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Posted: 12 years ago

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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Posted: 12 years ago

Res...yippeee me 1st 👏 [:D/]

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

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Posted: 12 years ago

A very important Note:-

1. Firstly, I would start with the news that I am leaving on 24th for a short vacation and will return only on the 1st of November which means that I will not be able to update both my stories until the 2nd or 3rd November.

2. Since I will be on mobile data, I will not be able to reply to PMs and scraps or like comments. But I will read the comments of course (I can send a scrap in response to your comment but I will not be able to reply back to your scrap) So before leaving, I will try to answer as many PMs and scraps as I can.

3. If you wish to ask me or speak to me about something during this time frame or even later you can do so on the CC that has been made by a few readers to discuss my stories and other stuffs as well (I can easily comment and quote from phone) The CC is currently on its fourth thread but don't hesitate to drop by as and when you want as the girls over there are quite sweet :) Here is the link -> WLRC#4 Thodi pagal hai but cute hai (If you are wondering what is the full form of WLRC then it is 'Writer Lazy, Readers Crazy' 😆)

4. I recently got to know that I have been awarded the Most Popular Author Award. And the entire credit goes to the readers and those who nominated and voted for me. If it weren't for your immense support, how could I be popular? ~FF Awards Part One!~

The Most Popular Author

lazyleaves (36 votes)

5. A reader has started an initiative to interview authors and she would like to get your contribution for the same. If you have wanted to ask me or any other author any questions, kindly PM mastermagician with your questions. I will let you know whenever that thread will be put up :)

6. A talented member called mem1 writes 'ASR's musings' In this story, ASR speaks about the authors and readers of IF and this time, ASR has decided to speak about me 😳 Here is the link to check what ASR has got to say about me 😳 94491302

7. Finally, here is the surprise that I had promised (Don't forget to check Th#9 ArHi SS: Love Interrupted when I put up a different surprise there 😉)

Click Me for the surprise!

P.S. I have not been to Twitter since a long time. Hope to come back there soon during my long journey :)

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

I completely support Khushi, she was right in hoping that he is scared for life...what Shyam did to her and her mother totally unforgivable.

I am glad she fought back and was brave and courageous...I like this gutsy Khushi, unafraid of her thoughts and actions and with the conviction of carrying them forward, be it her love for Arnav or her wanting to see Shyam suffer...

He is a sick man literally and need medical attention for his issues...to have behaved in such a manner with Khushi and for his devious plans for her scarring her for life possible...he is sick and perverted.

Khushi was lucky an Arnav comes to save her but thinking of the women who have no one ...made me realise how heinous it is.

You have brought to the open so effectively that such things do happen in reality. Brilliant.

I am sure Khushi will be affected by this incident but time they say is the best healer...and along with time I am counting on the family too...

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Congrats on new thread.. wow thread 4🥳

unres

that was superb update

gosh I hate that bloody bloody bas***d shyam😡😡... he is such a disgusting person.. he shouldn't even get a space in hell either... @%^#&🤬🤬.

this bloody shit.. sleep with her sister.. damn she was her real sister and now doing the same to hs niece... asshole!! he crossed all the limits of creepiness!! and bloody her he tore her dress in front of other men... I don't want to talk more about him.. coz when I think/imagine what he did.. my blood starts to boil

I am so proud of naniji.. her awareness today helped khushi...

I loved when khushi fights for herself!!! and gave him some good punches.. she would've handle him but that bas***d!!!😡

arnav was all in a protector phase.. he did save her..

am also thankful to aman too.. he is been a great help... he also helped nani to track shyan... no?

wow.. am proud of khushi!!! she did right by slicing knife on shyam.. and last spitting was awesome

hope khushi will come over this trauma but it will be hard for her.. and also hope she is alright... she is hurt in her head.. and it bled too... arnav take to doctor!!!

continue soon😊

PS: congrats for the award👏.. you really deserved it!!!🤗

PPS: thank you for reposting you old ff/ss.. it means a lot🤗

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Skiran

@Skiran

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Congratulations for winning 'The most popular Author award' 👏
You deserve it⭐️

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Good that Nani is intelligent enough to check with
Khushi first before drawing any conclusions about her love for Arnav.

Shyam is a mean, disgusting, remorseless, awful animal😡
Four people holding Khushi and Shyam ripping her dress
reminded me of the gruesome act done to Nirbhaya in
NewDelhi 😭
The worst part of it is, to get the accused punished
the victim has to go through another round of
hell in the court. Most victims don't dare to complain
such cases to the police to avoid more torture. We
need serious reforms in the judicial system. I want
Shyam to stay alive and be punished by law for
not only the physical but the emotional pain he put her through.

Glad that Arnav came at the right time to save her.
But there will not be always a hero to save a girl
from such people.Hate people who behave like wild animals for a short lived pleasure🤬

I am happy that Khushi is safe with Arnav.. But she
has an injury on her head, hope she would become fit
and fine soon.

Awesome Update 👏
Loved the strong karate fighter Khushi ⭐️

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vgedin

@vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Oh God! Is Shyam really that sick? Or was he just making that up to scar that girl's mind.. ruin even the memories she has left of her childhood

I really liked Devyani in this update.. she considered everything from all ends.. and thought rationally. What a wise old woman.

Will this incident make Arnav rethink Khushi's place in his life? That she is a lot more that just his ward?

And what mark is Khushi talking about? 😲 Though I loved that Khushi fought back.. not a weakling, that girl. She overpowered Shyam and he had to have his men come in and hold her because that man couldn't handle a chit of a girl alone.

YOU REPOSTED MD! LALALALALALA! I AM SO HAPPY

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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Posted: 12 years ago

This was just Awesome. But you did mange to scare me for a while with that scum bag Shyam.

He is one disgusting human. chichi.

I loved the way how Khushi handle the situation. She is strong but Thank god that Aranv came in time.

Was Shyam really Khushi's mother's brother? That was just disgusting what he told her about him and Garima.

So Khushi didn't know about Garima's past?

What will happen now? How will Khushi be emotionally? and Arnav what will he do now after almost losing her, will he change his mind or will Khushi change her mind knowing her mothe'rs past and maybe she will be never safe?

Btw I loved what Khushi did to shyam in the last.👏

You know Lazy, in most of your stories Shyam used be good, even too good so here seeing him like this didn't go well with me😡

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Itu

@simi58

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Posted: 12 years ago

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arre wah.. This update is longer than ur regular MML updates..😃

While he sounded as a protective guardian of HIS little angel, khushi sounded as someone who was unconditionally and irrevocably in love with him..

So nani can be the cupid sometime soon..😃

A special 🤗 for JP

Shyam kamina 😡😡😡😡 he deserves a big tym washing powder nirma dhulai by arnav..😡😡😡

I know i talk/comment a lot but shyam is such a 🤬 ...whatever and however I curse him.. it won't be enough.

It wasn't that difficult you know, him being such a nice man..👏 Even in such situations she talked like these to the leech.. hayeee jiti raho..😃

and then the dhulai of shyam.khushi bitia.. dil khush kar diya.. Let me say for the umpteenth time khushi is a.w.e.s.o.m.e.👍🏼

ok dhulai nehi toh bullet in the back he sahi..😃 and khushi had alrdy beat tht kamina so I am not complaining..

Aman and Arnav.. dono k liye ek ek jhappi.. They are just awesome..😃

and yes even in such intense situation which u wrote awesomely and I was bowled over by the sincerity in arnav's care for khushi.., my heart did had the dhak dhak with tum theek ho..😳

What ? You will not let him die in pain 👍🏼 Exactly my question..😡😡

"If he survives let him know I did this" she bent down and picked up the knife slicing it across shyam's unconscious face from his left eye to his lips, making sure it was deep enough.👏👏👏

what is the parmanent mark khushi was talking about??😕

PS.. this must be one of ur best written updates by far..Right from the way u started with an assurance that nani would be with khushi before slipping into the intense part.. to the way u timed the scenes and also that stupid shyam's disgusting acts..My hands practically iched to wriggle that leech's necks.😡 Brilliantly written..👏👏👏

You totally deserve to be the most popular writer.. If it was on me i would have given you all the awards..😳 COngratulationsss.. where's our treat?

and the surprise.. hayeee..🤗🤗🥳

Edited by simi58 - 12 years ago