scene every minute detail has been taken care of.

Just loved it... Their first night was as special as it has to be.