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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Liked how Devyani is thinking about the issues from all sides. Keeping both, Arnav and Khushi in mind.

Good that she kept a tab on Shyam.

It's funny how we turn to God at last, after all our efforts have exhausted and that's what Khushi did.

She tried everything which was in her hands and when that didn't work out, she's asking for God's help to get Arnav.

Shaym's intentions towards Khushi are sick and pathetic yet these filthy things happen in our society.

How long will Arnav protect her like this. Maybe this incident shows him that he needs to accept her responsibility officially.

The permanent mark which Khushi is talking about is what Shaym told her about her mother and him na?

Edited by IronButterfly - 12 years ago

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Wow lazy ji stalked you, refreshed the page like anything at last got on second page😊 coming to the update loved it, yay Khushi is saved and Shyam did not do a lot of damage. Have a wonderful vacation will be waiting for your update!!!!!

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

RESERVEEED
HAD BEEN REFRESHING YOUR PROFILE FOR SUM TIME.

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Congo shongo Z🥳

Thread 4🤪

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

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AWesome as always first of all👏

I liked Devyani's views when Arnav enlightened her about his situation and Khushi's love!

The whole shyam😡😡😡 scene scared me to bits.He is hell of a disgusting man😡

I am very much happy that Arnav saved her in time and also thanks to Devyani researches too that helped them..

But the situation he found her in was worse,It will be difficult for Arnav and khushi to forget this horrendous day😕

And in Last Part this Khushi shocked me more like always in this story,she punished shyam well and the way she spat her words..Brilliant gal! you defiantly are something Khushi!!😳

Thanks and Hugs for the pm.🤗

Update soon plz Z😳😛

Edited by Hina69 - 12 years ago

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

yipeee...we r getting an update...

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Congrats on a new thread!!

Oh god!! How disgusting could this shyam be! Sleeping with your own sister! So incestuous! I even shudder to think what would have happened if arnav had not reached on time!

N thank you for not showing khushi as such an ablaa naari m m glad that she delivered him quite a few blows! Fought him hard as she could! N yes even after going through trauma she didnt forget to leave a mark on his face!

Yes khushi has been right! Her bodily marks may fade away, but damage caused to her psyche, to her mind will definitely take time!!

Now will this thing make arnav realise how precious is khushi to him, how he had almost lost her and life is too unpredictable n uncertain is, so better to live as your heart desires. I hope this speeds up his decision making and he agrees to marry her!!

Loved the update!!

Have fun!!

N congratulations!!

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Skiran

@Skiran

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Congrats for the new thread 🥳

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mem1

@mem1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Congratulations on the award!!!! So totally deserving!

And thanks for posting your old stories! At least this time I am better prepared. I will start reading them only on the weekend! But I am super excited about reading them!!!

And thank you so much for linking to the musings!

The update was great as usual... the whole kidnapping scene was exactly like in the show, except for Khushi in place of Arnav. I could totally picture those creepy guys and the creepy place.

You have succeeded in showing Shyam as a super disgusting creep. I wanted to reach into the monitor and stab that guy! Glad Arnav got there on time.

What I really really loved was the fact that Khushi knows Karate. After rescuing her from Shyam the first time, making her capable of defending herself was the most sensible thing for Arnav to do... So proud of him for doing that, and of her for putting it to good use... and of you for thinking about that and making Khushi a capable , smart girl instead of an Abla Nari!!

Loved the update... Can't wait to see the aftermath!

and no, I didn't forget Nani... she is so cool! she had presence of mind when faced with a scary situation and she is thinking along the right lines regarding the Arnav-Khushi angle... Love her!

Edited by mem1 - 12 years ago