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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
kya pro louge hai
mera dil kush ho gaya buaji🤗
maanana padega appko iss umer maun bhi kya dhamakedar pro diya love u for this *muahh*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Congrats for new thread
Nice prologue waiting for update !!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: ARSHIANDI

kya pro louge hai

mera dil kush ho gaya buaji🤗
maanana padega appko iss umer maun bhi kya dhamakedar pro diya love u for this *muahh*

is umar mein ka kya matlab..main kya buddhi ho gayi hu😡😡😡😡 andi tujhe chodungi nahi main...🤢😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Di update dedo!
Nahi to!!!! 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Nickysweet

is umar mein ka kya matlab..main kya buddhi ho gayi hu😡 andi tujhe chodungi nahi main...🤢😡

mummyji andine to aapki beijjati kar di😆
Edited by rupamudra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: ..Sugar_ArHi..

Gutter Queen is here! 😎

I have read this story in one day. In one go so my comment for d whole story will be here
Nicky u dont get shocked after seeing my comment 😆

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Prologue

When i read d prologue d beginning of d SS. I already fall in love with d story
even u told u just read prologue u will understand d whole scenario
but i wont just point my concentration on prologue only!
Ur prologue is d main thing wic made me to read d story fully without taking break.
Even i ate my kheer half way only 😭 n without my knowledgeable my dog already eat all 😭

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Back to d story n concept

im telling here honestly. I hardly read college or teens love story as i always believes i cant get along with such concept BUT ur story is mature. Mature from d concept
khushi is so innocent. She only wants her parents happiness not anyone else.
She argeeing to get marry to (yaar i forgot her fiance name 😆)
Its okey. I still remember d story.
She went to Mumbai n der she meet sanket. (i remember him though 😛)
Sanket is such a lust. Charactless person. Already drug addicted n still wanted to rape
assholes!
Arnav is like a hero here. Khushi already effecting him n they way he saved her was uff! Filmy style
then dey consummate 😳
she was too participating although committing sin
the love making scenes was too fresh he was gentle n care free
love such passionate love making 😳
but next day everything changed n she blames him 🤢
she was wrong too but still she was putting only on him
my poor ASR
she was departing n der Arnav come. It bought tear wen he saw her going away n he couldnt do anything to stop her
he asolate himself from everyone n prefer making himself busy
arnav n payal shared a great bonding. They are more to biological siblings
khushi's wedding preparation going on n she was finding way to tell her fiance
der was a part i was bitting my nails.
Her fiance abuse her wen she told d truth. I was like u just wait ASR will nvr spare u
but thank god it was just a dream 😆 *over reacting*
Now she is pregnant n she told him that she doesnt want to marry.
Let see how tbis going to lead.

New Prologue

so finally ASR found her or maybe she is at his place
he wanted to woo her back n this time he will win for sure.
He will nvr let her go this time
khushi is really stubborn here. She falling yet she denying

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I guess khushi's fiance n lavanya have dark past. Maybe he was d one hv took her virginity n fool her. MAYBE!

it was awesome n mindblowing concept so does d updates. Nicky from now on ards u hv to give english translation. May hindi is superb just dont underestimate it

Im on first page 🥳

pavi ne to pua eassy hi likha di😲
Edited by rupamudra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
congrats 4 new thread dear...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
congrats on new thread

loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: rupamudra

mummyji andine to aapki beijjati kar di😆

Tu bhkuch kaam nahi hain😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: rupamudra

pavi ne to pua eassy hi likha di😲

pua likha matlab tu bhi na kuch bhi likhti hain kuch samajta hi nahi😆😆

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