Arshi FF: That one mistake: Thread 2 - Chapter 12 - Page 8

Originally posted by: vijiasr08

WOW ME SO MUCH EXCITED



ME CRYING TO SEE NEW THREAD



YA THIS TEARS BECAUSE OF HAPPY



HOPE IN THIS THREAD ARSHI BECAME CLOSE SOON



NICE PROLOGUE NIDI



OMG ARSHI MOMENT WOW



AND ARNAV SAID YOU ONLY MINE KUSHI ONLY MINE GREAT



WAITING FOR UPDATE NIDI

OMG viji i love re...u r my soul sister u know that. U always bring smile on my face by seeing your wonderful comments. Thank u nahi bolungi it will be a insult for our relation. I loveee uuu

Originally posted by: Nickysweet

Aj update kar rahi hu😉

sachi plz jaldi update kardo

Originally posted by: kushi81

Wow loved this ff came across this today and loved it plz pm me when u upload the next part😉Plz upload the next part soon😉

Thanks for liking it. I have accepted your request in pm a/c. You will get my furthur pm.

Originally posted by: rupamudra

sachi plz jaldi update kardo

haan baba hain pakka update karungi aj😛 have patience evening tak ruk ja

wait dear i m updating have patience😆😆

intezarrr kab tak hum karenge bhala..sanki when u gonna updt??

Originally posted by: ..Sugar_ArHi..

Gutter Queen is here! 😎

I have read this story in one day. In one go so my comment for d whole story will be here
Nicky u dont get shocked after seeing my comment 😆

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Prologue

When i read d prologue d beginning of d SS. I already fall in love with d story
even u told u just read prologue u will understand d whole scenario
but i wont just point my concentration on prologue only!
Ur prologue is d main thing wic made me to read d story fully without taking break.
Even i ate my kheer half way only 😭 n without my knowledgeable my dog already eat all 😭

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Back to d story n concept

im telling here honestly. I hardly read college or teens love story as i always believes i cant get along with such concept BUT ur story is mature. Mature from d concept
khushi is so innocent. She only wants her parents happiness not anyone else.
She argeeing to get marry to (yaar i forgot her fiance name 😆)
Its okey. I still remember d story.
She went to Mumbai n der she meet sanket. (i remember him though 😛)
Sanket is such a lust. Charactless person. Already drug addicted n still wanted to rape
assholes!
Arnav is like a hero here. Khushi already effecting him n they way he saved her was uff! Filmy style
then dey consummate 😳
she was too participating although committing sin
the love making scenes was too fresh he was gentle n care free
love such passionate love making 😳
but next day everything changed n she blames him 🤢
she was wrong too but still she was putting only on him
my poor ASR
she was departing n der Arnav come. It bought tear wen he saw her going away n he couldnt do anything to stop her
he asolate himself from everyone n prefer making himself busy
arnav n payal shared a great bonding. They are more to biological siblings
khushi's wedding preparation going on n she was finding way to tell her fiance
der was a part i was bitting my nails.
Her fiance abuse her wen she told d truth. I was like u just wait ASR will nvr spare u
but thank god it was just a dream 😆 *over reacting*
Now she is pregnant n she told him that she doesnt want to marry.
Let see how tbis going to lead.

New Prologue

so finally ASR found her or maybe she is at his place
he wanted to woo her back n this time he will win for sure.
He will nvr let her go this time
khushi is really stubborn here. She falling yet she denying

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I guess khushi's fiance n lavanya have dark past. Maybe he was d one hv took her virginity n fool her. MAYBE!

it was awesome n mindblowing concept so does d updates. Nicky from now on ards u hv to give english translation. May hindi is superb just dont underestimate it

Im on first page 🥳 ]hayee guttery queen is there i m at the sky. I will give englist translation in next part..😆 Your comments means a lot to me.😃😃
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CONGRATZ SANKI FOR DA NEW THREAD YAARA...IM SO HAPPY DHANO..LE THODA MUH MITHA KARLE...

I WISH DIS STORY REACH MANY MORE THREAD YAARA...CONGRATZ ONCE AGAIN..


da new prolouge was also amazing nd da banner too..
so now arnav confessed his love to khushi nd was on mission to woo khushi ..now onwards da story gonna b more intresting..bt khushi was nt ready to accept him becoz of lav..bt arnav was hell bend to make her his forever...intresting..
egarly luking forward for da story to be unfold..
update soonwa sanki:)Thank u re thank u so much..muah🤗

Originally posted by: ..Sugar_ArHi..

Superb banner by akorshi

Yah she is superb in banner making..thanks aku😉

Originally posted by: rupamudra

mummyji congrts new thread

wht a prolng

plz plz plz continue soon

Thanks u re 😛

Originally posted by: MrMrsChiping.

congo for new thread and prologue:P

Originally posted by: pancakes

congratz on new thread

Originally posted by: ArshiNmaNervs

loved it

Thanks u so much guys..love u all:)😃😃