*COMPLETED*Th#1 ArHi SS:Hold My Hand

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yaaay!! Another zee production!! 😃

Soo interesting!! I wanna know why did they leave so
Mysteriously and then come back after soo many years
.. (are they vampires?!😲 😆)

What happened to Arnav?! Why did he lose weight!!
Oh my.. My head is going crazy!! Lol!
Hahaha loved his answer to anjali .. Phaha
CROSS BREEDING .. I bet the half flower half human would look beautiful 🤣
Or did he mean he's cross breeding two flowers lol!!
Highly protective about his babies..


'eyes fell on the person clicked in the photograph.' - hmm.. Idea!

Whey! Akki baby is the badass!! The gussa wala!!
& Payal the bubbly crazy idea wale😆

Hahahaha .. Woah!! PayAl wanted to be rejected.. She got it alright lmao!


Shugaar!! Did the raizada family do something to the Guptas .. Uhoh!

Yaaay! Khushi's dhamaka entry! 👏 LOVE IT!! The girl is on fire! I can't wait to find out the reason!! Excited




I have no clue if this song will fit into this story but eh..
I like this song!! 😛


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-oCCnxBos10e[/YOUTUBE] 😆 😆
Edited by .._sonii_.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A new story by you and I am so ready to join the journey ...
This is very interesting different from what you have written but I am excited all the same...bring it on...
Edited by Kalyaani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A SS of only four chapters?? 😃😃
Somehow the idea of you finishing up with all your stories and not writing anymore does not sit well with me ! Keep writing na...

And this story...Yes its different...
Different because the Arnav seems to be different !
And Akash seems to be entirely different !!

They just showed Arnav some photos and he agreed to look into them ! He even saw a photo and found the girl beautiful and immediately said okay to meet her ?? 😲

And AKash ...I have never read about an Akash like this !
And you know what honestly it is a little difficult to imagine this Akash ...

And again a cliff hanger...a suspense... Khushi doesn't even know Arnav Singh Raizada...

Toh he met Payal ?? Should've known the girl wasn't Khushi when you didn't mention any name ! :D

Continue soon ... :)

Edited by asrcraze - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG!!! Another work by you!!! balle balle!!!🥳
The raizada's past seems so mysterious... the way the media was going about them is curiosity in itself!!!
Akash seems like a hot-headed character! He doesnt want to get involved in marriage...is it?
Arnav seems to be a calm and relaxed character...like that!!!
When the raizada had gone to Gupta's house i could feel that the bride was not Kushi! and i was right!
So payal doent want to get married? That surprising...or may be not!
HAHAHAHAHA!!!!ARNAV'S REASON WAS SO DARN HILARIOUS🤣
Is he always that blunt?😆The reaction of everyone was totally worth it!!!😆
So at last!!! enter our feisty KKG to face ASR with her rage!!!
Looks like she has come to give him a little lashing for what he did at the Gupta's place😆
Interesting start!!! You got me hooked!!! There are so many many questions swirling in my head!!!
Im darn curious about the Raizada past!!!
Pls update soon!!!
And yes a brilliant start!!!
Edited by mastermagician - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ahdgs
Ahaaa a new ss
With so much mystry
And akaash and arnav soo diff
when anjali was in convo with akaaash i thought its arnav and i had to go back and read agaib and arnav is so cool reverse gear?
Payal and khushi?
And in the end furious khushi
Waiting already
Edited by Shaaz.gul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...great start.!!!!!!!
i was hopin for a twist...n u provide the most unexpected..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful start
i thought the girl was khushi but no its payal ..so Arnav liked payal but she rejected him ..So she loves some other person not akash ?
nice twist..continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reactions in order of appearance:

Arnav...

what the! akash?! 😵

khushi...

huh? she wants to break the marriage and - elope?? 😲

*facepalm* payal...
and the phone call? akash! akash! akash!

flash of red?! yeh khushi hi hogi!!

finally! khushi aa gayi!

now let it begi-! its over? *sigh*

ive never written a comment like this either! 😆 so surpraaaise! 🤗

Edited by ipkknd_hazel - 12 years ago

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